A Funeral of Hearts - Comments

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuude.
There's nothing wrong with a twisted ending ;D
I loved it; although I was expecting Gee and Vi to get together all along.
Doesn't make it any less worth it :)

Okay, finished it. It's nice to know how it ends. You're amazing lol, you just hit on my worst nightmare. I'm gonna have to go into therapy now, and it's all your fault! :-o

The end? For real?!
Well, at least my head doesn't hurt anymore from the confusion!!!
I think that in the end, Gee and Vi wouldn't have made a good couple.
They'd probably end up in bloody divorce.

Excellent. Fucking. Story.

THE END?!?!?!?!
BUT.................. BUT............... NO!!
THAT MEANS THERE'LL BE NO MORE!

D=

I need time to cope. I'll be back with my thoughts later, I promise.

Awww the end!! *sobbs* my heart is breaking xD.

But it was a great ending. Fiiiinally I know what happened, you are my heero! You know I love all of your stories, so do you think you will write more? Hihi I hope so.

wuved this story!

damit i wanted her to get back with Gee

YES THERE GOING TO BE IN THE NEXT ONE!

loves it can't wait for more!!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
This was cute, but it made me want to cry nonetheless.
D=
I'm a wreck.

I BLAME YOU. But.......... in a good way.
(I've yet to make the new banner. I'm a procrastinatorrr.)

<3

p.s. I still don't like Gray.Is that bad?

Paname.:

OH MY GOD VIOLA I KNOW WHO DID THE DRAWING. I KNOW, IT'S YOUR KID, BECAUSE GERARD SPERMINATED YOU BECAUSE TEENAGERS ARE RIDICULOUSLY FERTILE LIKE THAT, AND THEN YOUR PARENTS FOUND OUT AND FREAKED AND GAVE YOU A BUNCH OF SHIT, BUT YOU WENT THROUGH WITH THE PREGNANCY AND MAYBE GERARD KNEW AND MAYBE HE DIDN'T, AND THEN WHEN YOU WENT AND GAVE BIRTH YOUR PARENTS FLIPPED AND TOOK AWAY YOUR POOR LITTLE KIDDIE AND SENT YOU TO THE NUTHOUSE WHERE THE DRUGS FUCKED WITH YOUR HEAD AND MADE YOU FORGET EVERYTHING.

I think you have a really good point, there!!
That's fucking genius. :D
Anyway, YAY!! MCR next chapter!!!
I'm starting to like Gray... he seems like a good guy.

:D Mcr in the next chapter? o.o can't wait!

And FUCK YEAH! they go to new jersey. finally. :D :D ahhh *runs around in circles*

Wow...a lot happened!!

We go from busting into Frank's room, finding out it wasn't even him, looking for her files to busting out of the place! woo Vi! And I've gotta admit, I kind of liked Gray again in this chapter...
That doesn't make me happy, so don't you be over there smirking to yourself saying "I told you so", I'm not fully convinced yet!!

I really liked the way you described it from Viola's perspective, where everything was a blur and she could only remember the physical sensations like being cold - with everything moving as fast as it is for her, that's probably exactly how it would be, unable to focus on anything.

My brain hurts a lot, so I'm going to get off of the computer. haha

I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Update soon!!

Cheers
Kat

This story is awsome so far!
I can't wait for the update!
Yeah MCR will be in it. I don't really like Gray,I like Gerard,thats who she should be with:)
Please update soon!

Eyeliner stains:

As your wife, I feel obliged to comment about a certain matter...You spend awfully a lot of time thinking about Vi's sex life...who's a fictional character...should I be worried?

Well, look at it this way: you're Viola's creator, which makes you her sort-of mom, and since I'm your wife, that makes me her sort-of mom too. So I have a right to be concerned. I think.

Chapter 5:

OH MY GOD VIOLA I KNOW WHO DID THE DRAWING. I KNOW, IT'S YOUR KID, BECAUSE GERARD SPERMINATED YOU BECAUSE TEENAGERS ARE RIDICULOUSLY FERTILE LIKE THAT, AND THEN YOUR PARENTS FOUND OUT AND FREAKED AND GAVE YOU A BUNCH OF SHIT, BUT YOU WENT THROUGH WITH THE PREGNANCY AND MAYBE GERARD KNEW AND MAYBE HE DIDN'T, AND THEN WHEN YOU WENT AND GAVE BIRTH YOUR PARENTS FLIPPED AND TOOK AWAY YOUR POOR LITTLE KIDDIE AND SENT YOU TO THE NUTHOUSE WHERE THE DRUGS FUCKED WITH YOUR HEAD AND MADE YOU FORGET EVERYTHING.

