The King - Comments

I agree with Sarah. Haha. I can't wait either to see who the Timon and Pumbaa characters are going to be played by. I have a feeling it's totally gonna be funny though.
Ohhh and I wanna know what happens to Lyndsey!

(And I just got an image of Brian swinging his hair from side to side like Simba did with his mane in the movie in the montage as he gets older lmao.)

Loved it!!
I'm rather intrigued to see who you have as Timon & Pumbaa =D I reckon your casting will make me giggle!! x

Seriously I found this story and fell in love with it
It's based off my favourite movie EVER
When I read the end of the first chapter, i was like "Hm, that kind of seems familiar...."
And it totally was, you took the story line and changed it perfectly and made it your own
Seriously I can't wait to see what happens next
I really hope that the updates won't take long

I love how perfectly you took the storyline and made it your own. The scenes are believable and your writing is refreshing. I truly felt sorry for Brian in this chapter, a job well done.

Awww poor Brian!!
Stupid Bartholomew. He needs a swift kick up the arse is what he needs. Grrrrrrr.

Can't wait for more love = ) x

Wow, I loved the update. Your descriptions were amazing, as always. I felt so sorry for Brian, and feel like punching Bartholomew in the face, bwhaha.

FINALLY!
IT'S UPDATED!
my poor Brian is banished! that was so sad dude...and amazingly written!
i love it!
hope you update again soon!
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hey now! i do NOT hate you at all!!!

but seriously...no kiss? none at all? not even like...a little peck? nothing? dude....that is what i call cruel and unusual punishment right THERE. are you trying to kill me?

BAHAHA!!! LOVE THE UPDATE THOUGH!!! and let me tell you somethin'. Brian fighting with a sword? good GOD in Heaven......i'll leave it at that. keep this baby PG-13.

LOVE IT!
MORE SOON!
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Your pacing was great and everything fit wonderfully together. Infinite sadness when the king died.

Brian pulled her to her feet and ushered her up the last two steps, intent on leading her further into the caste and toward her bed chambers, when someone grabbed his arm with great force. - forgot the l in castle.
When Bartholomew gave ho reply, - no instead of ho, rofl.
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NOW I know what you mean when you said the last chapter was setting up for this one haha. It all fit perfectly together. :)
I was like noooooo when the king was killed.

Ohhhhhhhhh this scene in the film always makes me well up!!!
I actually have tears in my eyes just thinking about it!! *wipes away the tears*
Have I ever told you how much I love your writing?? 'Cause I dooooooooooooo!!
And this was no exception!! Loved it!! x

what a wonderful update!!
it was amazing because of the whole cliff hanger on the last chapter lol
and wow, what a lovely brother

This scene in the movie made me cry, this scene in the play(which had pretty cool effects)made me cry and this is making me leak a few tears. I hate Bartholomew. And Brian and Lindseys moment was ruined :( as depressing as it is,I loved the update :)

Yay!
Updates!
:D

I hope your move goes well btw...

Off to read Soul Salvation now xD

UGH! lol BRIAN MUST GET REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cliff hanger?
so not cool man!
you better update now! muahaha

YOU ENDED IT RIGHT THERE?!?!? REALLY?!?!? REALLY REALLY?!?!? WITHOUT EVEN A LITTLE KISS?!?!? gaaah!!! cruel and UNUSUAL punishment, that's what THAT is.

BUT!!! this chapter was brilliant!!! KUDOS to you for making this when it wasn't in the movie. it fits PERFECTLY. and brian and i are really cute, if i do say so muhself...bahahahaaaaa!!!

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
AND MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Heh, I love how this chapter is what made it different from the movie! I love how he kept repeating the line about his hair, so adorable and so typical. And the heat has been turned up a few notches, I see. Can't wait for the next one, =)

This is such a great story! Not only do I adore the movie(and broadway show) but I adore this story as well! It's similar but it's not too similar. If that makes sense. I love it! Hopefully nothing or nobody breaks the little moment that Brian and Lyndsey are about to have...

Heat pounding, Lyndsey was practically frozen as she felt Brian nearing her. - heart instead of heat. ;) And you were sooo close to the end before I picked that mistake! XD
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I know! I was reading through like, "Where was this scene in the movie? I don't remember this.." and it turns out you'd made it up anyways, lol, and it fit in just fine.

Haha, I loved when Brian was getting ready and he's doing all this stuff to make himself look better. He sounds sooo arrogant and cocky, but this is why we luff him. :D

I especially loved how, "This is how I like it," was repeated throughout the chapter, haha, twas great. It's like no one takes him seriously, he has to keep repeating himself. Poor Bri. rofl.

The ending was sweet.. they're so gonna get it on, haha.