it took me 6 years to go back to my story "The absent emptiness" and do rewrites and revisions. oh man did it need it. 6 years changes you, your mindset, opinions, morals, principles, and after rereading it, I really didn't like some of the language I used, how rushed it seemed, how little developed it was at parts, the dynamics and interactions between characters was lacking at times or it seemed...

Okay lets see.i highly recommend "Elfen Lied" a very deep, moving, and utterly ultra violent and bloody anime series. there are dark characters, but this is offset by cute and cuddly characters too, which makes it all that heart wrenching when bad things happen to them. Each character has some form of trauma or post traumatic stress, and each ones demons comes back to haunt them. the cute "cat...

I remember back as a kid with my two older sisters.Mandy was 3 days and 3 years older than meVanessa was 2 years older than me.You'd think Mandy would be the leader in everything we did, but it wasn't ever that way.Vanessa was always the leader in everything, Mandy was the second opinion and i was the follower.They would play girl games together with no boys allowed, and i told them that i'd run...

Okay, well i've never anything like this before on here or even on the internet, so let's how things turn out.I have always wanted to be a creative writing teacher, always. But i didn't get on the fast track, slacked off and never went college hunting, never took the SAT's, and didn't really plan on going to college. Instead, i joined the military and did a 4 year stint as a combat medic.After...

The wanting and yearning to learn more about myself is getting stronger and stronger within me each passing year. I don't want to live my life not knowing about my biological parents and it frustrates me that all the online "Help" sites are specifically for people adopted on this continent! I feel that i can't fully understand myself or even close the gap on my own internal mystery and i feel that...

Okay, here's my take and philosophy on that quote i just thought of..What it means is that once knowledge is obtained, the boundaries of ignorance are lifted. But once those boundaries are lifted, complacency creates the new ignorance space.Perfect example.Our society in itself, has been a perfect demonstration of this philosophy.Post-war America during the 1950's (1950-1953) was a place of...

Okay, i'm not trashing on anyone in specific here, but..First off, no where am i saying that i am the best writer on here.I have flaws, grammatical errors, even sometimes vague writing. Great, i'm willing to admit that i suck at somethings on here.With that out of the way, sadly i'm not the only one who has some improvement on writing. ALl that i see on here poetry wise, is "Blood, knives, razors,...