14 Days - Comments

My heart hurts for Evie :(

Aww, she’s feeling a bit out of sorts with her crew. It’s gotta be a lil weird to come back... even after two weeks. A lot can change, even in that short amount of time. I’ve still got my fingers crossed that she gets a permanent role with A7X :D

“Tell me more? Like did he have a car?” - hahahaha!

I’m glad Lzzy talked some sense into her. She clearly needed a woman’s perspective on the whole situation. I agree that Evie shouldn’t dismiss things so quickly, but I get why she’s apprehensive. She feels like there’s a fast approaching expiration date and it would be hard not to want to protect yourself; or more appropriately her heart.

Argh, it’s so good! I want more!

Loving this story, can’t wait to find out what happens

@ Damsel of Darkness
Woot woot!! That's super exciting :D

@ kiss my sas
Yes, I am. I have one I’m working on and another I’m getting a lot of ideas for, but haven’t started

@ Damsel of Darkness
THAT IS THE BEST NEWS EVER!!
You are writing again as well?! That is amazing :D
You have always been a freaking phenomenal writer, so can't wait to see what you come up with :)

@ kiss my sas
Haha, well I intended to write... then I found your story and my writing was put off for the day.
I’m addicted! Can’t wait to see where it goes!
Haha, I know, right?! It’s been years since I was active on here, but I missed it.

@ Damsel of Darkness
Argh! Its you!!!! HI!!!
That was a freaking epic time commitment you put in to reading my bullshit!! Thank you!!
So so so glad you are enjoying it :) Trying to get a new chapter out soon! tried writing last week, but my brain was made of marshmallow, so things did not go well :P
I can't believe we are both here again!!!

Oh my god! I didn’t know you were still writing! I’m so glad I logged in and found this. Im so excited!

Looks like I’ll be spending my Sunday catching up!

“He slapped the ass of each of the guys as they climbed the stairs and disappeared on to the dark of the stage.” - that literally made me laugh out loud coz I can clearly picture it. Hahaha.

Oh, and can I just say that I’m a lil jealous of her job, for one reason... the tucking of the wireless pack into Brian’s back pocket ;) although I’d be terrible at it, as I imagine you’re supposed avoid touching his butt. Hahaha. If it was Zacky’s, that would be the pretty hard to resist ;)

“Please keep getting her to pick things up,” JB asked, his lips twisted in a smirk. “I could watch that ass all day.” - another literal laugh out loud moment. Hahaha. Lil perv he is... not that I can really comment considering my last thought : p

Loving the sexual tension with her and Matt Berry. I feel like I’m almost gonna end up rooting for him... I love his character!

I also love the back and forth between the Berry’s. They don’t often play a large role in stories (at least not the stories I used to read...) including my own, but I’m really enjoying the way you write them. It’s refreshing and very entertaining :)

Hmmm... me suspects Brian may be in a not so happy relationship? Interesting...

Oh, and I totally relate to the whole flip flops/thongs thing. It’s hard to have to do that when writing... And the spelling! I have to have my word set to US dictionary so I don’t use Aussie spelling. Hahaha.

So all it takes to get Johnny out of his pants is to have a pair of trackies like his? Hahaha.

They’re stoned/intoxicated conversations are as weird as they are hilarious! Hahaha

“And I’m sure it won’t be long until you realise that peeing isn’t the only sounds you will hear during the nights. It does get awful lonely on the road,” - Bahahahaha! I will admit that that thought had already occurred to me. They are a bunch of dudes after all.

And Evie just told you that it is 'too much’ and to ‘ease your way in’. I made an educated guess!” - omg! Hahahahaha! Poor Evie! I’d die if I was her.

Ahhh, so she’s an ex... well better than a current. Although still sounds like she’ll be a source of drama :D I liked the interaction between Brian and Evie about his ex... it gave them more depth and built more of a friendship between them, which is great. I liked 5e thought about her not laughing at him since he’s her boss... I hadn’t thought of it like that before. And it kind of makes the idea of something happening between them pretty hot! Hahaha

I love that Matt S is the only one who could stop Jimmy from barreling Matty B down. That was hilarious!

Phew... her encounter with a shirtless Brian... lucky girl ;) And a hug to boot! Too bad it wasn’t shirtless hug...

Oh, Brian... that was so uncalled for. Stupid man taking hIs frustrations out on others... innocent others!

