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  • scute

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    Why do I get the feeling that something big is going to happen soon?
    and that something might not be very good :/

    I like that she's kind of playing with patrice a bit (;
    I love seeing him squirm because he obviously wants her bod.

    Milan is being a sweetheart, he seems so cute and innocent in this story
    he needs a nice girl.

    well. as usual I loved the update
    can't wait for more so I can figure out what the heck is going on !!
    ((:
    December 6th, 2009 at 12:06am
  • layna loves her caps

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    kjsldfjklsjfklsjflsjdklfjs
    there's your comment.
    i love this and you.
    the end.
    December 5th, 2009 at 09:49pm
  • schennsational;

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    I love this but I love you more. I can't even explain how amazing your writing is. You woo me all the time. It's fucking fantastic. Can you please stop being so amazing? I need to catch up!!

    Also, you should update like now? Yeah, that sounds about right.
    Sorry my comment isn't better. I'm like.. IDEK. My brain is mush.
    I love yooooooooou.
    That is all.
    <3
    November 29th, 2009 at 08:58am
  • layna loves her caps

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    holy.crap. that was amazing!
    but she's starting to slip & slide with the emotions.
    could she have finally met her match?
    i hope so, so she can start letting loose!
    November 28th, 2009 at 05:53am
  • hockehhockehya

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    I LOVE this. I wish I was a better comment giver but I'm not. I really like how different this story is from others. Keep up the good work *slaps gold star on computer screen*
    November 28th, 2009 at 04:10am
  • scute

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    Well, you've done it again.

    I LOVE how much sexual tension there is, it's funny and aggrevating at the same time hahaha but that's okay, it's totally worth it.

    I still don't know who you plan on getting her together with, or even how you're going to do it. you've worded everything so nicely that it could really go either way at this point

    I love the random moments where I laugh out loud at this. Like at the end, how she describes the tension between her and looch. Yummmmm hahaha
    November 27th, 2009 at 04:18pm
  • slowburnbaby

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    I seriously love this story, Your style is just so amazing it makes me head explode, and I realllly want her to end up wioth Looch=]
    Patrice is too, 'i"m gunna get you like you get everyone of your other clients'(even though he doesn't know her full job)
    I think she should tell somebody what her purpose is, casue I have a feeling she's gunna get drunk(no doubt Looch or Patrice's doing) and spill the beans to someone who would blab it to everyone.
    November 21st, 2009 at 04:08pm
  • schennsational;

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    More. Please, just write more. I'll love you forever.
    You know who I want her to end up with.
    You know what I want to happen.
    And I know that I know more than anyone else where this is concerned.
    I think that is fucking phenomenal.
    Just like your writing.
    Now update it.
    If you love me, you'll do it. ;)
    November 20th, 2009 at 05:58pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    Would "starting over" with Patrice, by any chance, result in a certain Fuck Fest?
    If so, get that next chapter up woman! :D
    Love you.
    November 20th, 2009 at 06:27am
  • scute

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    Oh gosh.
    Oh gosh. Oh gosh. Oh gosh.
    This just keeps getting BETTER!
    I can honestly say that I have no idea how to feelabout her and Milan... Like, yeah that who I was initially gunning for, but now he seems a little off. Like they'll just end up as friends because of their past?
    I'm going to to say that I'm team Patrice after this chapter. He's being civil but still the same guy he was before. I'm convinced he likes her, convinced.

    Gahhh, can't get enough of this ((:
    November 20th, 2009 at 05:58am
  • Jessica;

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    Just started reading this and although I'm seriously confused, I love this.
    I actually just think I need to go back and reread it.
    But you're an amazing writer and I love thissss.
    More soon. <3
    November 17th, 2009 at 04:51am
  • mybubbles567

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    um.....
    Amazing story???
    I just started reading it and I LOVE IT!!
    I love the main character, she's like super woman without the cape, and the hidden weakness!!!!!
    I can't wait for moooore <3<3<3<3<3
    November 16th, 2009 at 11:58pm
  • scute

