In Too Deep - Comments

Love it <3

haha max got bitten
;)
more soon please!!!!!

hehe, I totally bite people when they noogie me!
Are you going to do a chapter with the sleep-over, or is the next chapter just going to be the next morning?

The first step of getting better is talking to someone about it. I know she technically already did that with Max, but didn't he sorta drag it out of her? Somewhat... Maybe?

I dream about having a boyfriend comfort me like that. But then again, that would require crying in front of said boyfriend, and I'm not big on crying in front of people. It was totally romantic though, running-makeup and all.

So I was thinking for our HP retrieval mission, do we want walkie-talkies, which are cheaper but might make extra noise, or expensive headset communicators which we also wouldn't have to use hands to carry around? And do you know anywhere we can buy shoes that will let us walk on the ceiling? :D

In each chapter, did you know, I cry? And then when I try to predict what's going to happen next... I cry even more? You're drying me out - that's why I'm drinking more and more water each day. The prequel and sequel made me think so much, you could smell my brains working.

Always and Forever,
Christy
P.S: I picture Jackie with a dark shade of red as hair (that's always in a ponytail) and olive, green eyes.
I picture Max with cerulean eyes and a light shade of brown for the hair.
I think my image of them is really weird. I don't remmeber how you decribed them, so I made the image in my mind shape around the way they act.

You know what? Compared to the prequel, I actually think the two main charactors are MATURING. Wow. It shows that you're letting your charactors DEVELOP. That's a rare quality for someone's story, you know?
Keep up the great work and update soon!

Sweet updating-ness!

He, I love it when people try to talk with their mouth full. It sounds so funny!

They are so totally in love, they just can't see it...

Poor Dina. I like her a lot better in this story than in Dirty Journalism, and no one deserves to have their mother die...

To be honest, I don't really remember what Jackie and Max look like. I'd suggest people for the banner, but sans déscription...

And now I'm gonna go try and guess what Max wants to talk to Jackie about. #1 idea is his current g/f.

picture them? Well, I kinda saw max how you saw them ^^ brown hair, brown eyes.
but I always thought of Jackie with brown hair and hazelish eyes. But I'm crazy I never listen to context clues of how the character looks, the name says it all. lol.

awesome, can't wait for an update.

i cant believe i almost forgot about this...thank got i found this sequel or else i wouldve thought it ended in paris....love the story by the way
more soon
:D

Hmmm, now has Dina really changed, or will she go back to being her evil self?

I like the hair ruffling part at the end. :D

Read all of this. RIGHT NOW. Haha, I'm hooked, yet again. Damn, girl, how do you do it!? Anyways, I'm working on that banner for you. Please, get another one up soon.

LOVE IT. need more. now
haha

LOVE IT. need more. now
haha

I really love this story(: .
Update soon ?

We don't hate the story, we love it! It's one of my favourites.

Keep writing!

Max's an immature jerk who needs to grow up. End of story.
Poor Catie......

Aww, they were cute while they lasted I guess... although they didn't last through the prequel. Anyways, at least Jackie's got her friends back.

As always, love the update

Anyono who utters the statement "I missed my baby" can not be anything but nasty.
She must be destroyed.

Max is such a jerk! He kissed here while he was going out with this Catie girl?
Anyways, love the update! It's great as always