Hell Bound - Comments

How could you do this to me?!?! I need to know what happens next!

Just kidding, but seriously. What a great story. It took me awhile, but I literally just finished it and I'm dying to know what happens next. It was a real roller coaster right there at the end. You had me like "Oh, everything's okay. Oh, no, everything's gone to hell! Oh, wait, it's okay again. Aw crap, it was just a dream and now it's crappy again." Phenomenal writing. Can't wait for the sequel!

I read the first story awhile ago and then I went to watch Civil War and I was instantly like BUCKY BUCKY BUCKY! This made me remember your story and how much i loved the first one so just yesterday i started re-reading the first one and now i get to read the sequel and I am so excited!!!

After watching civil war, I was on a Bucky bender and found this story and omg was just drawn to it. Read the first one and this one in 2 days. Love your writing style. And I love Bucky.

Now I can't wait for the next story. Hope they get out of there soon! But doesn't jo still have the panic bracelet from stark? Can't he track her? Unless she doesn't. But still, hope someone saves them soon!

OH MY GOOOOOOODDD
MY GIRL IS SCARING PEOPLE!!! SLAY WANDA SLAY!!!!

OOHHH NOOOOOOOOO MY GIRL IS GETTING HURT :( IM SO SORRY JO!!!! DONT GIVE UP GIRL. BE STRONG

I can tell that the sequel for this one is going to be hard for me.
The epilogue was awesome, I saw everything, cristal clear in my head. Amazing as always, T.

damn you had me so confused there for a second! but then, scarlett witch?
grrr, cliffhanger.. I really "hate" when ppl do that to me though I love doing it myself with my own stories

gonna be waiting for the next part of Jo and Bucky's story

Damn cliffhangers!

Absolutely loved it though!

Looking forward to the next part! Can not wait! :D

(Sorry for all the exclamation points, I needed to get my point across haha)

So, since I'm off work due to pulled back muscle, I finally had time to read all of this in one sitting.

And oh my sweet lord, you did not disappoint. I love everything about this story. It's so different from the previous version, but in the best way possible.

Thank you so much for writing this, and I'm already dying to read the next part.

(PS, isn't Civil War amazing?)

(PPS sorry to read about your brother, and I hope he's on the mend xx)

oh wow, so before Hydra, she knew about her real mother and she knew a lot about Bucky..
makes me wonder why her mom knew so much about him and who he used to be..

YAY Civil War!!

"I taught you how to fight. And you were—spectacular, Johanna. You were lethal.”

HE WAS RIGHT!! OMG SHE WAS GOOD.
so she knew waaay more than we expected. She was not there as a victim. Oh, no! my girl was there to slay!!! so tough, so brave. When she said that he wanted to set him free, she's talking about her father, right? (dude, this makes the present chapters hurt even more. Poor guy. All that history with her, and she doesn't remember either) same as the Steve part, I was confused for like a second, thinking about the Cap2 scene, where Steve calls him by his name. But this memory is from before that, so, now i get it. (do i?)

Ooooooh i really dont want this to end. I enjoy it too much. So much action, and romance, and sadness, and pain, and BUCKYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. I should have never rented Iron Man 1 (God, I feel old... ) my soul was doomed the minute I paid.

TOMORROW CIVIL WARRRRR
Im so excited that you're finanlly going to see it. But then... kjjjjjj

and now I wait.

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Way to just totally break my heart on the morning of my birthday (and also Star Wars day)
No one was there to catch her, and now she's broken
and and.. yeah.. i'm just gonna go sit in a corner and cry for a little bit

I agree. I had to read them twice to catch the little details, like that they were on a second floor and that Jo was on top of a car, not in a moving car at the beginning of this one. Details.

“I can’t,” he said. He still looked concerned, but there was another emotion I could see now. Not concern or anger, desperation. “They’re going to break you again.”

Oooooooh, Indy. Why? why do you enjoy so much making me suffer? I was on the edge of my seat for the whole chapter.

“They will kill the both of you if you don’t.”

“I don’t care.” He looked back at Russell.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

“Sokovia,” Russell whispered."

Wanda, I whispered back.

“Your notebook,” I said. “I wrote something.”

“I know,” he told me. “I saw it. I was right.”

“Yeah, you were.”

“I meant what I said to him.”

“I know.”

JUST SAY THE FUCKING WORDS TO EACH OTHER!!!! AHGGGG

“I won’t fight you,”

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

“You don’t have a plan, do you?” I whispered through clenched teeth. “You have no idea how to get me out of this.”

Like father like daughter? Jesus Chrisy, never trust them again with a back up plan.

"I always did," I told him.

And now its just the two of them...
I don't want to read the last chapter. I just don't. There's nothing after that, no coming back. I dont want to deal with whatever you stone cold heart created. Kjjjjj. My poor Jo, my poor Bucky. Fuck everything. Tony, take Graham to the beach or something, the kid needs vacations.

Okay, so firstly, it's been a good few years since I even hopped onto my account, but I had this sudden urge to because I wanted something to read and I come across this.
Literally read the prequel and everything up to date in 3-4 hours.
I. Could. Not. Stop.
So please, for the love of Bucky, please don't stop writing.

