Stay With Me a While - Comments

This was such a nice break from moving. I'm such a sucker for happy endings too so I loved this. I seriously can't wait to read your next story. Addiction is a slight understatement for what I feel about your writing. It's great, really. This story and all the ones I've read thus far. :)

I'm not entirely sure how to get through my days without an update from you! Hope you've got something else in the pipe line! One of my absolute favourite writers on here :)

Loved how this ended with him making a decision that was just right for him and made him happy. I just loved the two of them. Perfection. As always.

I cant believe he actually left hockey for her - yah, I know, it wasnt exactly FOR HER. But it was!!!

And the way he told her he loved her....yes, that WAS romantic. For someone to lay his feelings out for all to see - and not know if they will be returned - well, that is a real leap of faith. Danny took a huge risk for Amanda - but he was desperate. He needed her to know.

While I am so glad that they finally were able to confront their true feelings and be together, it makes me sad that the journey (Journey - there has got to be a song there!!!) is now over. But I guess that is the mark of a good story. You leave them wanting more - and you certainly have.

Bravo - I cant wait to see what you come up with next.

Love this story! Great ending

Perfect ending!

LOVED THE ENDING! and the soundtrack is the real MVP! I'm so excited to listen to it all day today!!! amazing yet again!! i can't wait for your next story!!!

Loved this story!

Loved the story and sad to see it end...im glad for the happy ending :)

loved this story!

I was wondering how you were going to pull it all together in the end, and just like you do every time you hit it out of the park. Love the ending!! And can I just said that if ever given the chance, I would love to raid your iTunes. Some of your playlists are truly the only thing I listen to in my car or even on a run. Your taste in music is amazing.

GREAT ENDING!!! I LOVED IT!!!!

I'm speechless. Give me a few days to see if I can put my bursting happy emotions into words.

LOVED IT! Such a perfect ending to a great story!!

It's so perfect that I'm left without words. As always, amazing storytelling and equally amazing characters. I wish it never ended but I'll have to be happy to read it over and over again.

@ blkngld87 - That is such a great song! I'm super glad you're enjoying the soundtrack. :-)

@ paper planes_ - They will, trust me!

@ Thatmom - Here, let me glue your hear back together with two happy chapters.

@ Dallas. - I think a little sadness and trouble makes the happiness at the end all the much more satisfying.

@ moe16 - I always promise a happy ending. :-)

@ LoveGame13 - It does! See! I just posted it.

@ hockeygirl96 - I'll fix it and then you'll say YESSSS.

@ soupy - Thank you for the lovely comment about the maturity of these two. They're both getting older and they're ready to settle down, whether they know it or not.

Tupelo honey is my favorite I can't wait for the playlist! You always pick such awesome music

this chapter broke my heart, i hope they end up together

That sound is my heart shattering into tiny little pieces, for both of them. Great soulful, emotional chapter.

I know you'll give them (and us) a happy ending, but it doesn't stop my heart from cracking a little bit while reading this. Another great chapter!

I know you'll give them (and us) a happy ending, but it doesn't stop my heart from cracking a little bit while reading this. Another great chapter!