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  • anogete

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    @ alwaysadreamer - I think you'll get your date/kiss wish really soon. Promise!

    @ Thatmom - Yes! Dudley Do Right is totally Paul. What a guy...
    January 23rd, 2015 at 01:40am
  • alwaysadreamer

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    Still screaming about them not dating kissing all of that fun stuff
    January 23rd, 2015 at 01:01am
  • Thatmom

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    Hanging a u-ey to make sure she was safe. Dudley Do Right aka Paul Martin couldn't pass up the possibility of a damsel in distress!!!
    January 22nd, 2015 at 04:48pm
  • anogete

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    @ ace merrill. - Yeah, I totally agree that most everyone (especially the cities those players play(ed) in) know the big names in hockey. Other guys like Paul Martin are probably only known by big hockey fans or fans of that particular team. I felt like it was realistic that if she doesn't care about hockey that she wouldn't know Paul even if that made him sad. Trust, she'll make him real happy later. ;-) Also, I'm so glad you mentioned the layout. It looks okay on my screen, but if it's funky on your screen please do let me know. I fiddled with it a bit this morning. Hopefully I didn't make it worse! Let me know.

    @ Soullust - She'll eventually meet Sid and not give him a second glance because, uh hello, PAUL and all his sexiness.
    January 22nd, 2015 at 01:25pm
  • She Said Poptarts

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    They're so cute, I can't handle this.
    Crazy

    BECAUSE I THINK YOU'RE CUTE !! STOP IT MARTIN, OGMAJDLA

    THEY'RE MOVING FORWARD, EVEN THOUGH IT'S STILL SLOW. I loved it when he did a U-ey and turned around to check up on her. And her bringing him his drink even though he didn't look like he wanted something. tehe

    I felt bad for him when he felt hurt that she would recognize Sid. But like... everyone knows who he is, as well as Gretzky and Gordie Howe. It was definitely realistic by her not knowing anything about hockey but knowing who has big fame.

    btw, would it be a douche move to ask if you can make the width of the layout smaller, and make the text bigger?
    January 22nd, 2015 at 06:51am
  • Soullust

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    I really like that you put in the thing about Sid. It humanized the professor even more!
    January 22nd, 2015 at 12:53am
  • anogete

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    @ alwaysadreamer - Rest assured that there's gonna be some action in the next three chapters or so. Maybe a date. Maybe a kiss. Maybe both. Good things come to those who wait. :-)
    January 22nd, 2015 at 12:09am
  • alwaysadreamer

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    DATE KISS FUCK IDK DO SOMETHING ALREADY.
    hi. I'm impatient this isn't fair.
    January 21st, 2015 at 07:33am
  • anogete

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    @ midnightmssuki - I was totally going for adorable. In short order he is going to be adorable and super sweet. And all of you will get a toothache.

    @ Thatmom - I LOVED writing him has a dork that has no idea how to act around a girl because she's thrown him for a loop.

    @ mstaffa7 - Haha! He has! But he might get a lap dance out of it down the line once he gets her alone. Just sayin'....
    January 21st, 2015 at 03:27am
  • midnightmssuki

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    That was adorable! And maybe adorable wasn't your aim but stumbling over his words and totally dumbfounded Paul Martin is super adorable in my book. Great two chapters. This is easily becoming my favorite story on mibba.
    January 21st, 2015 at 02:59am
  • Thatmom

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    OMG!!! Paul stumbling and fumbling with his words was sooo adorkable!!!! It had me chuckling the entire time!!!!
    January 21st, 2015 at 02:01am
  • mstaffa7

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    Poor straight laced Paul has fell for a pole dancer. That's awesome. Everyone needs a little spice in their life!
    January 21st, 2015 at 01:49am
  • anogete

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    @ With_a_freaking_y - Yay! So glad you like it and so glad you're looking forward to a Paul Martin fic. I thought I was just a weirdo with my crush on him, but it sounds like a lot of ladies have an appreciation for him. I don't think I'm capable of writer a stripper. Maybe when I run out of ideas then I'll do that just to be shocking. :-)

    @ midnightmssuki - Ha! Sorry (not sorry) that I kept you from housework. Paul Martin fics are waaaay more important than that stuff. Cam is a bit unique from the other girls because she's been married and she wants a family. Even though she is throwing herself into her work like some of the other girls I've written, a huge part of her wants a family to take some of her attention away from it. Hopefully that will come across in later chapters after Paul gets to know her.
    January 21st, 2015 at 01:33am
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    Okay, so I read half your stories and I have fallen head over heels for all of them. Even though this has five chapters in it, I am already in love. Paul does not get enough credit! I freaking love him! THANK YOU FOR WRITING A FIC ABOUT HIM!! I needed this in my life and didn't even know it!!

    I truthfully thought she was gonna be a secret stripper. THANK YOU (again) for not making her a secret stripper and just a dancer instructor with a wild side to her. More class!

    Keep up the excellent writing!!
    January 21st, 2015 at 01:21am
  • midnightmssuki

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    Dreamy sighs!!

    I decided to put off my house work and read instead. I was of course not disappointed. As Paul is the one and only flightless bird I will own up to loving unabashedly, I of course LOVE this. And I adore Cam and we're three chapters in. There is just something about her; I'm sure she will be my favorite of the OFC you've written before all is said and done.
    January 20th, 2015 at 11:48pm
  • anogete

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    @ bostongirl33 - Cam is a little different. I think she's got a couple surprises up her sleeve.

    @ Soullust - Paulie is like the best bf material EVER.

    @ musiclovr101 - I couldn't help myself! He just looks like such hipster-ish guy sometimes. He'll definitely be opening up and Cam will definitely be teaching him more things than what good music sounds like.
    January 20th, 2015 at 03:06am
  • bostongirl33

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    I'm officially intrigued! Cam seems different than anyone else you've written and I can't wait to learn more about her. And who doesn't love Paul Martin?? Sweet and more mature than most but I'm looking forward to seeing how he opens up. ;)

    So glad you're back!
    January 20th, 2015 at 02:47am
  • Soullust

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    I love me some Paul Martin! I can not wait to read more!
    January 20th, 2015 at 02:29am
  • musiclovr101

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    So good! I love Paul and you've constructed him into a hipster / professor which I love and I can't wait for more!!!
    January 20th, 2015 at 02:00am
  • anogete

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    @ mstaffa7 - You are correct; she isn't going to make it another ten months without a date. ;-)

    @ Thatmom - Yes! She's just that little bit of wild that Paul needs in his life.

    @ caspud - Thanks! I'll be posting more every day hopefully.
    January 20th, 2015 at 01:53am