Hell Bound - Comments

How many chapters left?!
This one was like the old version too, but with more funny quotes hehehe so I like it. Im glad they went back for Graham. He ask a lot os questions that Jo doesn't sometimes, so maybe we'll get more answers with him by our side.

Go Graham!

Quote of the day

“I’ve seen you naked,” I reminded him. “Multiple times. It wasn’t a matter of modesty.”

Hahaha some action!! this was good. Im glad you kept the lines I liked about the old version.
So... Jo... you were kidnapped and your only concern was to make sure Graham was okay? why? why do you enjoy so much making me feel nervous? Ugh
I'm pretty sure bucky feels the same way as I do. Clearly that guy is not sleeping. He's always ready to save her <3
Cute boy
And now. I have no idea what to expect from this finale, so Im really scared and sad and scared and I want to read it, but then forget it so I dont have to deal with the consequences (just like with civil war)

AND now Bucky can totally say: "I told you so!!"
aawe she had to knock Graham out..
Bet Tony now knows that something went down, and how will she explain how she got out of that situation without telling them that it was Bucky?

hahah well of course Tony would stick his nose in her business and get her a job
awe Bucky dropped off a new mirror and he found the thing the key was for.. and why make it easy for her? Of course the letters were in code

BTW I totally just booked tickets to go and see CIVIL WAR now on wednesday!!! WOOOOHOO!

a big Awwwwww for this chapter. All sweet words, and a cute goodbye that wasn't supposed to be a goodbye. I have to say, even when there was a lot of cute stuff, the "home" part was my favorite.

Now Im going to imagine the fucking pillow in every civil war trailer.

You know what I would be sad? If Bucky comes back after a while and Jo has another guy in the house.
Why I keep doing this to myself?!!

41... and now we wait.

He was lying on the pillow he’d destroyed in his metal hand.

awe he got to keep the pillow- as a reminder of home that was just.. *sniffles*
he totally just.. he breaks my heart being so sweet and cute..
and she totally was going to tell him that she loves him, but he made her not say it, just to make him fight harder to come back again

“Why didn’t you tell me he was back?” Graham asked. I shrugged.
“I wanted to see him scare the shit out of you.” Bucky smiled. I turned back to the cupboard.
“Well, even though I just peed my pants a little, I’m glad you’re back,” Graham told him. “I was kind of growing to almost like you. Even though you think I’m a HYDRA guy.” I turned back around.
“He doesn’t think you’re a HYDRA guy.”
“He definitely thinks I’m a HYDRA guy.”
“I think he works for HYDRA,” Bucky confirmed. I sighed.
“He doesn’t work for HYDRA,” I replied.
“Well, this not HYDRA guy is starving,”

MY FAV. PART SO FAR!!!
wow.. her background story is one hell of a web of mysteries... but Bucky is a smart cookie

I believe with this chapter we start the final countdown, right?

I have absolutely no idea what Im going to do after this story ends. Or what Im going to read, actually haha.

“I wanted to see him scare the shit out of you.”

<3 happy family reunited again.

“Because I was lonely"

:(

Im still confused about all Jo's background. So many secrets and places and names and everything. But everytime I read Sokovia, Im excited because my girl is there!!! (my other girl. They are all mine)

Funny, light, Bucky's back for a few hours I suspect. Im going to enjoy this while it last, because I suspect that things can only go down from here.

“I can’t imagine what your poor gremlin is going to have to suffer through.”

“My what?” Oh Tony.. I think his kid will be like the Bubble boy- only a bubble that will be indestructable(?)

Awe he came back, to have his stitches out, and he'll stay for pizza (without olives) and to get some rest.. ahem, don't think the resting part will be so much resting as something else....

she's got her mothers eye-shape well, hell.. he remembers that he'd let the two of them go once before because she was pregnant....

39...
Jo frustrate me.
I think it's because Im a little bit like her, hiding feelings, trying to be cool with everything and not making problems about anything.

She needs to explode.

I understand the character, her, her decisions, everything. But still, Im always wanting to hear her scream or cry or say what's on her mind. No, Im not okay. No I dont want you to go... I need her to be a little bit more selfish? but I like that's she's not, because she would be a completely different character then... But maybe a little selfishness?? a scream not so loud?

Quote of the day

“My what?” I hung up and put the phone back in my pocket.

