i- i am crying. dear lord. not the ending i expected, but a fantastically written story, nonetheless.
...i miss alphonse. could you give him the message that i want him to come back? haha i feel as if i am faerie and everything she lost that night, i lost it too. i feel like i love a great deal of trust and love, and they were replaced with the weight of the world and sorrow.
that is proof of what a fantastic writer you are, dear emily.
I've been reading this on Quizilla, and now I read it here too. And I also noticed that there's going to be a sequel and it made me sooooooo excited. :) Can't wait to read what happens next!!
I'd been wondering how this was going to end. I'd come up with loads of different ideas (none sensible) but I was not expecting that for sure. I cannot wait for more. Poor Lily. First her husband has never really loved her and then he shots her! I hope they get away... but I have a feeling you'll make us wait to find out.
I loved the emotion conveyed in the chaos of the last few paragraphs. Awesome.
I must say, "Bravo!" I can't help but feel at least a little sad that your story will be ending shortly. But I will be eternally satisfied that I was able to read it! You are a supurb writer!