That was perfect, for real. Not too much too soon. Perfect. I wanted to punch Tre. Sorry, my head's a little off (yes for sleeping all day!). I'll leave a better comment later.
Ahaha...they FINALLY fucking kissed! At first I thought it was gonna be Abigail when Tre walked in (which I'm pretty damn sure you took into consideration when you wrote it like that!!!), I'm super glad that it wasn't though! Can't wait to read the next update <3
Totally relating to the desire to see the other person in complete shambles only to be horribly disappointed.
I really can't wait for the reunion... I feel it'll be really fucking intense. Not like Inception intense, but like yeah... camping (get it cause intense sounds like in tents! yuck, yuck, yuck.).
Sequel -- kind of thought that was going to be inevitable. I'll smite you if you don't.
I knew you would make us wait! I liked the step out this chapter took. Not all of them go deep inside the minds of the characters (not that they're any worse!!) so it was nice to have one that does. You vary the styles of these chapters a lot- and I love it :]
And as for the sequel- go for it!! I love sequels!!
Hi there! Just wanted to say I really love your story and I'm so curious what'll happen next. And btw, Abigail has to disappear...now! Heh. Anyway, update soon and thanks for sharing this adorable story. Cheers!
yay, i'm all caught up!! i kinda liked abigail and wanted to know about her at first. now i wanna pull out her hair and burn it. i can't stand her at all. when you first introduced rilla, i was wasn't so interested, she didn't sound very unique. and then the more i've gotten to know about her, the more i like her. i this was real and adrienne didn't exsist (how dare i saw such a thing, i know) i'd seriously want them to end up together. i love this story. just saying. oh, and thanks or the blue-haired billie. that's one of my favorite colors on him. blue and black. :D
Ahhh, I love Hollie <3 Yes! Finally, dumbass (Billie Joe, not you :D)! Billie has a crush! Billie has a crush! [/sing-song voice]
Abigail should go jump off a bridge...yeah, I said it!...Oh, yes, I went there! And then Billie can sweep Rilla off her feet and they can live happily ever after and la-dee-da-da! xD
...Or not, I mean you're the author, so...it's whatev...
You did a fucking great job building the tension. I mean I saw it coming, but was totally like "Ho shit," when they saw each other. Can't wait to see how it all plays out... please let it play out soon.
fantastic!! I was about to freak on Mibba when I saw you updated twice. I thought my subscription updates were crapping out again. But low and behold they weren't!!! I really really liked your writing in these last two. Your attention to detail was top notch. I'm excited for more because now that Rilla is seemingly out of the picture, I just know Billie will go back to Abigail and that just can't happen. :D
I loled at the friends being over protective. Mine are the same way. Good luck to Bill on ever getting them to not totally hate him forever.
AGH, I wanted to get in front of him and be like, "No, get you ass back there!" The suspense is too much, man. Make that shit happen soon! For my heart. I'm an old woman -- I can't take it.
You are so much better at like building the body than I am. Like your story just seems fuller if that makes sense. I guess that's where the whole patience thing I go on about comes in.
Awww! I squee'd! Hahaha I love Mike and Tre! They're so funny!