The King - Comments

Oh my JESUS this was depressing. And THOSE RENEGADES! Getting all up in my business, manhandling me. They better watch theyselves for when Papa Brian comes home...all I'm sayin. I LOVED IT! Please update soon...andpleaseletBriancomehomeamen.

Chapter 14
Aw, it's quite sad that the boys have to live like that
Not having a permanent home
Fighting dogs for food and stuff...
Hopefully Brian will learn and get used to this
Because it is the complete opposite to his previous lifestyle

Chapter 15
Well at least they don't have to always have to eat leftovers
But they won't be able to do this stealing method for a long time though
Over time, Brian will get dirtier too, living on the streets and such
So, they should take advantage of this until Brian won't get through as that clean and stuff anymore
Brian seems to be acceptig his new life, but still missing his old one

I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Aw this chapter made me sad that the boys have to live the way they are. I can't wait for the Brian to go home! <3

Nyaw, it made me kinda sad to read the part where the boys were eating scraps. You made it sound so gross at first with the description of the turkey leg having saliva and teeth marks haha. I feel bad they have to live that way. The part about Matt wrestling the dogs though made me lawl. I can imagine him actually doing that and the image is hilarious. XD

Haha! Oh man, Brian didn't even have to try real hard to sweet talk the girl. That whole scene actually reminded me a little of the scene in Aladdin where Aladdin and Abu are trying to steal food. OH! New story idea for you! An adaptation of Aladdin. :)

The bit at the end was bittersweet with Brian accepting his new life even though he was going to miss his old one. I can't wait till he goes back to claim the throne.

Loved it!!!!! As I pretty much knew I would = ) x

Chapter 15: Again I say, this is a good life lesson for Brian. He's really improving on his survival skills and the part where he flirted with the girl at the bakery made me laugh! XD

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EXCELLENT UPDATE! It's insane how much I missed this story. You're amazing. More soon please! <3

Chapter 14: It saddens me that Brian has to live like Matt and Zach do, but it's also a good thing because now he'll know what he has to do so survive in the real world and he's lucky to have Matt and Zach there to help him every step of the way!

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How have I not found this story before!!?!? I mean it's my favorite Disney movie plot with characters from my favorite band!! It's genius!!!! I love it :)

AWESOME!! Just like I knew it would be = )
I can't wait for more!!

And I just want to give Brian a MASSIVE hug...and then move swiftly on to Zacky and give him just a bit more than a hug ; ) x

First off, I hate, HATE Bartholomew, he's sick and twisted
Looks like the kingdom will go downhil from there now with the Renegades being there
Haha, it was kinda amusing, Matt trying to tell a story about him seeing a chick getting naked, but he gets constantly interrupted by Zacky xD
At least they found Brian because I really believe that he wouldn't have lasted any longer
Not gonna lie, I'm constantly thinking of the musical numbers of the movies when their part would come in the story, lmao
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Haha, I love how Matt is trying to tell the story about how he saw some chick undressing but Zack is like, having none of it. XD It's also very amusing to imagine those two boys walking around in torn up peasant clothes.

I agree with Vicki. The bittersweet element was definitely believable. I just wanted to run up to Brian and give him a big ol' hug!

IT'S BRIAN!

I love this story, I seriously do. Matt and Zacky made my day haha. MORE SOON PLEASE! <3

I love how the chapter flowed so well, and the way you incorporated the bittersweet element into the dialogue was believable. I love how you introduced Matt and Zack, it was just so cool.

Whoop!!!! Loved it!! :-) x

Chapter 13: Thank god that Matt and Zach were there to save Brian!!!
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...holy TOLEDO! YOU UPDATED! YOU REALLY, REALLY UPDATED!

I love this story. I miss this story. I NEED MORE of this story! Bartholomew (did I spell that wrong? I think I spelled that wrong) makes me so MAD. Poor Queen. Poor everyone. POOR BRIAN! Poor Lyndsey ;P I WANT BRIAN BACK!

MORE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! <3<3<3

Chapter 12: Bartholomew is truly one sick and twisted man, which makes me ill. Thank you so so so so much for updating this story. I love it!

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I just found this, and I'm in complete love with it. More soon?

I also am curious as to who Timon and Pumbaa are going to be, but it's bound to be hilarious. I agree with Cat, what will happen to Lyndsey? I do love this story.