Shadows of the World - Comments

I knew there was more to Helena than just what he'd seen. Glad she's a great friend.

Poor James... and well, just... just :(

Happy Thanksgiving too :)

Stupid stupid mean Carson. Humph. :x
And I agree with the person (I don't remember who it was) that said
"Let Ant die then" Lol.

Ahhhh!
More soon..?? Please :D

l love this story. Lol.

sigh: that is so sad

I feel like I am reading a BOOK.

Please do continue. You really are a stand out author.

Let Ant die then!
And stop having Clio and Carsen ignore each other at school ahah more soon!

wow that was an intense chapter.. i didnt see that coming but i liked it cant wait for the next chapter

This story is fantastic, I've never read anything like it.
(:

see now, i did not see that coming.
i love it even so xo

Oh my goodness I love this story! And I like reading about Clio and Carson's relationship so Im glad this chapter had so much of it!!

loved chapter 16.
it was a nice connecting chapter.
ellie xo

oh, major change in tone.
i like it.
ellie xo

Ahh! Now I'm all confuzzled and stuff. Lol.
Update again! :D

I loved the update btw.

They can't be lying!
The woman is tricking Clio?
=/

Amazing chapter once again ;)

I Love this story. you have a talent that most writers on mibba don't have and it's a talent to draw reader in to your story. in most srories i just want to know the ending and in your story i want to know what happens next. i hope i made sense here :D. anyway i would like your autograph that when you're going to be famous i could sell it on ebay or somehing. :)))

Wow, great story. I love it. Words can not describe.

Update soon please.

Clio will get them through this =]
more soon!

Err... uhm. Wow. Just wow. I love your stories, honestly. And now I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY want to know who this red-headed woman is. UGH. But I have to wait, however, PATIENCE IS A VIRTURE..............

that I unfortunately don't have D:

Absolutely amazing chapter.


I don't really know what else to say.