I Won’t Give Up - Comments

First and foremost, I'm so sorry to hear about the fire! I'm glad y'all are okay

Now, about this chapter...

I really like the idea of a Halloween party with games and such. Normally, our "parties" consist of dressing up, eating, drinking, and watching horror movies. Which we do basically at any time during the year (minus dressing up, lol), so it's not very special. It's fun, though.

Of course Johnny was able to identify all the alcohols! We all know the gnome has a very specific set of talents And I can see Matt and Val being competitive with each other. Haha!

Yaaayyy! Go Zack! He got her to dance! And it was so cute! Just being dorks and having fun. I love reading about her actually being genuinely happy. Zack and his friends are good for her. Plus, her reactions to Zack are adorable and relatable. We've all been there with someone

Finally watched Coco. I loved it. It was so cute. Sorry to hear about the fire but aleast your all safe.

Of course Johnny knew what every drink had in it. I'm glad she went out and danced with Zacky.

Loved it. Please update again soon xxx

So glad that she is finally opening herself up to Zacky, even if it is little by little.
Loved this chapter, especially the dancing part. Now I want to see him do the time warp

Look at her breaking out of her shell. I still need to watch Coco.

Wow, Zack! Lol. What a question. Sheesh.
Awe! He called her beautiful
Hahaha, I love Matt. He's so cute about Val and the pregnancy. And watching all of the animated Disney films wouldn't be so bad. Although there are some awful ones.
I hope Zack gets her to dance!!!!! And "what could go wrong?" ALWAYS famous last words...

There holding hands! About time

I loved it! I love that Zack is helping her gain confidence -- and now, Matt and Brian are her cheerleaders as well! She let Zack hold her hand?!?!?

Oh, I'm so ready for Halloween! Please tell me Zack makes her socialize some more!

I think he burnt those pancakes on purpose. Dying to figure out what is exactly wrong.

SOOO close to the full story. But he at least got a piece of it, which is more than she lets herself offer most people. I'm glad she's starting to really trust him and his friendship. She needs that. And Zack clearly knows he's going to break his own heart but still wants to be a comfort to her.

I'm ready for a lighter chapter :P Lol. I thought this one would be due to the first half, then BAM! The conversation turned on them (and me).

I sat down and devoured this story. I love it SO much. I actually cried when he asked if she was dying...

Can't wait for the next chapter, but I will. Lol. Enjoy your vacation!

Does she have some form of COPD? What about Cystic Fibrosis? I’m really looking forward to the next chapter of this story because I can’t wait to find out what Zack thinks of this snippet of news. Please update again soon xxx

I just found this story and I'm absolutely loving it so far.

Welcome back! I’m sorry to hear about your father in law. Hope you’re finally settled in your house and congratulations on the birth of your daughter. I have re-read this story from the beginning again and I love it so much. I am hoping that you’ll be updating this again soon because I’m desperate to know what you have planned. I’m glad you’re not planning to kill Julie off. At least I hope you’re not lol...

Please update again soon xxx

Can't wait for more :-)

I'm loving this story so much! I can't wait for more!

What's wrong with her? Health wise, I mean. Does she have some sort of COPD problem or is it lung cancer? I hope she doesn't die in the end or anything. Please update again soon. Xxx

I would love the chance to smell his pillow. Yes I'm aware of how creepy that sounded.

Update soon please

Loving this so far! I subscribed to it when I first saw it but am only now just getting time to read it! Can't wait for more.