Suffer All The Children - Comments

ok, i just read chapter 9 and i can say, my heart was like " AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

Oh my god, this is just...amazing. I'm off to read the next part right now. I'm so excited. You are an amazing author, one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time.

Holy... I have nothing to say. It was amazing but I'm nearly in tears... :(
I love it, though, your a very good writer. No not good, your GREAT!!!

you have made me very sleepy!
lol, not syaing this was boring. Oh contrare. I got hardly any sleep last night from beginning this and now it's late again and i have to be at work in about 7 hours. fuck it though, i t was well worth it.
fucked up? hell yes.
amazing? un-fucking-believable. bravo.
I'll start the sequel tomorrow. i want to right now SO bad but i need sleep! :)

Just so everyone's aware on here: I do warn of the content in the summery...

Okay I'm really sorry about this but I haven't even read chapter ten yet and I feel physically ill. I have to stop. The writings good but the idea is kinda killing me. Mikey should know that this is wrong. Screw that he knows this is wrong cause he stood up to Gerard bub he's scared of getting hurt. This is too different to real life that I can't deal with it. I'm really sorry. I'll add you as a friend though if that helps you forgive me........ Siionara xoxo

We must be riding the same brainwave. Last night, I reread the original ending, because it was hazy to me. I thought for sure Gerard was going to wake up. He didn't. Or did he? Hahaha Stoked to see what you do in the sequel!

This story. Makes me. So. Damn. Happy.....except i hate Gerard and I can't believe he forces Mikey to do drugs :( (I'm only on chapter 2, give me time Xp) And i can't wait to finish this one to read the next one ^_^
Keep writing, you're damn awesome :P

So, I totally lied about not making a sequel, I know, but I had the most delicious idea in the world for one :)

........holy shit.......mikey......idk what to say....i think i'm in shock i loved it.......

I'm not worthy! I never expected that ending and I love being surprised! Ya, ur the tip top of what we need in storytime! Ya took care of the monotony! Thank you thank you thank you! *takes deep breath and passes out,again* don't I look peaceful? Keep it going! Plz laters and<3333

O my God, I went to sleep with ur story embedded n my mind and awoke very early to continue! Plz keep writing don't doubt urself! Ur soooooo bleeping good! *pants, faints, comes to with skittles and coffee.'For u, my dear author and writer! Enjoy!' Because I am!

Sorry for this late comment on the last chapter, but I was without internet and only today I read this... and OMFG... there are no words to describe all the feelings you made have with every single word on the chapter. Amazing, completely unexpected... and hell, so well written.
The description on the scenary, the feelings of Mikey at the moment he saw Frankie with Gerard... and oh god, the twist at the end, when Mikey turns into what he hated/loved... his brother. That was really unbelievable.

I'm still kinda in shock, but believe me... it was worth the wait and who cares if I couldn't read it by the time you posted, I'm really happy I had the chance to read it now. I told you many times before, I love the way you write... and this chapter was as amazing as the past ones... and even better, so freakin' good~

One of the best waycest I've ever read ♥

Wow, what a finale.
A living doll.... creepy. lol.
I really don't know what to say.... I mean it's so twisted and awesome!
I can't explain what I'm thinking right now.
I was telling my sister about your story and now I have curious about it.
Awesome ending :)

wow. just wow. this story is brilliant. my favorite waycest yet. please make another like this! i need more! brilliant!

Loved this one!
It was so good that Mikes changed himself "to" gerard!
I think I might be pretty sick while getting so turned on reading this xD
XOXO

^-^ Thank you everyone who commented and thank you to all of you who didn't comment, but still liked it enough to keep reading.

And for people who called Mikey stupid for going back to Gerard *pet pet* don't call my Mikey dumb! He's just... special... ha ha no really. I completely love him. I fall in love with my characters in the stories. He's my favorite I've ever made I think. I wish I could make him real. A sequel? Nah, I'm sorry guys, it'd just be too tacky. I've done sequels before, this story's too important to me to give it a sequel.

Did anyone like the bits of humanity trying to show through Mikey at the end? He was grasping and trying so hard to become human, but I think the last time we saw him fully as a human was when he kissed Frank and told him he loved him in the chapter previous to the end.

But I think I had to let him go over to Gerard's mentality. He couldn't kill Gerard and then not take over. He couldn't keep Gerard and Frank once he switched mentalities. It was either Frank or Gerard who had to die and I thought Gerard would be the most heartbreaking because he's this villain that I've secretly grown to love to over the story. God. Now that I re-read this, I love it. I'm so glad that so many of you stuck by me to the end. And new readers of this, make sure to send me a comment or a message. I love talking to people about this story.

Wow...
I just...
Wow.
Amazing last chapter. Couldn't have written it better. I like how Mikey turns into his brother. It's extremly ironic and an amazing twist.
I'm still wide-eyed from the ending.

-bev

That was an epic ending of beautiful revenge.

holy crap!!! this really scares me, but i like it!!! it's good!!! update soon!!!