Shadows of the World - Comments

  • s f

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    Emily, this is.. wow. I have no words. It's new and perfect. I love it.
    October 24th, 2008 at 04:58am
  • stepheneatsyourface!

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    wow
    this is definitely a different and new emily!
    seriously everything is so intense and yet at the same time everything just seems so aloof but its okay.
    i dont know what words to use, but it was amazing! it is amazing!
    October 23rd, 2008 at 10:21am
  • caring is creepy

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    just wow.
    October 21st, 2008 at 11:41pm
  • blocpartyfan

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    i really like this story
    please continue
    = )
    October 20th, 2008 at 12:12pm
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    Amazing new story!
    And no, I don't think it was like twilight plot wise, just that both Bella and Clio have strong, strange feelings for a guy that is strange.
    But please continue writing it! I love it!
    It reminded me of twilight because of the volvo
    haha
    It reminded me of Twilight too, when I wrote in the Volvo. I almost changed to a Honda, but Honda's are hippie cars and Clio is definitely not a hippie. haha.
    October 19th, 2008 at 08:51pm
  • november.

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    I love this story.
    The end.
    October 19th, 2008 at 08:45pm
  • CemetaryGates

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    Book.Worm.4.Life:
    Amazing new story!
    And no, I don't think it was like twilight plot wise, just that both Bella and Clio have strong, strange feelings for a guy that is strange.
    But please continue writing it! I love it!
    It reminded me of twilight because of the volvo
    haha
    October 19th, 2008 at 10:16am
  • BlameTheStars

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    Amazing new story!
    And no, I don't think it was like twilight plot wise, just that both Bella and Clio have strong, strange feelings for a guy that is strange.
    But please continue writing it! I love it!
    October 18th, 2008 at 02:57pm
  • CemetaryGates

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    That was incredible.
    I'll subscribe for sure.
    It reminded me of Twilight for some reason though.
    It's probably just me.
    Keep up the good work.
    October 18th, 2008 at 05:26am