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  • Music.DrownLife

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    I finally got caught up on this story.
    I'm so happy that Frank has saved Mikey somewhat!
    The chapters seem to be longer than I remember, which is a good thing to me.
    You never fail to amaze me with your writing.
    January 25th, 2009 at 08:43am
  • greywolf1726

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    i just found this story and let me tell you it is awesome. don't put yourself down so much about your writing skillz your witing is your own unique way and if it was horribly written i would have stopped reading on the first chapter but awesome story. you bring out the personalities so well and never chnge them and keep the personality through the story the same that's hard to do. your story is twisted and dimented and i absolutley love that kind of story. keep on writing it's great and i can't wait to see what happens next
    January 20th, 2009 at 02:48am
  • Romance.

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    I haven't been reading or commenting on this story nearly as much as I should have. Sorry.

    You've created this amazingly complex relationship between Mikey and Gerard. What I find most shocking is how long this has been going on for, since Mikey was eleven to right up to whatever age he is now. That's a really long time, and it shows in Mikey how he just can't seem to find a way to function without Gerard. And yeah, it's a pretty horrible sort of relationship, but you can really tell that there's a lot of love between them. It's strange. It must be seriously hard to write but it's really interesting to read.

    And Frank... I have to say I have mixed feelings about him. He doesn't seem to understand how deep the Ways' bond goes and thinks he can just rescue Mikey and walk off into the sunset. To be honest, I think if it came down to it between the two, Mikey would certainly pick Gerard over him. But I don't know, I could be wrong. Mikey does seem to be gaining a bit of backbone over the whole thing. But I have a really bad feeling about Frank trying to keep Mikey from Gerard, I think that's just gonna make everything a whole lot worse.

    Anyway. That's my input. I've subscribed now, so I hopefully shouldn't miss another one of your long-ass updates I love so much.
    January 19th, 2009 at 01:13pm
  • William Beckett.

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    The last bit made me go "Awww" but, I know, like you say, it's sappy bullshit.

    I shutty up now.

    More please!
    January 14th, 2009 at 11:30am
  • deathbat.girl.

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    Hi.
    I just found this story and I really like it.
    You're an awesome writer too.
    I had to read all the chapters before commenting and I finally caught up.
    I'm really glad that Mikey trusts Frank enough to fill him in on what was happening.
    I really enjoyed the update and I'm anxiously awaiting the next update.
    January 12th, 2009 at 09:49pm
  • s u p e r h u m a n

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    Hmm... So does this mean there will be trouble?
    I'm sure Gerard doesn't enjoy his play things getting taken away from him.
    Haha a very small part of me wants him to kick some ass.
    Well I guess I shall wait and see what happens!
    I love this story... Alot You really shouldn't put yourself down as much
    You're actually pretty awesome, anyway update soon!
    January 11th, 2009 at 07:59am
  • Dorian Gray

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    Oh I'm so happy Frank knows. Mikey really needs the normality of having someone support him through this, someone to take him out and show him what the world is like.
    I'm really happy for Mikey's sake that Frank took it the way he did and wasn't just grossed out about the incest. I mean he was for that second before Mikey told him about Gerard making him do all sorts of things, and that it started when he was just a child.

    Great update! :arms:
    January 10th, 2009 at 09:08pm
  • Cobweb.

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    What did I tell you about Mibba, Thrax?
    It pwns. I win.
    :con:
    I'm gonna read this now.
    December 16th, 2008 at 07:02am
  • William Beckett.

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    Wow... this is great.

    But we all know Gerard isn't going to leave it at that.

    I'm really scared about what he's going to do to Mikey.
    December 16th, 2008 at 01:22am
  • s u p e r h u m a n

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    My God, I wanted to Gerard to catch them, I really did
    But now that he did I'm kinda scared for Mikey
    Argh, this is wonderful! Update Soon, I'm itching to find out what happens with Gerard.
    December 13th, 2008 at 11:44pm
  • KranK

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    Dude! This chapter was rad.
    I totally didn't know that you were updating again. I had to catch up on like 8 chapters.

    So are you back then? Are the creative juices flowing?
    <3
    December 13th, 2008 at 08:11am
  • Word!Smith

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    Ahaha, what a wonderful way for Gerard to find out. XD I love that little tidbit. I also love how you're making Frank that way. . . I can't like explain it, you know what I mean.
    lol
    but I love this twist to the Frerard stories. :3
    December 13th, 2008 at 05:29am
  • anjiestaar.

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    -giggles-
    "He felt badly for thinking the thoughts, but couldn’t help wishing slightly that Frank wore less clothing when he did so as well,"
    That would so be me.

    Aweh, poor Mikey and Frank..
    It was going sooo good..
    Then.. BAM!
    -cries-
    Damnit evil Gerard.

    Fabulous update!!

    x Anjie
    December 13th, 2008 at 04:07am
  • Anna12345

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    Reading this story's like watching it happen through one-way glass... :)
    Awsome Chapter!
    December 12th, 2008 at 06:17pm
  • quinn.

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    :O
    this was an amazing chapter.
    i loved every second of it. I got a bit confused with who said what, but i think i have it.
    Thanks so much!
    more soon please, i love it!
    December 12th, 2008 at 12:04pm
  • xFake Starx

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    Oh god... Oh god... Oh god...
    He saw them! He found out!
    Oh my god... that chapter was amazing! I have no idea why you think we won't enjoy a chapter like that.

    Frank stood up against Gerard, I am so happy. But the best part was that Mikey didn't do anything, he could have stop Frank. Or just stand by Gerard's side...
    Though I too wonder how different the relationship with Frank's gonna be from Gerard's relationship. He was a bit rough with Mikey at the end... but hell, he was nervous and angry at the same time.

    I'm scare of what Gerard might do to Mikey and Frank. I'm sure he will do something... nobody takes his things without paying the consequences, right?

    Love the chapter and I cannot wait for the next.
    Hope to read more soon <3
    December 12th, 2008 at 08:44am
  • anjiestaar.

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    YAY!!! But you're scaring me a touch, whats gonna happen??

    I want that update soonly, please?

    GREAT CHAPTER TO AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!

    x Anjie
    December 11th, 2008 at 12:32am
  • xFake Starx

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    Like all the other chapters before, this was really good. And wow, I loved the fact you moved foward some time again on the story line.
    They're gonna live together?... gosh, I know this gonna bring trouble. I just hope Gerard doesn't find about Mikey being with Frank too soon.
    And if he does... I hope somehow he doesn't kill Frank or Mikey, 'cause I know he's capable of.

    Hope to read more soon <3
    December 10th, 2008 at 06:52pm
  • s u p e r h u m a n

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    oh yay everyones moving in together!
    I'm excited yet scared, does that make any sense?
    I don't know but yeah update soon!
    I love how twistedly beautiful this is turning out.
    December 10th, 2008 at 04:24am
  • Word!Smith

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    I absolutely adore this story with all of my heart. I LOVE how you have so much insight into Mikey's character, even though it's 3rd person. I LOVE how "forbidden" all of that with Frank is. And whoa, man I've never EVER read anything so heavily incest as this. This is awesome. Love it love it love it and am sooooo going to follow it until the end. Keep up the amazing work!!!
    November 21st, 2008 at 04:34am