All out and Over - Comments

@ TheGoodMadame
In the words of our great Madame, "the show must go on," even if the act has unfortunately ended.

@ Alex Moore.

It seems like the ending will be a good one though. It's always hard to stop a story that you really love and have devoted so much time to but all good things must eventually have a finale.

@ TheGoodMadame
The ending is really near now, so I am curious how you will find it. Its great and sad at the same time for us. Thanks again for sticking around and reading!

This was great!
Getting to see a bit more to The Queen of Hearts was a wonderful teaser. I love how sadistic she is and I am getting excited for that final act.

That's the best part! Haha, Mallory is a snake through and through, but I love her.

That's the best part! Haha, Mallory is a snake through and through, but I love her.

@ TheGoodMadame
She surely is naïve, and Mallory is way too cunning.

@ TheGoodMadame
She surely is naïve, and Mallory is way too cunning.

@ Alex Moore.

Cara is a great thought out and written character, but her personality is not one I would love to hang around. The young firecracker is a bit too naive for my tastes haha.

Awwwh thanks! I'll be sticking around for a while!

@ TheGoodMadame
Awe poor Cara haha, dont you like my firecracker? Nikki and I are truly blessed with readers like you!

I'm super hoping that Cara gets taken away. I love Xavier's character and Feddy! I can't wait to see what happens to them both!

@ Nikki Richardson

That does sound like something I'd be mega into. I

Let me know whenever that's up and I'll head over to read it.

It's a post apocalyptic story following a soldier and a rebel on a journey through the lands, bug they only have a certain amount of time and both characters are stubborn and smart. And there is even an ex that resembles Malory's personality. @ TheGoodMadame

@ Alex Moore.

I'll go check them out as soon as I can! I always love to read new things when I can.

@ Nikki Richardson

Oooh, tell me more, what's it about?

@ TheGoodMadame
I just want to say, you are going to be a huge fan of Godless & Free when we get it posted.

@ TheGoodMadame
Maybe check out our other cowrite: underestimate me, but I believe you commented on that too haha. I do have two two shots called; Mal de mere and Carolina I just paint. Just in between all-out chapters haha

@ Alex Moore.

I rarely find stories that I love as much as this one!

As long as you keep writing I'll keep reading, and oh man I can't wait for that finale!

@ TheGoodMadame
You have become such a great reader to have and I can't quite understand why we deserve such a great reader haha, but none the less, keep reading and commenting. It brightens up my days. Storywise; we're definitely heading to the great finale and I am already stoked to see your reaction to it all!

Oooh, I just got done reading the new chapter and I'm curious how it will all play out. Cara seems to be getting cold feet and wants to back out, but I don't see Malory allowing that. I can't wait to see what's next.

@ TheGoodMadame

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@ Nikki Richardson

Haha, I'm glad the fortuneteller approves.

I'm excited for the ending and can't wait until you guys update it!

Well if you have a few hours of patience I will upload the next chapter for you!