Shadows of the World - Comments

*sighs.
i so hope he doesn't die.
i do love a fairytale but non-cliche ending.
oh, well. i'll still love it whatever you write.

This story: AMAZING!! Writing, plot, everything. (Though this last part made me kinda sad)

I read a lot, and I have to say you are one of the better writing I read (and I can count the number of good writers I read on sites like these on two hands).

I don't want either of them to die!
more soon =]

I can't believe how good this story is!
You're like..the new Stephenie Meyer or something!
This should become a book!
Seriously!

Just read the first chapter, and I really like it so far!!
WOOOOT!
*subscribes*

if any of them die, i'll cry.
but i do love it xo

Ahhh!!!!
Okay, um...
I don't really know what to say...

Ooh! I know!
Do you know what's one of my favorite things about your story?
Well not really your story. Its more something about you.
That fact that you update like everyday.
I wish I could do that. Do you have already written?
I LOVED THE UPDATE, BUT IT WAS SAD.

Seriously, I still don't know what to say.

This truly is amazing...

YOU CAN'T MAKE HIM DIE!!! please! that would be so sad! : (

I love your story! It's sooo good!!!

I don't really know how to put how amazing this is into words.

But let me just say, that this story is one that I look forwards to the most.
When Mibba emails me saying you've updated, it makes my night.

So much so, that i'll stop whatever else i'm readiing and read your updates.

Utterly stunning.

NO! Carson can't die!
Ha, but that's up to you right?
Please don't make him die!
:)

dude, this needs to be published one day. incredible

That was fantabulously m-azing.
Definitely, definitely not crap.
Loved it, more soon!

That chapter definitely was not crap! I couldn't stop smiling while I was reading it, yay! Can't wait for the next chapter!

i refuse to let you think that chapter was crap.
i loved it.
and it was perfect.
so to be perfectly mature about it all... nerr :P

ohmygod.

If this story could be more perfect...

Gah, I don't even know what I'm saying. This is honestly amazing.

oh dear...

aww that was sad.... :(
poor carson...
poor clio...

wow i just now realize that they're names start with the same letter.
i can be so slow sometimes.. Lol.

omg!i love this story, its one of my favorites! PLEASE undate soon! : )