I knew the boy on the train would be his step brother. I have phsycic powers. xD I loved the update!! And I liked how you exlained what each place in England was down in the author's note box or whatever it's called.
Ha! How did I know that the boy from the train would be his step- brother!? Whoot for me! lol. His family seems nice =]. I hope that Jay comes around. Write more soon?
This is a really cool sotry. Usually i m not a huge fan of stories written in journel or note form, but i love this one! Simon is such an interesting character! He's really funny, and i enjoy listening to him talk *grins* i hope you write some more.