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  • HeartFailure

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    Haha!! Lyndsey is probably going insane at your ending!!
    Tee hee!!
    Loved it ducky!! Can't wait for more = ) x
    August 20th, 2009 at 10:32am
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    YAY!
    Loveee!
    :D
    August 20th, 2009 at 07:03am
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    Kay so it took me to the part where he was like, "Yea, don't go there, I don't run that place." That it clicked that I think it's like The Lion King.
    But that may be because that's the best Disney movie EVER.
    Sorry, I just got REALLY excited xD

    This is really cool man. :]
    August 18th, 2009 at 07:25am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Oh my goodness... I totally got goosebumps from that, great chapter!
    August 15th, 2009 at 12:12am
  • losingXmyXreligion

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    LOVE IT!
    MORE SOON PLEASE!!!
    August 12th, 2009 at 11:51pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Love the way it ended with Be Prepared.

    And the foreshadowing, as Vicki said was great. We all know what's gonna happen next!

    *bites fingernails in anticipation*
    August 12th, 2009 at 10:18pm
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    awww im sry about the music player thing
    but wonderful chapter
    and so the plot thickens and the story truely begins!!
    dun dun dunnnnnn!!!
    lol keep writing!!!
    August 12th, 2009 at 08:19pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Be Preparedis, in my opinion, the best song from Lion King.
    I LOVE IT!! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaand I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!
    Mhm, yes I did = ) x
    August 12th, 2009 at 04:32pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Oooh, foreshadowing! I loved it, the portrayal of emotions was so realistic.
    August 6th, 2009 at 11:49pm
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    I love it!!!!
    pure amazingness!!!
    keep writing!!!
    August 6th, 2009 at 06:13pm
  • losingXmyXreligion

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    LOVE IT!!!
    MORE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
    August 5th, 2009 at 05:58pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    He took his horse by the reigns and headed back the way he'd come, back toward the other end of the alley. -- drop the g in reigns. ;)
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    Love the lecture and how Brian is all ashamed of himself; twas cute. ^^
    August 5th, 2009 at 07:38am
  • Rocket Queen

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    You're right...absolutely no spelling mistakes this time. ^.^

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    My fave line:

    "What, are you scared?" Brian asked, trying to let out a laugh to prove his bravery in such a dark place.

    Haha, sooo cute. Brian trying to be all brave when really he's scared out of his mind. <3
    July 30th, 2009 at 02:18am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Oh, this is so good... seriously, this movie made me cry. Oh, Lyndsey... how you gave in so easily. I loved it!
    July 26th, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    I can't help but picture Brian as a lion everytime.. is that so wrong? Haha. And I was wondering when the human equivalent of Nala was going to be introduced - can't wait to see what happens next!

    The music was perfect too. :)
    July 26th, 2009 at 08:13pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Oh Lyndsey.....so easily swayed!! Lol.
    Loved it!! x
    July 26th, 2009 at 10:01am
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    Thought I'd leave you a nice little comment
    eventhoughialreadyreadthefirstfourchapters ;D

    BAHAHHAHA
    Exciting.
    I picture Egypt every time... is that bad?
    I see Brian in the whole Aladdin outfit, running around in the sand but yet the girl, in one of those old medieval dresses lmfao
    July 26th, 2009 at 07:20am
  • synfulpixie

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    ah this story is as tasty as a Baconnator from Wendy's. I can't wait for another morsel. :D *subscribes*
    July 26th, 2009 at 05:21am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Silly Brian for being so gullible. I'm anxious for what is yet to come.
    July 19th, 2009 at 12:00am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    July 18th, 2009 at 08:22pm
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