“You can call it Gizmo. But only you. Like a nickname.”
“Deal. When is it going to come screaming through your vagina?”
Gizmo.. my brothers dog is named that

Arby's, so i'm not really sure what that is?

heh, I bet Graham would love to meet Nat

I just sat down today and read Monster and Hell Bound in one sitting. I completely ignored all of my homework and my massive task list because this book is enthralling. And emotional. And I'm LOSING MY SHIT.
Please update....please?

This story honestly gives me all of the feels. ALL OF THEM

I knew Bucky would leave, that was sort of inevitable, but when it happened it was still sad He needs to come back though...he will...I know he will...

I like sarcastic Jo a lot

Oh! I ordered one of those shirts by the way, I'd just finished whining about a lack in Bucky merch so your design was a godsend

Im just going to leave this here, because I like this line and because it's a sad chapter. I dont know what else to say.

Bucky come back.

Fuck you HYDRA.

Yeah, I had more to say after all

“For real this time. I’m sure he feels the same way. I’m sure it hurts him too. But he’s doing what he thinks is best for you. And it takes a lot of love—and self-control—to not be completely selfish.”

“Is he going to come back around again? I was kind of sort of starting to like him. Since he stopped pulling weapons on me and trying to choke me out in the hallway.” HAHAHAH Bucky..

and he's gone
he left with a bang

no but seriously.. that was just depressing, for him to leave, but needed..
and Graham.. the kid got some wise stuff to say, that's for sure

“Don’t go?” I lifted his hand and slid my fingers between his. He shifted his attention to them.
What is the name of the goddamn raccoon? Rocky? No.
Steve trusts her.
She likes old television shows. She likes sad things. She says she likes things that make her feel.
ROCKET.
I think she loves me. ?
I tapped the pen on the edge of the notebook a few times before I pressed it against the paper and wrote, “She does.”

I dunno of this is because of lack of sleep or something but dammit you had me so close to cryin' after this chapter.. it was sad and cute and just love all through....

Ohhhhh, so cute, so sweet!!

Bucky speaking other languages makes my brain go Tsssss.

“The MP3 player. Do you think he got it?”

Meanwhile, in the kitchen. Graham looks like this

“It’s a weapon,” he told me. “It wasn’t meant to touch someone this way.”

Owww!

“What are the notebooks for?”

The moment I've waited for WEEKS!

“I’m more worried about losing myself again,”

Ay nooooo, I can feel your fear, Bucky.

“Here. Let me show you something.”

*Heavy breathing*

"I don’t think I like olives."

Damn it Bucky! can you speak? YES! fucking tell her!

"What is the name of the goddamn raccoon? Rocky? No."

HAHAHAHA

"I think she loves me. ?"

</3 my heart will be forever broken at the fact that Bucky think he doesn't deserve any love.

“She does.”

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! SHE DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Celine Dion My heart will go on playing as I melt out of the desk.

“I don’t deserve you, Johanna.”

heh, Graham making breakfast.. that's kinda cute!
well hell, there's some really freaky stuff coming to light now.. she's not so sweet and innocent, she has a darkside, and well can't blame her for what she did though- the torture thingy- not completely at least

Graham trying to cook!!!
“I was a woman in the army, James.”
Jesus, you didn't mention this in Monster, right? My poor girl.
"Once I got him down, I tied him to an exposed pipe, and I cut him open. Everywhere. I tortured him. I wanted him to know it felt like to be afraid.”
mental control o just fear? This is... wow. she's not so sweet after all.
“They never used me for that. Not for questioning.”
It's so weird to hear him talk about his Winter Soldier life like this. So in control, so calm. Yes, I murdered a lot of people, and yes I was really good at it.
Speaking of butterflies, I read the whole dialogue of the guy in the torture dream with a russian accent. I dont know why.
Jo's denial worries me. She depends too much of Bucky lately, and even when I understand that and I support that! (Get some love, girl) I think that his presence helps her to ignore all the other things that are actually more important at the point, Even when Bucky is fighting to make her think about what's going on. I dont want him to leave either, he's safe there, and both of them deserve a little peace. But I dont know... Im confused.

There's something about the whole "it wasn't you who murdererd all those people" that bothers me. For the characters, I mean, It's not something that you did (what?)

Everything hurts. I know that it's not going to last, and still... grrrr
Im not making any sense today, Im out.
*drop the mic*

?: That ending... someone should tell Graham to get the mp3 or not?