Right? Right? I'm right, right? I'm always right. It's the law. I'm your wife. :weird

"Please, Dr. Parker, don't sexually harass me where everyone can see."
OhmygodIloveyou.

And he says they've done this before. I wonder what they've done--I mean, I know it's probably totally irrelevant, but I'm just curious. Maybe they've gone off grounds? Into the city? If you've got that much sway over the other patients, I don't think it would be too hard. Fuck, if they could do it in One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest, then they can do it in Franklin.

But I'm really worried. If it's true that she did get pregnant and have a kid, what kind of parent could she be? She's a teenager, and on top of that she's in a goddamn mental asylum. Maybe Gerard is taking care of it? I'm just worried. When she does get out of the hospital, is she just never going to go looking? Is her kid going to be raised without her? I'm not the most motherly person on the planet, but fuck, that makes me sad. I'm sad because Viola isn't ready to be a mom, she's nowhere near stable enough--but even though I know that she'd never be able to handle the kid and that maybe keeping her away from her child might be the best choice for it, it still totally bums me out when some poor baby is deprived of one of their parents. That's like majorly depressing.

Chapter 6:

I KNEW IT. I KNEW IT WASN'T FRANK. EVERYONE ELSE FORGOT THAT THE NURSE LADY SAID THAT IERO HAD CHECKED OUT A FEW MONTHS AGO, BUT I DIDN'T BECAUSE I'M A SMART LITTLE GIRL.

And of course you didn't dream it all, Viola! Come on! You really think your mind could dream up Gerard Way from scrap at the drop of a hat? Pssh.

Oh, they are so in deep shit. My theory is that they're going to get caught looking in Viola's file, and then Viola's going to put in high-security or something. But I am interested in what Viola's file has to say. Three years of her life can't be filled with absolutely nothing, there's got to be something in there, and it's going to be spectacular. In a grim, ohhai-i'm-a-teenage-mental-patient sort of way.

I am way too morbid for my own good.

Update soooooon, I need to know what happens. You can't deprive us of Gerard for this long. I'd even settle for a visit from Ray at this point. Gray is going to make me claw my eyes out. (No, I still don't like him. He needs to prove himself. Hmph.)

Yeah great update!
So..it is another Frankie.. Damn it! XD I wanna know what haaaaaaappened. Hmm *starts to think about some ideas what could have happened to Viola*

WHOOOOORE.
lol.

Anyway,
ZOMG IT'S NOT FRANKIE.
It comforts me to know he's not there though, to be honest.
UHM. I DON'T LIKE GRAY. =/ He's kind of a bitch.
Me and Ashley were conversing about how weird it would be if Gray were Gerard. ='D

VIOLA'S ALMOST AS BAD OF A LIAR AS ASHLEY.

First off - great job with the whorage! :)

Nextly, I loved that it wasn't Frankie!!! You can't believe how happy I was about that fact! You cannot believe.

I want to like Gray, really I do, but I just don't know that it's an option. How can he possibly compare with Gerard? I'll tell you. He doesn't. I mean, he can try all he wants, but at the end of the day, it was obvious that Gerard and Vi were meant to be.

I'm still aching to find out what the hell is going on though! The answers are soooo close and yet so far away! Damn you!
When she made that comment about it being all part of her imagination - let me just say - IT HAD BETTER THE FUCK NOT BE!!! I will be so ridiculously angry if all of the love that I felt for those characters was all just a part of her psychotic mind!
I'm serious Jay!

You need to update asap. I need answers!!!!!!

Cheers
Kat

Dude (um, yeah, I call everyone dude), when I opened my e-mail and saw "A Funeral of Hearts", I was like, "WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS?!"
It took me a good seven minutes to figure it out...

Okay... So this isn't Frankie?
Or it is?
Maybe Gray's trying to make her forget completely????
Or maybe Gray knows everything and he doesn't want her to know??
I DON'T KNOW ANYMORE!!
I blame the world.

i wonder what they will find in her file? the other one better not have been a dream!
it better have been real!!

FrancyPansy:

Omg they visit frankie!! And who are the guards? Maybe someone from he rpast.. and is it the real frankie? The one from her past?

Oh god I am dying here!!!

Let's say the guard's name is...Larry. Larry Person...Yes, this seems to be a good name for a guard.