Tell Me, What's Real? - Comments

  • HotRanger69

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    nah dont rewrite it, it was awesome. a great chapter infact. loved it. yay you! update soon yeah? :)
    May 11th, 2010 at 10:01pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Aww, they danced in the rain!
    She stayed strong when her twin (might I add, dead twin) broke down crying.
    That is just soo sweet.!
    I love this, it's so sad!
    May 11th, 2010 at 07:49pm
  • Atrum Creatura

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    Okay. Here's the deal. You keep writing, you'll get to live longer.
    You stop writing, I recomend two things.
    Remember to breathe. And if you don't I'll set my rabid cat on you two scratch your eyes out and eat them for brekkie. He's really picky.

    I love Jimmy's competitiveness for holding her hand! And yes, I would kill to hold his hand.
    May 11th, 2010 at 03:07pm
  • SinfullyDamaged

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    this is a very depressing story, yet at the same time very cute. in every chapter i've cried nonstop, even when it's a cute thing. you're writing is very beautiful and i'm kind of sad that there isn't more chapters posted (ill live though ^.^). I told my friend about this story and she told me she'd read it when she has time, i was tempted to sit her down and force her to read it, that's how good it is. i can't wait for the next update <3
    April 22nd, 2010 at 01:58am
  • ignite this angel.

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    Okay, so first, I keep forgetting to reply to the comment you left on my story, so remind me about that.

    And this was not badly written. Plus, if you delete this, I kill you.
    Well, e-kill you.

    Aww, that was soo cute :D
    All the stuff with Jimmy, and the little memory... It was just so... *jumps around giddyly*

    Somewhere in there, I know Jimmy said 'forever', and I nearly bursted into tears.
    That was awfully mean of you. In a very sneaky way...

    But anyways, goo. I liked it.
    And remember, you delete, I kill. And I don't care if you have the Korean Mafia avenge (hehe) you.
    April 21st, 2010 at 02:17am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    It was not badly written!
    April 21st, 2010 at 12:24am
  • AlexisNicole822

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    Omg this was amazing! I cried and woow. I looove how well you wrote this. Please continue. Also, great use of words. I could feel the emotion coming off the pages. amazing. beyond amazing. (:
    April 20th, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Aww, I love her memory!
    It was soo sweet!
    Love this!
    April 20th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    I love the story congrats, you made me cry! lol keep it up
    April 20th, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • Aightball

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    I'm enjoying it. I think the way you're doing things now is the way it needs to be to get to the point of the story. Yeah, it's slow, but that's how it has to be sometimes. I say keep going!
    April 20th, 2010 at 04:32pm
  • Ace.Spade

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    this chapter was cute, except the whole falling thing lol :)
    this is a really good story, i'm excited to see how their relationship plays out..

    update again soon please
    April 1st, 2010 at 04:20am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    Awe... it's cute!
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:39am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Awesime, loves the update.
    Yeah, Jimmy's awesome.
    Haha, loves this
    March 31st, 2010 at 07:38pm
  • ignite this angel.

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    Can I just comment four more times, and then you ever so kindly update? I could easily break all of this off in to four comments. They'd be a lot shorter, but it would work :D

    Hehehehe, How To Be Human... Somehow that seem farmiliar...
    :D

    Damn straight it ended quickly. I want more, Aussie. *glares playfully*

    I love how awkward she is with Jimmy :D It's almost refreshing, if you ask me. And, it reminds me that some people are just as socially awakeard as I am :)

    Dude, that dream was - wow. When I have some freaky dream, I can't remember anything about it after I wake up. Seriously, I wake up, think, Fuck, that was weird and then forget why it was weird within the next two seconds.

    But then again, it was a story, so details were kind of necessary.
    I mean, if they weren't there, I wouldn't come and help you make people feel stupid whenever you wanted me to :)
    Yeah, that's right. I play hardball. (Okay, not really, but you know what I mean.)

    Anways, wowzers.
    I feel like I owe you one, considering you actually said it to me once...
    March 31st, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • HotRanger69

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    GREAT UPDATE!
    and if i rememebr ill cehck it out later. im so tired right now! night :)x
    March 31st, 2010 at 11:05am
  • ignite this angel.

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    Dude, you and making me cry.
    And you call me a meanie.
    Meanie.

    ... It feels like I already said that.

    Anyways, the beginning was sad.
    And the stuff with Jimmy was cute :D

    Aah, dude, she does like him.
    You're mean, making Leslie tell her to let go. Mean, mean mean, mean. MEAN.

    AH, OMG, gaah.. Jimmy. Disappearing. Like, instantly.(?)
    He's a ghosty too, isn't he?
    March 21st, 2010 at 03:19am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I wanted to cry, this is good
    March 21st, 2010 at 12:00am
  • Issues

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    Is Jimmy a ghost too?
    loved it.
    Please update soon.
    March 20th, 2010 at 04:10pm
  • HotRanger69

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    OH I LOVED IT! amazing! its like, awesomeZ!! UPDATE FASTER WOMAN! lol :) thankyou~!
    March 20th, 2010 at 09:24am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Oh god, I've got all emotional.
    That was really emotional.
    I love this.
    Really much.
    Amazing.
    March 20th, 2010 at 02:00am