A Funeral of Hearts - Comments

RIOT!xoxoSCARG33:

FUCK!!!
DON TELL ME DEY FREAKING BUSTED!!!!
UPDATE NOW!!!!
AWEEOME UPDATE HUN!!! =))
XOXO

Thanks!!!

GeeandBobrockmysocks:

wuvs it!

And I wuv you for commenting!

Skanorrhea:

=D I'ma make another one, tonight.

lolness. I do, really. I love you quite..... much. If that makes sense.

So Viola's not as daring as she used to be. Mhmm.
Gray is like the male version of ex-Viola. Excpet he's not awhore (Right?) O__O. She's not a whore..... Um..... yeah. xD

He might be a whore...He'd make a good whore...I'd pay for him...

Dead.Demented.Cool.:

Oh no! Changing the title of the story!!
No more banner!!!
Knowing Tera Joe, she'll probably make a new one.

Sneaky, sneaky, Gray and Viola.
Holy shit, I'm so not used to writing "Gray."
It's different. It's not Gerard.
It's not right!!!!!
INSANITY!!

Aw well, at least the name isn't entirely different. You get the same G and R and A you have in Gerard. Small comfort but meh..

Bree.Kiana:

ok, so PLEASE don't tell me that Vi is a mother (the only other possible link to the pictures is that at one point, she digressed to the mentality of an infant in the past- which I highly doubt)....anyway, back to the point...I really can't see Vi as a mother....but, if she is, is Gerard taking care of the child? Because that would be really weird....

ok, I'm done with my little rant now

=D
Bree

Oh I know, it's just an unnatural order of things.

wicked.:

Yea!
I'm glad that Gray is helping her, even if I'm still not entirely sure that I like him...
He seems nice enough, but I don't know that he can replace Gerard. It just doesn't seem feasible.

So...the twists and turns of an adventure seeking the one and only Frank Iero. It seems only fitting that it would cause Viola trouble - it is after all Frank's middle name, yes? And Viola's for that matter. haha

Now, I'm going to harass you again - what the hell is going on?
All that about her parent's not being there during visiting hours strengthened my belief that they are dead. I really can't imagine another reason why they wouldn't visit. Even if there had been some terrible falling out, I can't imagine parent's not visiting their child when they were in such serious trouble. It's too cruel. I hope her brothers dead too or I shall be furious with him for not visiting her too!

Now, let's move onto Gerard and Mikey. Why don't they come visit?!? I can understand Gerard being mad at her, maybe. But Mikey?! Maybe he doesn't even know she's there, but then he wouldn't know about Frankie either, and I can't imagine that, so they must.

Update now! I want to know what is going on!!!!

Cheers
Kat

Oh man, so many questions! Where do I begin? I know I sound like a broken record but it really a matter of a few chapter before you get your answers!

Omg they visit frankie!! And who are the guards? Maybe someone from he rpast.. and is it the real frankie? The one from her past?

Oh god I am dying here!!!

FUCK!!!
DON TELL ME DEY FREAKING BUSTED!!!!
UPDATE NOW!!!!
AWEEOME UPDATE HUN!!! =))
XOXO

wuvs it!

=D I'ma make another one, tonight.

lolness. I do, really. I love you quite..... much. If that makes sense.

So Viola's not as daring as she used to be. Mhmm.
Gray is like the male version of ex-Viola. Excpet he's not awhore (Right?) O__O. She's not a whore..... Um..... yeah. xD

WHO IS THIS MAN THAT MIGHT POSSIBLY KNOW HER?

Oh no! Changing the title of the story!!
No more banner!!!
Knowing Tera Joe, she'll probably make a new one.

Sneaky, sneaky, Gray and Viola.
Holy shit, I'm so not used to writing "Gray."
It's different. It's not Gerard.
It's not right!!!!!
INSANITY!!

ok, so PLEASE don't tell me that Vi is a mother (the only other possible link to the pictures is that at one point, she digressed to the mentality of an infant in the past- which I highly doubt)....anyway, back to the point...I really can't see Vi as a mother....but, if she is, is Gerard taking care of the child? Because that would be really weird....

ok, I'm done with my little rant now

=D
Bree

Yea!
I'm glad that Gray is helping her, even if I'm still not entirely sure that I like him...
He seems nice enough, but I don't know that he can replace Gerard. It just doesn't seem feasible.

