I Won’t Give Up - Comments

I can relate to her and so many ways. Well minus Lord of the Rings. I have a feeling the relationship will start out rocky.

Ok first, sorry I took so long to read the new chapter! Secondly ... how can one ONLY stay friend with Zacky! ahah
No but seriously, I have a funny feeling this relationship is gonna be so rocky.
I can relate to her, like so much on different things. It's kinda scary lol.
As always, I love the update and just wanna read more. :)
She's still such a mystery even after the fourth chapter, and I want to find out more about what's going on with her.
Also, don't worry about the rest of the guys being in the story thing, when the story's good, it's worth it. :)
Update soon! xo

I really really love this story :)

I am really loving this story so far, but one thing keeps niggling at me. Julie always seems to be eating unhealthy things so I presumed she would be larger than you described her as. You said she's super skinny and that seems weird with the amount of food she eats like muffins, frosting and cookies.

Apart from that I really enjoy this story. You write characters well and it's refreshing to see a well written story that doesn't feel like a stereotypical fan-fiction. Looking forward to see how this story progresses :)

Slightly confused about the ending. What did she see that was surprise?

There is the chapter I've been waiting for ! :) Well for my part I can say I openly love these kind of stories ahah. Honestly even though I know it's not possible, I wish your chapters were endless because I always want to know what's coming next. They say when a story is good it's never long enough; true. Just out of curiosity, are we gonna see the rest of the band or is it gonna be mainly ZV? ( Not that I would mind lol ) Still, nice chapter. :) x

Oh my ... I absolutely love this story. He looks like a caring rockstar. And poor her.... Hopefully he's gonna help her. I kinda have a soft spot for these kind of stories ahah. I really love your story. Cant wait to read more. :)

Loved the update.

I haven't read a fan fiction in a long time, but I thought I'd give one a shot. I like the writing style you have. It's so clear and elegant, I really enjoyed this. Hope the rest of your writing goes well. I will be subscribing to see how this develops!

Another update! Wow. I loved it and can't wait for more so please update again soon xxx

Does she have a portacath in her chest?

Loving it! Please update again soon xxx

That was nice of him even if she's being a bit grouchy.

That was sweet of him to bring her something anyway! Haha I like this so far!