The King - Comments

I was wondering how you'd describe the elephant graveyard/Renegade Alley and the renegades/buffalo. Haha. since it isn't set in Africa, makes it a little harder to do. But you pulled it off. :D

I love how some of the dialogue is from thre actual movie, too. In my head, Brian's dad has that deep booming voice like Mufasa and I keep expecting him to call him Simba instead of Brian. ^^

Imma go watch the Lion King right now.

Silly Brian. Falling for it do easily!!
I've just remembered that Lion King makes me blub like a baby...bad times. Lol.
Can't wait for more!! Eeeeeeeeep!! x

Oh, "The Lion King" adaptation. How I love it so, =) Your descriptiveness is brilliant Amanda, and I can't wait for more.

LOVED IT!!!! Yes I did!!!
Man, I do really want to watch Lion King now!!
Tee hee.
Can't wait for more!! = ) x

I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
but. again. you knew that already.
LOL!

Oooooooooooooooooooo!
Very interesting! :) Lookin forward to it my Mandy <3

Disney adaptations are always fun = ) Tee hee.
LOVED IT!!! And I can't wait to see what you do with it love!!! x

HAHAHAHA! you've already heard my comments on this xD
Wow, I can leave a story comment, but I can't seem to reply to profile comments on time xD But yee =]]
This is gonna be one helluva story.

Interesting start... (:
Can't wait for more.

OH.
MUH.
GAWD!!!
IT'S MY STORY!!!
I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT.
But you already knew that...LMAO!
MORE SOON PLEASE!!!

<333

Very intriguing. More soon?