the part where it says 'What will his girlfriend be like? And my brother in law to be? (Yes, dad's engaged.)'' kind of confused me a little anyways!!!... loved it!!
Hehe English tour guide... If you have decided he lives in North Cornwall, he'd have to take a train from somewhere like Exeter or one of the little ones in the towns Have a look at a National Rail map if you want but your best bet is to say that they had an hour's drive into Exeter and then he got a train from there
nose sex :D pity you didn't mention it
story's still awesome. keep it up and good luck with your piano exam
Love the updates! I'm so excited, I can't wait for more.
Ps. Love the Cuckoo's Nest reference. I had one in my story too. ^_^ Pps. Have you ever read the Tale of Two Summers? I'm not sure why, but this reminds me of it. And if you haven't you should.
oooooo sorry about not mentioning the nose sex (to all who are confused - louisa mistook something I said about the story to be nose sex, which is just hilarious to imagine)