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    He would just nail me for trying to start one of those “I don’t think you’re hot enough even though you actually are” games where we’re most likely going to end up banging each other senseless in the end. -- BURST OUT LAUGHING. please let this happen?? hahahaha

    Fantastic. We’re not even doing the dance-floor dirty and I’m breaking a hormonal sweat. -- well i think any woman in her right ming would break out in a hormonal sweat if they were withing even 10 feet of milan. he's soooo damn sexy hahaha

    Eh, I’ll thank him for being my dancing guide when I stop thinking about his muscles. -- that will NEVER happen (:

    once again, i ADORE this story ((:
    i'm really starting to think that patrice is the one who has a thing for Roark, but i could be wrong. it just seems like he's ALWAYS there, ya know? As for Looch, that poor-freaking-boy. it broke my heart when i read that whole story ):

    i want more more more moreeeee :D
    November 16th, 2009 at 11:00pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    Two update? Is it Christmas?
    Legit made my day.
    And I guess the sexual inuendos will be enough for now... but I'm still expecting something BIG!
    Just for the record.
    November 16th, 2009 at 08:46pm
  • schennsational;

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    OH MY GOD.


    “Nice sex hair.”

    “Why, thank you. I can give you some too if you like it that much.” That effortless lazy grin and hot breath against the back of the neck nearly sent my hormones into a frenzy. Nearly.

    “Wishful thinking?”

    “Or foreshadowing.”

    “Maybe your wildest dreams are a little too wild.”

    “Or yours aren’t wild enough.”


    LOVE. SERIOUSLY. LOVE. I LOVE THE BANTER BETWEEN THEM. ASKDJFHASKLJFHASKLDJFHA. I squeed like freakin' school girl or some shit reading this. GIVE. ME. MORE.

    “He told me he’s afraid you’re using him or you’re going to.”

    “To get to you?”

    “Something like that.”

    “Why?”

    “Because it wouldn’t be the first time.”

    “I’m sorry—what?”


    ASDFAKSLDJFHASKLJFHAS. WHAT.
    ASDKFHASKJFHASKJFHASKJFH.
    That was my reaction, too! asdfkljahsdkj. UGHHH I WANT ON MILAN SO HARD NOW. STOP MAKING HIM SO AMAZING IN THIS STORY. FUCK.

    oh.. i want on bergy too....

    I love everything about this story so much. Especially that you're more or less writing it for me and oh my God all of my boys are so perfect in this and I love that you edged Hunny in and I'm just fucking adkjfhsdkjfhasdkjfha. MORE. PLEASE. GIVE ME MORE.

    (PS Hunny hates being called Hunny. It's Munch or Braids. LOL)
    November 16th, 2009 at 06:37pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    I'm beginning to think you're holding out on me....
    November 15th, 2009 at 10:10pm
  • schennsational;

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    You write my baby wondrously. Actually, you write all of my babies wondrously.
    Milan. Blake. Patrice. (Matty, who needs to appear some more.) All of them.
    Tis perfect. I love this story so much, you know that.
    It's fantastic. You shouldn't go so long without updating again, okay?
    Thank you.
    Love you.
    November 15th, 2009 at 10:16am
  • scute

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    Okay. So this is such a good story line.
    I'm still a bit confused on what her job really is, but that's okay. milan and patrice are proving to be very interesting characters and I'm trying to figure out who she'll get with first (; if she gets with either at all hahahaha
    Anways.
    I sill love this, I'm glad you're back ((:
    November 15th, 2009 at 06:27am
  • slowburnbaby

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    OH MY GOD.
    this story is amazing, its like mindgasms and it makes me think to read it, I love a story like that, I love the complicated stopry line this is definitely going to have, I am subscribing to let you know I am reading it, but! I cant check my email*kicks hard drive* so I'm just going to stop by your pages ev'ry day now!
    So yeah, updae, or I'll join Manda and her montain lion with a tiger(only if she is cool with that)
    October 3rd, 2009 at 05:06pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    I love this, it's epic and fantastic and amazing. You.Are.Awesome. The end.
    September 28th, 2009 at 03:13am