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  • hrvatka; candy.

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    It's okay if you guys have forgotten me. I understand.
    February 13th, 2007 at 04:26am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Thank you both for taking the time to read my story. And yes Bloodraine that is an error. I'll fix it. XD No rush at all, school always comes first. *Nods* I should have a new chapter by the end of this week.
    January 30th, 2007 at 10:27pm
  • Matt Smith

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    Ok, I'm up to chapter 11 now.
    I promised I'd read it all, and I will, but I've been really tied down with schoolwork. xD

    I think what really makes a story is a plot, and this plot is certainly explosive enough to carry the story off. I noticed one error (or at least what I think was an error)

    From chapter 9;
    It stood four stories high and resembled and jail.
    Maybe just a jail?

    I liked Jordan's parents very much. Not the characters themselves, but the way they were described and the way the acted, which I thought was really good. I'll read more soon and I think those drawings are cute.

    -Meg
    January 30th, 2007 at 07:37pm
  • helen

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    I just wanted to let you know that I've read the first 9 chapters on Saturday, so I still have some more to read before I comment. Momentarily I'm busy with school and exams, but I hope I'll read it by tomorrow evening. That's all for now.
    January 30th, 2007 at 07:09pm
  • amandamarjory

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    More!
    it's amazing =D
    January 28th, 2007 at 07:45am
  • Mr. Fahrenheit

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    Ah, this is so wonderful. And YAY! You put the banner thingy up! Yay!
    January 26th, 2007 at 10:09pm
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Update by tomorrow. Sorry, I didn't last night but I had to clean the kitchen. >.<
    January 22nd, 2007 at 04:16am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    I love you guys... Update tonight!
    January 20th, 2007 at 10:12pm
  • princess.

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    Love it.:)
    January 20th, 2007 at 01:23am
  • chaos

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    Hey, that's almost like I imagined them. xD

    Nice drawings. :)
    January 19th, 2007 at 09:00pm
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    I always pictured Bianca with a darker skin color.. But you have to write more.
    And the pictures are really good. =D
    She is darker but we didn't color her in. Lol... She's black and spanish. But I think that that was already mentioned in the story... *Shrugs*
    January 19th, 2007 at 03:16am
  • amandamarjory

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    I always pictured Bianca with a darker skin color.. But you have to write more.
    And the pictures are really good. =D
    January 19th, 2007 at 02:52am
  • Phil Collins.

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    Why is Jordan so horny? Why can't Bianca make up her mind? Why is she with Shawn? Why is Bianca silly?
    January 19th, 2007 at 12:57am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    My friend Angela is an amazing artist. She helped me write the first few chapters and these are our interpretations of Jordan and Bianca.

    LOOK AT THESE FOR A MENTAL PICTURE!

    Jordan and Bianca
    Jordan and Bianca 2
    Jordan
    Bianca

    What do you guys think?
    January 18th, 2007 at 10:47pm
  • chaos

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    Nice story! ;)

    But Jordans tragic death in the end would be great. >=D
    January 17th, 2007 at 06:02pm
  • amandamarjory

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    Eeep! You must write more!
    January 16th, 2007 at 06:47am
  • Mikey'sWay

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    AH! i love the new update!
    Poor Jordan..but then again, she deserves it
    January 16th, 2007 at 12:14am
  • Phil Collins.

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    It is called a clue. Jordan needs to get one. No How sad...
    January 15th, 2007 at 11:13pm
  • amandamarjory

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    More!
    January 12th, 2007 at 02:38am
  • Phil Collins.

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    It's unfortunate that Jordan chose cocaine over Bianca...Cry...She is stupid.
    January 12th, 2007 at 01:15am
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