hehe, I totally bite people when they noogie me! Are you going to do a chapter with the sleep-over, or is the next chapter just going to be the next morning?
The first step of getting better is talking to someone about it. I know she technically already did that with Max, but didn't he sorta drag it out of her? Somewhat... Maybe?
I dream about having a boyfriend comfort me like that. But then again, that would require crying in front of said boyfriend, and I'm not big on crying in front of people. It was totally romantic though, running-makeup and all.
So I was thinking for our HP retrieval mission, do we want walkie-talkies, which are cheaper but might make extra noise, or expensive headset communicators which we also wouldn't have to use hands to carry around? And do you know anywhere we can buy shoes that will let us walk on the ceiling? :D
In each chapter, did you know, I cry? And then when I try to predict what's going to happen next... I cry even more? You're drying me out - that's why I'm drinking more and more water each day. The prequel and sequel made me think so much, you could smell my brains working.
Always and Forever, Christy P.S: I picture Jackie with a dark shade of red as hair (that's always in a ponytail) and olive, green eyes. I picture Max with cerulean eyes and a light shade of brown for the hair. I think my image of them is really weird. I don't remmeber how you decribed them, so I made the image in my mind shape around the way they act.
You know what? Compared to the prequel, I actually think the two main charactors are MATURING. Wow. It shows that you're letting your charactors DEVELOP. That's a rare quality for someone's story, you know? Keep up the great work and update soon!
picture them? Well, I kinda saw max how you saw them ^^ brown hair, brown eyes. but I always thought of Jackie with brown hair and hazelish eyes. But I'm crazy I never listen to context clues of how the character looks, the name says it all. lol.
i cant believe i almost forgot about this...thank got i found this sequel or else i wouldve thought it ended in paris....love the story by the way more soon :D
Read all of this. RIGHT NOW. Haha, I'm hooked, yet again. Damn, girl, how do you do it!? Anyways, I'm working on that banner for you. Please, get another one up soon.