Suffer All The Children - Comments

It's awsome! Updates soon please!

Heehee Both cute and horrifying! :)

Youre damn skippy this was long 9 effing pages? You must hate Science I see
Totally worth it though, yes? You just made a young girl (namely, me) happy
And you know why I'm happy? Because as much as I freakishly enjoy reading about
Gerard beating his little brother it felt pretty good to see Mikey get away with something for once you know
Plus Frank is just too cute to ignore so I totally get Mikey's delimma anyways so I loved the nice lengthy update
And hope for another in the near future, keep up the good work as always (=

It's so sad the way Gerard treats Mikey. A thing, that's what Mikey is for him. He no longer sees him as a brother and of course he doesn't see him as a lover. He only sees Mikey as an object, something he owns and controls completely.

So sad that Mikey doesn't realize the truth, because he has been living in this reality his big brother created for him for so long.

I really hope Frank breaks that world Mikey is living it and he shows him what the world really looks like.
And it made me so happy to read about them together again, mostly because it wasn't a sexual thing, they were just kissing. And I loved the way Mikey couldn't stop, he needed Frank so bad and a complete different way from Gerard.
Mikey just thinks he needs Gerard, but who he really needs is Frank.

Amazing chapter, hope to read more soon <3

I don't think I commented on last chapter so I definitly apologize; hopefully this one will make up for it. (:

It honestly still amazes me that after being so cruel, so evil, Gerard can nearly immediatly retreat into this kind personality. Really, I think that's one of the reasons his character is so interesting; he's multi faceted and you know he has some good in him. I mean, most people who try to make people completely evil usually end with something that resembeles a cartoon character, so I'm glad you didn't really try. It really makes everything more riveting.

I always take care of my things." That line really sums everything up, in a way; Gerard doesn't seem to think of Mikey as a brother anymore, just as a playtoy or something he can control. The power he manages to wield is absolutely fascinating, seeing as Mikey's completely submissive to him.

In a way, I think that Frank kind of has that control over Mikey too, but in a completely different way. I'm not really sure how to explain it, but just the fact that he managed to break into Mikey's shell for even a few moments really says something about him.

That little moment at the end too, with Mikey and Frank, really makes me wonder about the future too. I mean, it's obvious that Mikey's starting to get a little too confident, at least to me. It's only a matter of time before they get caught, I think, and I'm really quite scared to see what Gerard does then.

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AWE!
I love it!!

And Ray!

"I was under the impression that we'd be working ..ing Mikey learn how to play bass better." He rolled his eyes and sighed, pulling at his t-shirt, "If I'd known we were supposed to be trying to get in his pants I'd have worn something much tighter."
I giggled my arse off at that..

I don't think i've ever said this phrase in my entire lifetime, but i seriously want Gerard to go die in a hole somewhere..
Mikey and Frank are just SO cute!
And Ray is helping =]

Yay for the lack of Gas in Matt's car!!

More as soon as possible pwease!

♥Anjie

This is a really awesome story, dude. I love it. It's so different from all the other fan writing about Frank, Gerard, and Mikey. ^_^ I love the original fiction you've got going. The writing style is amazing, so descriptive and so abrupt. But you don't need me to tell you how you write. XD Thanks for writing this!!

Oh thats gross, I personally hate the taste of my own vomit
I mean who likes it? WTF am I even talking about...
But damn I'm sure Mikey won't let Frank touch Gerard's alcohol anymore now will he?
I'm sure he learned his lesson. :XD
So anyway, I loved the chapter as always. Update Soon ya hear?

The latest chapter is truly twisted.
More and more I'm loving Gerard's malicious character.
One the other hand, I feel bad for Mikey.
He needs to get out and escape his brother.
However, that is the sickest part of all, because he can't bring himself to do it.
All he knows is what Gerard has tought him.
Gah! I love this!
You are one of my favourites.

Alright..... I HATE GERARD NOW!
He's such an asshole to Mikey. I don't like him anymore, I didn't care before, but now I hate him.
Poor Mikey, I know he doesn't realize that is wrong the way Gerard treats him and that he doesn't really love him. 'Cause what Gerard does isn't love at all. But gosh, Frank has to be the answer and the salvation to this whole thing.
Frank has to save him somehow...

That chapter was really good, I cannot wait for the next <3

I reaelly thought he would shoot er for a moment...

*shrugs* I get a kick out of beating the fuck out of Mikey when I'm depressed.

Woooooooooooooooooooooah.

Simple as that.

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Oh my god; that was... unexpected, to say the least. I adored Mikey's little surge of confidence he got; having been under Gerard's reign his entire life, it was pretty out of the blue, but it shows that he does have some independence and isn't a... robot, for lack of a better word.

I'm glad you didn't exactly show the sex scene, which I'm assuming it was, in detail either. It probably would have ruined the atmosphere of the story, and felt kind of awkward. Reminds me of my own BSB in a way, y'know?
But wow... I never would have thought in a milion years that Mikey was going to give into Frank, especially so soon. I think by doing this, you just introduced the first major plot point of the story... and I can't wait to see where else it goes.

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Oh my Frank and Mikey!
Gerard is going to get furious f he finds out.
I'm fearing for Mikey's life.
On second though, I'm also scared for Frank.
That is if Mikey could keep a good secret.
He apparently can though.
Hehe. This just gets better and better, which is odd, because it started out amazing. What better than amazing?
This story.

First things first, don't be so hard on yourself in the author's note. Seriously. This story rocks.

I love twisted Waycests! This is done really nicely too... I've never read anything like it. I love Mikey's behaviour around Gerard, it's like Stockholm Syndrome or something...? Whatever, you do it so well. I'm jealous :D

I think the narration can be a little confusing at times, but that's about it.

Plus you have a really good vocabulary... you use good words :D Lol.

Oh yeah Frank and Mikey did the dirty!
Um sappiness = totally awesome and not bullshit
I'm pretty excited myself that Mikey's kind of letting loose
Though I'm strangely attracted to this hold Gerard's got on him
Anyways, I loved that chapter and even if you don't realize it you're an amazing writer.
Update as soon as you can! XD

*New Reader*

this is really really good. I like how it has an odd twist to it. I hope Mikey realizes what Gerard is doing to him, and I hope that Mikey realizes that he needs Frank

Yes, they did get it on.

God... that was amazing!
They finally kissed, and they finally... (did they sleep together?)
I'm happy, even if I love waycest, I so want Mikey to realize that Gerard is only being mean to him and Frank is the one he needs.
Frank needs to find out the whole weird thing between the Way brothers.
I cannot wait for the next chapter, 'cause even if you don't think so, this chapter was awesome and I loved it <3
More soon?