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Okay so I think Malory is in the lead for my favorite character. She seems so dangerous! I liked the little flashback into her backstory. It makes me wonder just what her intentions are with Cara.

The fact that they seem like really close friends, mixed with Malory's thoughts is definitely one of my favorite things about this so far.

I kind of think that Malory is grooming Cara to kill Dmitri. It certainly seems that way.

Keep updating this guys! It's fantastic.

Thank you! Stay tuned for more :) @ darylismyhomeboy

This is amazing

This is amazing

@ Michael Westen
Did I tell you how amazing you are?

I'm so glad you like this!! Cara is a wild fire for sure, but i cannot wait for you to meet Malory @ Michael Westen

Ohh. This is different than anything you've written before! It's so great! It's spicy! It has so much potential, I seriously can't wait to see where you two take this.

My favorite line for sure would be the two of these together "Dmitri might not have a fire act but he was playing with fire. He was playing with her and she was as blazing as they got."

Seriously though all the detail and the planning and just everything about this is fantastic. Update this soon!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
First commenter! Thank you so much! It was amazingly fun to write!

Already intrigued! I can't wait to watch this plot unfold!