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  • Dancing.With.Myself

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    @ Abmora01
    hahahahaha. That would be crazy.
    Thanks for commenting! I'm about to start working on the next chapter now, so you'll find out soon!
    February 19th, 2015 at 11:40am
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    maybe she was a french stripper:) jk jk
    February 19th, 2015 at 08:45am
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    @ Abmora01
    Just gotta have a little faith. And Apolline is a strong, determined girl. I think she can really help him.
    Thanks for commenting! I hope you're enjoying it so far. Any suggestions or constructive criticism is more than welcome!
    February 19th, 2015 at 06:22am
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    i hope he really tries to get clean
    February 19th, 2015 at 05:45am
  • Dancing.With.Myself

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    Here's hoping! And, we're getting there, I promise. I just decided to take it a little slower with this story.
    Thanks for commenting!!!
    February 3rd, 2015 at 08:49am
  • Abmora01

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    i hope his truthful:P
    i cant wait to see their love unfold
    February 3rd, 2015 at 04:50am
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    i hope his truthful:P
    i cant wait to see their love unfold
    February 3rd, 2015 at 04:50am
  • Dancing.With.Myself

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    *keep reading and see

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    February 2nd, 2015 at 07:56pm
  • Dancing.With.Myself

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    *keep reading and see

    @ Abmora01
    February 2nd, 2015 at 07:56pm
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    @ Abmora01
    thank you for commenting! Keep breathing and see ;-)
    I'll try to update as soon as possible! thank you for reading and I really hope you're enjoying it so far
    February 2nd, 2015 at 07:55pm
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    i wonder what going to happen
    February 2nd, 2015 at 02:32pm
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    @ Forgetful-Insomniacs
    Wow, thank you! That means a lot!
    December 22nd, 2014 at 01:44am
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    @ Dancing.With.Myself
    I'm quite positive you will this is really eye opening it's I honestly don't know how describe it
    December 21st, 2014 at 10:12pm
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    @ Forgetful-Insomniacs
    Hahaha. You straight up gave me a heart attack! Like, my worst fears realized kind of heart attack. Hahaha. That was hilarious. Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you like it. I hope I can continue to keep you intrigued.
    December 21st, 2014 at 07:10am
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    The story sucks and the plot lines implausible I'm just kidding it's quite nice really it's got a certain edge to it and though I don't know what it is about this story but I was extremely intrigued after the first paragraph so in my opinion you're doing great
    December 20th, 2014 at 10:29pm
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    @ Abmora01
    No, thank you! No one comments anymore so it means a lot that you took the time!
    December 19th, 2014 at 07:38am
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    @ Dancing.With.Myself aww thankyou
    December 19th, 2014 at 04:01am
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    @ Abmora01I don't understand either. He's amazing. And so hot. Hahah. I will update soon! Thanks for commenting! And if you want to, I have a finished Bruno story as well that you can read. Lots of chapters to fulfill that Bruno craving. Haha.
    December 19th, 2014 at 01:43am
  • Abmora01

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    please continue, their isn't really any Bruno mars stories which i don't understand since he is amazing so i cant wait to read more
    December 18th, 2014 at 07:02pm
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    @ bullets are hailing.
    Yay! My gift swap! Hahah.
    This was an awesome gift. I'm so glad you like it! Great comment. One of the best I've gotten in a while. I have to admit, I was feeling a little self conscious about this story but now I'm much more confident. I will certainly take your advice, as well. I can definitely see where the lack of spacing might make it tough to read. Thanks so much and happy holidays!!
    December 16th, 2014 at 05:52am