Ah, the wonderful and wise Mr. Vengeance, seeing what’s going on before Evie and Brian even see it. He smart and pretty!

Oh my god! Zacky got owned hard! Calling his bluff was amazing... just wow! Hahaha! Bet that moment gets stored in his spank bank for sure!

Oh, you know I love Zacky.... but damn, I think my love for him just doubled! The way he’s playing Brian like a set of strings is fabulous. Hahaha. I love his move at the party, holding onto her in a very subtle move to make Mr. Gates jealous. Mission accomplished!

I’m glad Brian apologised. And it was sincere. But I hope he doesn’t pull that crap again. I must admit I wanted to see more of their moment hiding behind the bus, oz I was enjoying their exchange. But I get why it was cut short... the tension is killing me! Hahaha

Seriously, so many half naked men... I want her job. Hahahaha.

Aww, I don’t want her to leave... she needs her gig extended! Surely Chris should be with his baby and baby mama for the rest of the tour, yeah? :D

I must admit, I was a little disappointed they didn’t share a bunk... as unrealistic as that may be. But I was amused by his note when he returned her bra. Hahah.

Oh my god, I love our little match maker! Y’know, he’d make a cute Cupid... sans the nappy. He’s definitely doing his best to get Evie and Brian together. Love it!

“Take me home, big boy,” Jimmy said to Matt - Hahahaha! Nice line, Jimmy.

Ooh! Now she’s at his house, they’re alone.... :D

Yes! A kiss! Finally! :D

Oh, the tension was finally released! It’s about time!

Argh, woman! Stop overthinking everything....I know she’s being realistic and logical, but damn. Give it a chance! Zacky worked so hard to make that happen. Hahaha.

Speaking of Zacky, he’s just a jack of all trades, isn’t he? Guitarist, Cupid and investigator and rolled into one! :D

Oh, poor Evie. That was kind of mean of Zacky, forcing her to Brian in the practice room. Albeit also kind of genius. I loved how she considered throwing the capo in the room and running away. But I’m glad she didn’t. Hahaha.

She looked back. She kissed him, and she looked back. - nawww! Yes! Go Brian!

Slash?! Oh hell yeah! :D

YES! Go Brian, make her stop pulling away!

HAHAHA! I love Zacky’s reaction to finding them. He’s the best!

I love Jimmy and his friend Slash. So funny. And Zacky taking great pleasure in teasing Evie... just love this whole scene!

Naww, they got a flight with her! And of course Jimmy already knew. He may be crazy, but he sees a lot more than he ever lets on.

“I paid the guy next to you $100 to switch seats. He didn’t complain, after all mine was in first class,”

“I told you, I wasn’t ready to give you up, yet,”

Oh my god, Brian... stop it! You’re just way to charming, even I’m melting!

So the bands have met. I would like to say that it’s nice to see her fitting back in with her crew, but I’d be lying if I didn’t t admit I want her to stay with Avenged. Not just for Brian, but for her own career too!

So, I’ve been reading and concocting this comment since like 11am... and I need more! More, I say! Can’t wait for your next update!

I am all caught up!

I love the fact that the attraction and sexual tension wasn't blatantly obvious from the get-go. Evie and Brian actually developed a friendship, then that first kiss was kinda like... SURPRISE!
I have sympathy for Evie and the fact that she's driving herself crazy over what this is with Brian, and what it can be. (Been there, done that.) Brian seems determined to prolong this thing between them, obviously interested in more than just a casual fuck/friends with benefits scenario.
Being back with Halestorm will be good for Evie, because talking to Lzzy will surely force Evie to acknowledge some truths about herself and Brian. Then she'll be better prepared when she and Brian have their chat.

Love it!
xoxo

Love it - at last they are both on the same page

I love it! Need moreeeee ❤️

Yes! Hopefully being caught by Zack won’t spook them

Love the update, can’t wait for more

Yasss, good job! Zack-1 Brian and Evie-0

Good work Zack! Hope she takes to heart what Brian said - more please I’m desperate to know what happens next

I love this story. Like, really love it. Can we have more ASAP, please?!? I need to know what happens with her and Bri!

Yay they got together but boo why is she overthinking this. Come on Brian make her see that you two belong together

No she's over thinking it. Everything was going so well

It's about time they finally do it. Glad he mutted the phone