*sighs* Bucky
that is all

Oh, man. Memories.
This flashbacks are going to kill me if the story fails to do so.
Poor Jo. My girl has suffer so much just because of who she is. I need to know what's so special about her. There has to be something and I need to know what it is.

“It is my arm,” he said.

Confused Bucky always makes me sad.

“Really? Is it like a prosthetic?”

I thinks this is the closer to "old Jo" that we have ever been. Like, this question feels so inocent. The curiosity over the arm and the technology behind it... it's cold. She feels so young and inocent and to know that after that she's going to be different, a little colder, a little broken...

“I don’t want to torture you.”

Buckyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

“That’s not what I meant.”

what did he mean?
WHAT DID HE MEAN?!!!!

“What’s your name?” I repeated before he could get too far.

“I don’t know,” he admitted.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

I can't believe that we are so close to the end.

I-I-I.. wait whaat??!!
That's.. I.. Uhm...
TONY BETTER COME FLYING TO CATCH HER OR STEVE BETTER BE DOWN THERE!! I hate hydra
And Bucky's like

Can't wait for the next chapter now, i'm freaking out here........

Oooh, just gotta tell ya somethin'... Do you know the funko pop figures?? Yesterday I ordered Bucky and Steve- as a birthday present to myself

"And then he pushed me."

WHAAAAAAT?!?!!!!

Awe yay, my first choice was right, they went to Russel, to dad Gosh you totally made me feel sorry for him... that he didn't have claim over her because he got to have her for a little over 2 hours, and all the regrets he's got conserning her.. kinda wanted to give him a hug..
And yeah, totally understand why he pulled a gun on Bucky BUT HE GOT HIM TO SAY THAT HE LOVES JO!! wooohoo!!

She says things like that all the time..
maaaaaaaaaaaaan I just love this story.. *sigh* it got such a nice flow to it, not like some other that makes you groan out loud because it's just feels choppy or whatever- if that makes sense at all??

sooooo, will they be going to steve or tony next?
kinda hope for steve, because I want him and bucky to meet

i've told ya this before I think, i'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooo jealous of you Chris and Seb sandwich.. I really do hate that I live in frickin' sweden where we never have things like that with huge stars that you can meet and have pictures with

This is the last decent comment you'll get from me. Im going to see Civil War tomorrow. After that, I'll probably be crying for days.

Big, powerful update. BIG!

“Who the hell are you?”

Poor Graham. Everybody loves to intimidate him!!!

“Known me a whole hell of a long time. Haven’t you, Captain?”

Hehehe that's my girl. Never forgive, never forget.

“Sorry, Hayes. But I think your life might be more important in this case.”

GIVE THE GIRL SOME ANSWERS, DAMN IT!!

“Get the kid to take her to Stark or transfer her to Rogers.”

That was a big fat "stay away from her too" :( you're breaking my heart already. The "love but can be together theme" has always been my weakness.

“I don’t need anything,” Bucky insisted without moving.

Im going to be covered in blood again anyway? is that it?!

“I think I’m allowed as many damn questions as I want.”

YES! DESTROY THEM, GIRL! YOU DESERVE TO KNOW!!

“You were mine for a whole wonderful two and a half hours. That’s it. I have no claim.”

Oh my god :C OH MY GOD

"I taught you how to fight. And you were—spectacular, Johanna. You were lethal.”

Wow.

It only took 3 days for them to destroy her :C my poor girl.

"Except that they’d torn apart your shoulder, and you coughed up water for days.” I felt Bucky freeze, and I pinched my eyes shut."

NO!

“You know what they want me for, don’t you?” I asked him.
“Yes. But there’s no more time for talking. You need to run. And fast. And never look back.”

One day, one day this people will learn that keeping secrets get more people killed than guns. She deserves to know!! damn it, I DESERVE TO KNOW!!

"“Do you love her?” Russell asked. Bucky paused by the door. I heard Russell pull out a drawer, and Bucky turned his head. He heard the gun before I did."

DIOS MIO, this was intense. first time being a dad and he's already threatening the boyfriend.

"I do" "I love her"

Im going to cry. Worst scenario for her to listen to this, but finally!!!!

“They’ll kill all the people she loves to get to her. They always do. And she’ll beg you to let her go. And you’re going to let her go BECAUSE you love her. You’ll spend the rest of your miserable life regretting it.”

This sounds like a possible plot for the sequel.

Oh my god. Again. Still not enough answers, but Im starting to believe that I won't get them soon. I like the update, though. Weird encounter, some relevations we already knew, but still... uffff

Bucky :(

That's all...
See you in the other side.

Awe yay they went back for Graham!!
She's bleeding everywhere..
Someplace safe..
Well part of me do hope that it's going to be to someone, like Russel, Steve or Tony..
Where is Tony btw? He should be on his way, right? Because Jarvis couldn't have missed that someone shot at the car
Though he might have a ways to go, i'm guessing, even if he can fly