Hi I've been working on a story called Best Friends Till the End. It's different from anything I've ever written before, I usually make really silly stories- fan fictions. I would love some feedback on the story, I don't really know much about this genre, so any help is greatly greatly appreciated. Everyone's comments are more than welcome but I would love it if someone who knows a thing or two...

Hi everyone. I've been writing a story called Art Schooler's that I want some comments on. I need some advice on what I can change or what you like. I'm willing to comment on anyone else's story. My story is 4 chapters long right now, about 3,000 words long, I can read anything though. It might take a little bit of time for me to finish reading it, as I've been rather busy lately, but I will...

I'm a bit perturbed by this new comment swap system. I have now left 11 comments on 11 different stories and how many comments have I gotten on the story that I desperately need feed back on? Exactly zero. None, nada, nilch. It's been about a week now. Now, don't get me wrong, I understand that people may be too busy to be on Mibba right now. I guess I'm just eager to get some advice. Maybe I...

Hi guys, my sisters and I made this song a little while ago and we want to share it with the world. Check us out at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5QjiVIRa_cWe hope you like it! if you do like it the share it! If you like it then leave a comment telling us how you feel about it!! Like, comment, share and subscribe...Or don't. I can't force you to do anything that you don't want to do. Sorry to...

Hi everyone, I'm trying to write this story ,Captive, and I just finished the third chapter so I was wondering if any of you lovely people would be willing to read my story thus fa and tell me your thoughts, ask questions, express concerns or anything! (except insults) If you are willing please let me know which one of your stories you want me to read and comment on! I really need some feedback, I...

Hi everyone, I'm trying to write this story ,Captive, and I just finished the first chapter so I was wondering if any of you lovely people would be willing to read my chapter and tell me your thoughts, ask questions, express concerns or anything! (except insults) If you are willing please let me know which one of your stories you want me to read and comment on! I really need some feedback, I want...

My band teacher wants us to have "musical moments" while we're playing. I can understand what he's saying, but it's like i can't really connect because i'm too focused on playing loud enough or soft enough or playing the right notes. My friend had one the other day, and while it was awkward for me (she was in a complete trance) I was sort of happy for her i guess. I think it's good that she can...

I think i'm feeling heart break for the first time. I told him how i felt about him and he pretended that he was okay with it for a while, and i pretended i didn't mind waiting for him to give me an actual response to my confession. I waited so long, patiently, for him to at least give me some kind of sign. Well i think i just got it. He's been acting terribly towards me, calling me names, talking...

Hi, I'm looking for a bit more feedback on my and Edie15's story "Turtle" there are quite a few chapters, so i understand if you only read one or two but it'd be awesome if i could get at least one person to read the whole thing and comment! Leave a comment telling me which one of your stories you want me to read (the whole thing! I'll read it i promise) and i'll get to work on that! Also, please...

Hey everyone! I added a chapter to my and Edie15's story (inspired by something that really happened to me, i promise) I'd like some more feed back on it though, so if anyone is interested, maybe we could do a little comment swap? You read my story and tell me what you think and i'll do the same for you! maybe i'll get edie15 to read it as well! (maybe) so comment with the story you want me to...

Hi, i've seen some really cute profiles that people have and i was wondering how they got them to llok like that. On the about page i mean. Mine is kind of boring and i want to spice it up a little, but i'm not sure how. If someone could message me, or comment on this journal entry and tell me how to do it that might be great.And if this is the wrong way to go about asking for help, let me know...