Shadows of the World - Comments

this story is amazing. The imagery, the plot, the descriptive way you wrote it is all breath taking. I could see this being a movie the way you described everything just creates pictures in your head.
I love this :]

oh my goodness, i loved the update. i'm loving the creepiness of it. can't wait to find out more!

Ooh that is scary!!!! We've got to get rid of that Morrison/Lady in Blue! And Carson can't dieeeeee!!!!

I love your story. I got all kindsa excited today when I saw in my inbox that there was an update.

I just finished reading the first chapter...the first chapter! and fell absolutely in love with this story. it's so beautifully written!

now i am off to read the rest of it!

oh...and to subscribe!

Oh no!
This isn't good!
I think Carson told Clio without getting permission.
And now I think that Clio is in a load of trouble.
This is getting creepy. But creepy is good. =]
I love this.
Amazing update.

brilliant!

I just found this story and read it all....and I am speechless.

I only have four words for you:

You

Have

A

Gift

god, i can't believe that you write this beautiful masterpiece. i absolutely love every bit of it.

That last chapter wasn't bad at all. It was decent. This story is absolutly amazing. And if you think it's bad it's not like you can't edit it and make it better.
Keep up the good work!

oh! and i agree completely with MOAN-alia Lies about the sex scene. (yes, i'll say it right out because i enjoy saying things right out.) and the love i have for the lines 'love is not perfect. love is just us.' is something i can't quite describe with words...

what do you mean 'terrible'? it's getting more and more interesting; you do such a good job of layering on the suspense and such, leaving us hanging at the end of each chapter so chapter 14 magically turns to chapter 23.

You're forgiven. Even though I don't think it was bad at all.
But if it makes you feel better then I forgive you. :D
I can't wait till you update this story again, and I haven't really gotten a chance to read your other one, but I will I promise. :D
Much love!

woah nelly, talk about getting hit by a train at warp speed. perhaps a little bit of class skipping is in order? nah, that's what i'd do. :)

as for praise, i can only agree with the previous persons. you are very good.

This is getting more and more intense.
=O
I was listening to Lux Aeterna while reading this...ho-shiz.
I loved this, even if you didn't seem to like it. Your writing style is amazing and fluid, like honey! You should be proud of your writing.
I sure am proud of yours.

MOAN-alisa Lies:

WOAH! That's just weird! She's a he?

not exactly...

WOAH! That's just weird! She's a he?

This story is amazing! I haven't read anything like it before- please update soon! =)

I want to marry this story, seriously.
I just read the most recent update again and was so smiley throughout the whole thing.
Carson is just amazing. I want to steal him from the story and from Clio!
(evil laughter)
Seriously, so amazing.

This last chapter, Bright Light, is amazing. God. Not even just that, but the entire story. TT_TT I continue to bask in the beauty of your writing, man. It's spectacular. Keep writing amazingly!!!

incredible..thats the only way i can describe your story..it's different but i like different and its amazing..
i loved the update they are s cute :)
i cant wait for the next one