January 12th, 2007 at 12:50am
This story is amazing!
I have wanted to read a girl story for like...ever.
It's truely amazing
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January 7th, 2007 at 08:36am
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I love it! You have to write more!January 7th, 2007 at 06:10am
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^Ok. Can you give me some examples because I thought I was doing that...
Btw- If anyone sees any spelling or grammar errors, plz tell me.January 2nd, 2007 at 05:25pm -
I read chapters 1-3 just now and I plan on reading the rest.
Which is weird, I don't usually read other people's stories, least of all ones that are even vaguely slashy. xD
One minor note I'd make is of the dialogue. Begin a new paragraph/line with every change of speaker. Other than that, it seems like a really interesting plot and I'm looking forward to reading the rest. (:January 2nd, 2007 at 03:10am -
Hey I'm on here now as well and don't you dare ever think of taking this down cause I love ya and this story so more when ya can please :DJanuary 2nd, 2007 at 02:38am
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Yay! Alright... One reader is all I need to carry on. I'll update soon.December 29th, 2006 at 09:02pm
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and, you MUST MUST carry on with it.
PLease...December 28th, 2006 at 10:28pm -
Ah, I absoluty love this story. I feel like I know how the charcters feel. Sorry that sounds werid but it's true.December 28th, 2006 at 10:24pm
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Fine... December 28th, 2006 at 09:11pm -
This blows... No one wants to even give my story a chance. You know, I thought this site would be different from INO. I thought that there would be more opened minded people who want to read something other than boysex and Frerard (not that there's anything wrong with that at all 'cause I read a few of those stories
) I just wish that people would be more open-minded and not rule out a story just because their fav bands member isn't in it. Ok... I'm done ranting. Btw- If I don't get any comments soon. I'm just gonna take it down because it'll just be useless and taking up space. December 27th, 2006 at 07:47am -
You know... Just because my story is not about MCR or Greenday doesn't mean it sucks. Geeze.December 27th, 2006 at 03:27am
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Summary- When moving, Bianca comes across pictures that bring back old memories. She tells her husband the story of her sad past. Her love with another woman. Drugs, violence, sex, and death haunt her past. In the end, after telling her daunting tale of love and lost, she realizes that she is still not over it. But what can she do but confront her past?
Plz read it guys. I'd really appreciate it.December 27th, 2006 at 02:34am
but twas a very awesome update
more when ever you have the time pwease