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  • Rocket Queen

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    Brian needs a swift quick up the bum - so says moi. :P He needs to realise that the kingdom needs him back pronto! And he and Lyndsey need to stop the fighting because it makes me sad... in the pants. XD

    Also, I'm totally on board with Sarah about Matt and Zack showing up in hula skirts to confuse the hell out of Bartholomew's lackeys. Haha.
    September 18th, 2011 at 09:37am
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    Aaaw this chapter is made me all kinds of sad. NO FIGHTING! I hate fighting...but I secretly love it at the same time. Great chapter. More soon please! <3
    September 18th, 2011 at 02:14am
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    BRIAN, COME HOME WITH MEEEE! I mean her. I mean me. Yes, me. I know this story is coming to an end, but I don't want it toooooooo! <3
    August 30th, 2011 at 05:54pm
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    Chapter 19: Damn it, I was kinda hoping that they would kiss! But I really think Brian should go back to the kingdom with her, but they also need to come up with a plan first!

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    August 30th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Brian, Brian, Brian... it's time to embrace your fate and take back your destiny. I love your stories so much, I don't want them to be over.
    August 29th, 2011 at 07:20pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Aww too adorable now that they're back together.

    Can't wait till Brian changes his mind and kicks some damn Bartholomew ass! Like I said before. XD
    August 29th, 2011 at 12:39pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Yay!! =D x
    August 16th, 2011 at 06:19am
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    That was the sweetest reunion ever! I was waiting for this to happen and it was just so amazing. I am stoked for the next update.
    August 16th, 2011 at 01:06am
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    Yaaaaaaaaaaaay! They're together again! It was so sweet when Brian and Lyndsey were hugging and she was so relieved to have found him.

    NOW HE'S GONNA KICK SOME BARTHOLOMEW ASS! :P
    August 15th, 2011 at 12:46pm
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    Chapter 18: Awwwwwwwwwww Yay!! :D I'm so glad that Brian and Lyndsey have reunited, I couldn't stand to hear about her being so heartbroken anymore!

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    August 15th, 2011 at 05:46am
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    TOGETHER AT LAST! Do you know how long I have been waiting for this to happen? DO YOU?! Forever. Seriously. And here it is! And it was perfect! Just as I knew it would be. LOVE IT! <3
    August 15th, 2011 at 05:33am
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    Awww, two awesome chapters. Incredibly sad, but beautifully written chapters. The friar being Brian's cravat was a nifty idea.
    August 9th, 2011 at 11:32pm
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    Ahhhh that's so great that the friar found Brian's cravat! I was wondering how it was going to be discovered that Brian was still alive, out there somewhere. It was so adorable that Zach knew exactly what the stars were but seemed too embarrassed to say it himself. XD
    August 2nd, 2011 at 05:40am
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    Loved this chapter, even though it made me sad. DON BE SADS BRIBRI! I COME FOR YOU SOOOOON! =D
    August 1st, 2011 at 10:47pm
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    Hot damn!! Loved it = )
    Bless Zacky and his downtrodden intelligence!! Tee hee.
    And poor sad Brian!! But it's okay 'cause I know that soon Lyndsey and he will cross paths and all will be swell again!!

    And I'm not gonna lie...I'm still hoping you will reconsider the hula skirt thing =D x
    August 1st, 2011 at 09:05am
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    Chapter 17: Ah man, poor Brian...it wasn't cool of Zacky and Matt to laugh at him when he shared something that means a lot to him. But thank god that man found that special cloth that belongs to Brian!

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    August 1st, 2011 at 05:19am
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    Turning she came face to face with her mouth. - I'm thinking that 'mouth' should be 'mother'? It looks so weird that way. XD
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    Aw, poor Nathaniel. Having to dance and be degraded by the king and the renegades. I felt so bad for him when he was taken away. But I feel even worse for Lyndsey! For a moment there I was thinking you were going to turn her into like a sexual slave for either Bartholomew or the renegades. Poor girl. :/ At least she hopes that Brian's coming back!

    That will make his comeback even more triumphant.
    July 24th, 2011 at 07:17pm
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    Chapter 16: Usually, I would ask for your permission to kill the fat asshole known as Bartholomew, but I'm gonna leave that up to Brian since he deserves the satisfaction of ending that man's life by his own two hands!!!

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    July 24th, 2011 at 12:26pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Whoop to the return of Lyndsey. And now for the return of Brian to the kingdom and then his royal highness can get his butt kicked.
    I have a very important question for you though...when they come back and storm the castle...will Matt and Zacky be wearing hula skirts and fruit on their heads like Timon and Pumbaa to distract the guards?? Cause I think that would just be something special =D x
    July 24th, 2011 at 09:08am
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    Lyndsey needs to find Brian already!!!!
    July 24th, 2011 at 08:41am
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