Dark Secret Love - Comments

Yay for getting time alone to be able to go to the show without explaining. Though I feel like Raven would be concerned and Matt would joke about said being broken in half lmao. Ooooo she’s gonna pounce the giant . Loved it!

Loved it

Matt is such a fanboy . I love that he has been able to save the girls from those situations. As gruff as he looks it’s very awesome that he gave her a choice instead of pressing her into doing something that she may not wanna do. We know she does but it’s good to be given a choice without pressure. Loved it!

I don't blame her being nervous. He has a very intimidating persona, not to mention she's still a bit at a loss as to why she was invited. They do come from very different worlds.

She was going to say hello to Till, thank him for the tickets, and leave. - I think not..

I love how they're quite blatantly checking each other out. Of course that's understandable, since there seems to be an instant attraction.

"A selfish reason, I'm afraid." - Mhm, I bet...

"I saw you by the pool yesterday and wondered what you would look like naked." - Welp! He does not beat around the bush. But damn, is that more alluring than if he did... She handled it very well. She didn't get embarrassed or mad and just went with the flow of the conversation. I like that she prefaced her query of his age with not wanting to be rude; even though he was quite blunt with his statement of wondering what she looks like naked. Hahaha. She's definitely classy.

"Maybe I'm weighing my options." - Perfect response... again, such class!

Oh, suspect she'll definitely come...

Love it! Already dying for the next chapter!

Gah, even though I had read that before, the interaction is still perfection!!
I love the straight forwardness of it, no beating around the bush, and almost just stating facts, as if there is social stigma still surrounding a one (or two, thanks to his entredre) night stand.
Gah, so good!!! :D :D :D

@ AngelicWasteland;

Thank you for giving this a chance!

As promised, there was a lot of fire. Every burst of flame elicited excited yells and shrieks from the audience. Matt grinned the whole time, his dimples on prominent display. - So freaking adorable!!!

Du Hast! Love it. That song caused so many debates when I was back in high school--google was not as readily available as it is now, so we all just had to try and figure out. Hahaha.

Till's eyes were fixed on her and a faint smile had lifted the corner of his mouth. - Well we all know what he's thinking!! Poor girl hasn't even officially met him and she's nervous and intimidated.

London's lips had parted and she looked at Matt. The tattooed vocalist burst out laughing. Raven covered her mouth with her hand, green eyes sparkling with mirth. - Bahahaha! Oh, poor London... I love how Matt just loses it. Hilarious!

"It can't get much worse!" - Oh, honey...

"I was down there in Oakland!" Matt announced. -

Just what was going to happen when London finally came face-to-face with him? - Well, I don't know what sort of girl London is... but unless she's completely immune to his charm (and/or super freaking strong!) then I can only assume that some down and dirty stuff will take place when she's face-to-face with him... or front to back, whatever floats her boat

I enjoyed this one. I loved it!

I feel like she was enjoying it until the band and Matt became twelve . It does seem like she was/is having a great time lol. I lost it when she told Matt congratulations for being covered at the show he went to . Loved it!

I really like how London seems really laid back, not expecting or wanting everyone to "Love" her as a celeb. I'm not all that familiar with the bands, but I like your style of writing and I'm definitely going to keep reading!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
I think it is amazing!!! Just so much awe that so many people can yell German back at them, and the excitement and entire vibe of the crowd EATING UP exactly what they are serving. Perfect!!!!
It was amazing! Loved it! :P
AHHHHH!!! I am so excited :D :D :D

@ kiss my sas

I did my best, considering I've never actually seen them. Lol.
And I knew you would like that line when I wrote it.
She meets him in the next chapter!!!!!

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
This is as amazing as I thought it would be!!!! Of course they have to play Pussy!!! I LOVE this line They just love how people respond to this because they are twelve - SO TRUE!!!

Feel free to drag this out forever! It reminds me of my first Rammstein show :P All the shock and surprise, but so freaking good :D

@ Damsel of Darkness

I would HATE being famous! The only benefit would be not having to worry about money, but man...a lot of things about fame would really suck.

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Hahaha, fair call. Again, how exhausting...

@ Damsel of Darkness

Dressing down either lets her blend in or leads to one of those articles in a tabloid about her being broke or hungover or whatever other gossip they write about celebrities when they go out dressed like real people. Hahaha.

Y'know, having to constantly worry about what others think about you would be exhausting; especially because it's not just an unfounded anxiety when everything you do is actually scrutinised! It would be so tiresome and restricting.

She wasn't a snob, it had just become habit to always be stylish in case she was sighted by the paparazzi. - she does realise that if she dressed down; she'd have more chance to blend in and not be seen, right? Hahaha

"They have flamethrowers!" Matt added, his grin that of a child's on Christmas morning. - I can just picture his face for that line... so damn adorable!!

Sure, sometimes it could be cool, like Alice Cooper's infamous theatrics, but it was unnecessary for the most part. - YES! I saw Alice Cooper in at Heavy MTL in Canada like 9 years ago and he was AMAZING!

The accent that colored her words was not German, meaning she had likely learned the harsher tongue for her significant other. - I don't know why... but I find that so cute. German would not be an easy language to learn, so it shows a hell of a lot of love to learn it for someone. Anyways, I'll stop being weird... hahaha

Well there definitely seems more to her invite than Kori is letting on! Oh, and he was one of the mysterious poolside men? Called it! Hahaha. But I still can't decide if he invited her just because he's attracted to her or if there's more to it... hmmm...

Looking forward to more!

Well, well. She still didn't get full answers on why to Till invited her. But heck I loved the update. I can't wait to see another!

Lmao I definitely can picture Matt’s excitement about a flamethrower. I’m so intrigued about the invite still. And what was his reasoning for it. Oooooooo I love the dress. And the chapter

Have fun!