So...the twists and turns of an adventure seeking the one and only Frank Iero. It seems only fitting that it would cause Viola trouble - it is after all Frank's middle name, yes? And Viola's for that matter. haha

Now, I'm going to harass you again - what the hell is going on?
All that about her parent's not being there during visiting hours strengthened my belief that they are dead. I really can't imagine another reason why they wouldn't visit. Even if there had been some terrible falling out, I can't imagine parent's not visiting their child when they were in such serious trouble. It's too cruel. I hope her brothers dead too or I shall be furious with him for not visiting her too!

Now, let's move onto Gerard and Mikey. Why don't they come visit?!? I can understand Gerard being mad at her, maybe. But Mikey?! Maybe he doesn't even know she's there, but then he wouldn't know about Frankie either, and I can't imagine that, so they must.

Update now! I want to know what is going on!!!!

Cheers
Kat

RIOT!xoxoSCARG33:

FREAKING MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
LOL
AWESOME BANNER!!!!!
XOXOX

Lilly_White:

Wow I love it so much suspense.

Awesome, thanks!

Brutal.:

I knew it. I knew it was going to be Gray, and I knew I wasn’t going to like him I knew it I knew it I knew it!
Hold on, let my bask in the glory of my omniscience for a moment.
All right, I’m done.

But gawd, Viola, you really know how to pick ‘em, don’t you? First Gerard, then Arthur and Lee, then Ray, and now some Gray guy with anger management issues? Holy cow. And what about that he’s here for a reason line? Is he there just because of his anger issues, or did he actually commit a crime, or…uh oh. I don’t like the thought of Viola fucking a criminal with anger issues. Even if he is a nice guy deep down. And he seems awful protective of her, and not in a good way either. Not like he actually wants to protect her, more like he wants to have complete control over everything he does. He’s one of those psychos that make women the nervous wrecks you see on Dr. Phil! I know it and you can’t convince me otherwise! I’m American, I’m an expert on these things!!

And the thing with Viola suddenly being popular…hm. I don’t think I like it either, but I mean, being a fucked-up teen she was at 15, I suppose that by banding together with “the four L’s” or whatever they call themselves, I guess she could gain control over the girl’s ward. I mean, what teen doesn’t want a little control? Especially Viola, coming from an environment where she had pretty much no control over her life—I can understand how it would give her solace to be in a position of such power, even if it was only in a mental ward.
That’s my psychological theory of the day. *adjusts scientific-looking glasses*

Oh god, I don’t like the sound of what Gray’s going to do. I don’t like it I don’t like it at all, Jay. Is he gonna order a distraction so he can sneak Viola in the guarded ward or something? And if so, what kind of distraction?? I don’t like the sound of this!!!

And also, on the note of sex: is Viola infertile or something? Because I don’t think they offer condoms in a mental ward, and knowing how sex-oriented the average teen is, by the amount of sex she and Gray are bound to have had, she probably would’ve been pregnant by now. Then again, maybe when you’ve got that much power over the other patients you can find a way to sneak stuff in the hospital…kind of like how prisoners sneak knives and stuff into jail even though it’s against regulations.

Or maybe they’re blackmailing one of the staff. Cool. :weird

And oh god you said one of my theories was correct! Jesus! But there was the one where her parents were dead, and one where she wound up pregnant...either way, she's totally fucked!!! You're confounding me and I don't like it!!! *whine* I need more!!!

As your wife, I feel obliged to comment about a certain matter...You spend awfully a lot of time thinking about Vi's sex life...who's a fictional character...should I be worried?
Oh and you gotta love Gray! You fucking gotta!

envy_music91:

OMG this story is causing my brain to hurt lol here are my theories....Gerards gf killed her parents and sent her into shock...idk lol gosh!!! No that cant be it because where would gerard and mikey be....and HOW THE HELL DID SHE MEET GRAY?!!! so confused! Well great update!!

I did explain how she met Gray, or rather Lily did. In I think chapter 3...How she wasn't responding to anyone and Gray was the first she talked to...

kitten-kat:

AHHHHH!!!!!!!
What the fuck is happening?!?!? I hate Gray. Already. I can't stand him, I don't trust him and I don't feel like he really loves Viola! I want Gerard back! NOW!!!!!!
You change whatever story line you had in your head and you write Gerard back into this story this instant!!! Do you hear me?!?! NOW!!

But but but...but Gray is the good guy! He's supposed to be the hero!
How can you not love him? How?

FrancyPansy:

omg wow, awesome.
I am on a short (2 day holiday) but I couldnt resist coming online and check if you updated!! hehehehe.
great great.. with each chapter i get more curious. ;)

eek I'm glad you did! Soo glad!

Dead.Demented.Cool.:

Holy wow, didn't take too long to put the banner up...

Well it is gorgeous!