Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You? - Comments

Getting more and more intriguing as to why they broke up! I like this chapter. I do feel bad for Alex. But also for Jack, if what Alex did is really that bad... but, ah well. Poor both of them. I can't remember if I said this already but the sort of baby-on-the-doorstep deal reminds me of the show Baby Daddy which I adore so that's great.

I really like where this story is headed already. :-)

I love this story so much! It's so calmly and clearly written it makes it so easy to picture it all. The characterization is really good too - I can feel the difference in their personalities and that's always a winner for me! I can't wait to learn more about their past and why they broke up & how Alex figures all this out with the baby! I think it's so adorable that he's gone to Jack, and I think Jack can tell that too. There's definitely something special lurking that I think they are going to rediscover. Update soon please! :)

YES I LOVE THIS AND YOU

I seriously love your writing style oh wow

Wow, I'm really starting to wonder how the hell they broke up that they're on such bad terms, lol

Poor Alex, he's seriously cluesless! I think I would be too though x

I'm really enjoying this so far! I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. So basically, I hope there is more soon.

Just caught up on the second and third chapters and I really like the slow reveal. I love where it's going! And two-month-old babies are just so small and helpless and kind of my fave stage of baby where they just wanna sleep on you so yeah I like this. :')

I do feel sorry for Alex though omg like Jack had a right to be pissed but the poor boy has been landed with a ready-made son, someone help him.

I'm so happy you're writing Jalex again because all of yours are my favourite. I am getting so much more curious about this one!!! I love it

@ OverbearingStruggles
thanks!! I'm excited to be writing Jalex again, tbh. I missed it!

@ jules391
Thanks for commenting! I'll be able to update again over the weekend :)

@ Gem_Jar93
thank you so much! I really appreciate that :)

@ vmari97
thanks!! glad you like it :)

Oof I love this! The flashbacks are such a perfect way to give us their origin and your writing is really great. I'm excited for you to be back into Jalex!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

such an interesting way to start a story!!! i can tell this is gonna be so good!!! ahhhhh

I seriously love your writing style <3

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@ Forever Young.
Newborn babies get me right in the heart so I'll probably cry lmfao.