Shadows of the World - Comments

beautiful.

Wow. Just, wow. I only read the first chapter but still. Daym gurl, you're brill. :]
Usually I read a story fast when it's really good and when I really like. But I think I'll read yours slow. It's just those type of stories you take in doses. I still think its good and I really like it haha, but I'll be taking my time.
Seeing as this is already done, I don't feel like I have to write a comment and egg and praise the writer. But poor you, you'll be getting a comment for almost every chapter. (Lucky you, there aren't that many.)
I've heard about you and your fabulous writing skills but I don't know why it's taken me so long to actually read something. Lace and Bones writer eh? I knew the writing was familiar. Anyhow, I just wanted to let you know how much I was awestruck by just that first chapter.
And I really like Carson. He seems so...I dunno, cool. I like strange.
You've just given me a new fictional guy to fantasize over. ;)

PS: By no means is this like Twilight. If you take it as a compliment then yes, it's as grabbing. But I think this story's plot is nothing like it. :D Oooh, watch out for my comment attacks. I'm going to start stalking your stories soon. Muhaha! XD

READ THE FIRST CHAPTER, AND I'M LIKE FLIPPING OUT.
THIS IS SO AMAZING, YOU KNOW THAT!?!??!
IT'S JUST LIKE, HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THAT!?
I'm trying so hard to work on my writing and stuff, and it's just like UGHHHH. I can never get it to be like this, and this is what I'm aiming for: To be able to describe well and stuff.
Now, I'm going to read the rest and go crazy xD

Wow.
I can't believe I didn't see this story and read it earlier.
I definitely regret that, you are probably one of my favorite authors on Mibba.
The way you write is beautiful and powerful, and it really speaks to me. Keep up the good work, I'm definitely subscribing to your newest story :)

This story is an absolute work of art and you're a beautiful writer. It's amazing.

OMG. I lovedd this storyyyyy [:

This story is really incredible. :D

Really amazing stories have i ever read, nice work:-D

Bleh, it's over :'( I honestly loved this so much. My theory was that James was sent to meet the dude/chick that has been helping them :D I hope so anyway. I can dream, no punn intended :D Thank you for writing such a beautiful story, well it's 7:10am and i've got to go to school in 35 minutes, so i'm going to make myself look presentable, again - thanks! :D

Ah, I cried when she kissed him and told everyone, seriously. And then when she picks up her bag and walks out i was like 'WAA.' your writing is really emotive :)

I stumbled apon this story just yesturday and read up to chapter ten until i fell asleep last night on my desk. yeah i know, stupid ha! thank god it's the weekend.

Anyway, i woke up and carried on reading. (yeah, no breakfast or nothing) I got half way through chapter 16 and decided to comment because you've worked so hard and now, you deserve a long comment to tell you everything that is good about what i have read so far.

Youre writing is amazing and this is some advice right here: GET THIS PUBLISHED! It's truly incredible and you deserve every ounce of praise that you recieve. Your stories are inspiring. I laughed at this line - "Yeah, you and the rest of the United States of Obesity." I'm english and all the british associate the americans with is obesity when i'm sure it's not really like that. I mean, come on? You associate us with fish and chips and the queen. If we are alot more than that, i'm sure you are too :)

I adore the way the characters peronalitys are being built up to create these wonderful characterisitcs. And i haven't even finished the story! I'm sure the rest of my time reading this will be amazing.

I can just imagine myself in one of those -aholic clubs standing up, introducing myself. "Hello everybody, i'm Ruth-anne and i'm a Shadows-of-the-world-aholic."

Thank you for spending your time to write this and i'll make sure to comment again.

-Ruth-anne

Wow . . . I mean holly crap. That was . . . so frikkin awesome! You could publish this or something!

whoa....clearly you've been writting for a VERY long time.........

now a days--- almost every plotline gets compared to Twilight because of it's fame....

but still.

I'm sorry I was so bad at commenting!
I really liked this story, and I know other people have said it
but you should look into getting it published =]

Just want to say i really adore this story! :D
you;re a really amazing writer!

Oh I absolutely love this story with a fiery passion.
The ending was fantastic.
The council, the way she took in Carson's star, that was just spectacular. She's so tricky!!
Thanks so so so so so much for writing this story; it's so beautiful and wonderful. The writing was just phenomenal, and unique, and the story... it's just mind-boggling. I love this so much!!!

....oh my goodness. that's all i acn say.

i just want you to know, that i cried when i finished reading this.

you are brilliant, beautiful, wonderful magic. i can't wait to read your first novel.

It was beautiful......more than I ever imagined.......I thought I would be disappointed by the ending (Which I was, a little bit, considering it is the ending), but it filled me with joy.....that Carson and James both go to live......

Thank you so much for this beautiful piece of art =)

I absolutely adored the ending!
I'm so sad it's over!
I guess now is the perfect time to read your other story huh?

Oh I loved following this story!! I'm sad to see it go! I can't wait to see what you'll do next.