14 Days - Comments

I need more!!!!! We still love you

I’ve just finished reading this from start to finish and I loved every single word of it. I can’t wait to read more and hope that there is going to be a happy ending in this story for Evie and Brian. I hope that Troy gets some kind of punishment for his traitorous behaviour and that Evie ends up working for A7X permanently.

Please update again soon xxx

I was so excited to wake up to an update this morning!

I may or may not have yelled a loud "YES!" when I got the email to say you had updated. It also may or may not have scared my dog...

Oh god... I'm cringing for Evie. Isn't your best friend supposed to grill the guy you're dating? Not embarrassing the hell out of you! Hahaha.

I'm glad she's come up with a plan to deal with that dick Troy... as much as I want her with A7X, I want it on her terms... not coz she was pushed out.

Oh, the irony....*psst* she should have gone with Brian!

I feel this is the calm before the storm. I just hope she gets a little longer being happy before she has to say goodbye to someone.

I'm sorry you've had a bad week and I hope it improves!

Ugh yes. This story is great. I love it.

Ahhh what an ending to that chapter!
You need to make the decision to fight for us, Evie, because I am fully in.” Brian’s speech was perfect and to hear her say ‘ I’m in’. Yes yes yes. Can’t wait to read how they both react to being the same page finally

I don’t comment as much as I should! But I’m so happy she’s stepping out of her comfort zone to try and make it work with Brian!

Eeeeeekkkkk!!!!!
All in!!! Both of them! Look at Brian all fighting for her, making her see the light, even if it's just a small, hopeful glimmer!
I wonder what will happen if a) she doesn't get kicked of the Halestorm tour and b) Brian gets her a permanent position on theirs!

You already know how excited I am that you updated. Turned my shitty day right around!

“To explore Brian.” - yeahhh, girl! :D

Showers are good... but a shower with Brian? Much better!

Jeez, Lzzy... way to interrupt! You’re awesome for covering for them, but jeez... girls got potentially limited time with her man and your interrupting!

“So if anyone asks, you came back early because you had diarrhea.” - hahahaha! Oh, jeez...

“How could he be attractive, talented, caring and observant? If it wasn’t so endearing, it would really piss Evie off.” - I know, right?! What a bastard... ;)

I’m glad she opened up to him about that douche, Troy, but I did not see the turn coming with Brian thinking she was using him! What the hell, Brian?! I know shit is confusing, but damn... give her a little credit. She had been affectionate with him before that happened, playing footsie under the table and all that. Silly boy.

Naww, that was such a great little speech Brian gave her... and he’s so right. She needs to just give in and let it go... maybe they’ll work out, maybe they won’t. The least she can do is give it a shot!

YES! Good girl! :D

Loved the update and look forward to seeing what happens next!

YAYAYAYUAYAYAYAYYAYA

What a fucking snake! As I much as I want her to go to A7X it should be her choice. Not because of some prick who is jealous. I don't think she can keep that info to herself til tomorrow. Even with Jimmy's helpful words. Jimmy should mess with Troy's stuff.

Troy....what a fucking snake!
Wonder how long she'll be able to keep that tidbit of info in the back of her mind, because I don't think it'll be put away until tomorrow!
Loved the update...maybe it was the wink of fate she needed for her and BriBri!

Urggh Troy -you are a back stabbing pr@ck. she’ll be better off with avenged but I needs to be her choice not the fall back position. She needs to confide in someone what is going on. Maybe Jimmy could mess around with Troy’s gear so that he doesn’t look quite so golden.

@ Damsel of Darkness
Don't you worry, things will become clear ;)
I don't think I can ever write a Jimmy free story. Its what derailed my last batch of writing. And why all my stories are set pre 2009...
I hope you have an awesome weekend to make up for your Meh week!!!

@ kiss my sas
IM SO EXCITED

@ Damsel of Darkness
PLEAAAAAASE DO! (I’m definitely not reading eternal triangle for the millionth time rn)

@ Laylylu
Hahaha! Well thank you. I’ll try to start posting ASAP!

Omg... what the hell?! Is Troy for real?! That’s a dick move. Clearly he’s not good enough for the job or he wouldn’t have to trash her to try and get it. And I’m a bit disappointed in Phil. I understand the role of manager is to prioritise the bands best interests... but he should know she’s an integral part of the team that helps the band. A band that would never agree to kicking her to the curb. Don’t get me wrong... I want her to work for Avenged... but coz it’s best for her, not coz she got stabbed in the back.

Awww... Jimmy. I love him. He’s so thoughtful and sweet... there when someone needs him. Y’know, I love that we can keep him alive in our stories. It’s kind of comforting in a way... I mean, it’s a fictional version, but still. It’s Jimmy :)

I’m so glad she’s giving in and just enjoying her time with Brian. I’m sure her brother may notice her absence, but hopefully Lzzy will cover for her!

I love you for updating btw... I’ve had quite a meh week, so ending it with reading your update made me super happy!

I await the next instalment!

@ Laylylu
RIGHT?! How exciting is it that she is back?! :D
Eternally fan girls :P

@ Damsel of Darkness
YOU WRITING IS THE BEST NEWS ILL READ TODAY!