Tell Me, What's Real? - Comments

awsome update!

oh another question....
jimmy never explained why he could see leslie
forgot to mention it
just curious why....
unless its for later
if not hopefully u can make it later, cause im dead curious why he can see her!!!

Love this, so happy you updated :D

woah i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
took awhile to read it all
but i loved it!!!!
2 questions again
r they 16 or 17? in the park the first time or something Izzy said 17
but funeral priest said 16
and wasn't their fight the same day of the funeral
isn't that what the mom said? then why did she say their fight yesterday when she was crying?
idk
but that was super good, and once again i would subscribe even if u told me not too!!!!!!!

You know, if this wasn;t your story, I totally wouldn't be reading it at 10 in the morning when I have to shower and practice guitar in under an hour.

... Qualm? I'm just gunna pretend my eyes are fucking with me, and that it actually says 'calm'.

Okay, you gotta stop with all them mean descriptions. They make me sad. And I have to pessimissitic for my guitar lessons. (I just have to, don't ask questions.)

Woo! Anger! I like angry Izzy.
Why? Because anger is fun.

BUT THAT WASN'T ENOUGH ANGER. Meanie.

... :D

Okay, the second someone came to talk to her, I know it was Jimmy. Why? Because it fucking had to be. (You know I'd e-kill you if it wasn't >:)

Duuuuude. Friends? (You know, it should be like the Matt story where they finally get together (I can'y wait til they have sex (Like the other reader (Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha))))

But whatever. I LIKE THIS STORY. YOU MUST CONTINUE. Yes, you must. It's just that simple.

Ohhh, and!
... I forgot, so nevermind.

Awe, she sorta flipped out at the priest. I agree with her though, he didn't know her or anything so he had no right to talk. And you described the feelings of loneliness and abandonment beautifully. I'm happy Jimmers stayed with her and made her realize that they were friends :)

If you want to delete this story it's your decision, but I'll be very sad if you do. It's a great story.

Aww, the funeral...
She's so strong, I think. And Jimmy was good, he was there for her.
She needed him and she got him.
I really like this!!

I'm glad she stood up at the funeral like that. I hate funerals for that very reason. Sometimes, the preacher/minister/priest/whatever really does know the person well, other times, they are just saying what seems "right".

I'm also glad that Jimmy came back to her. She needs him right now and she'll be lost without him. I'm eager to see where things go from here, as I think the story remains strong!

Man, lottta drama going on...
Love it!
:3
update soon!

Hey!
Thanks for entering my prewrite contest. This story was really intriguing, and I don't think I've commented on this.
This story was.... I mean, it totally throws me off- but in a good way! I promise. I mean, reading the summary, and the first few chapters, I almost thought this would end out as a typical plot or something- but it's not. I think I've heard something like this maybe once before [or just inside my own head?] I'm not sure, and I don't think that matters. What matters is that you found your story inside you, and elaborated it into something greater.
It was really creative and emotional, and I always felt like I was a part of each character, feeling their emotions. It was really good, and I hope things start to look up all the way, because you have talent and I can't wait to see where this goes :D

my god. i always want to cry after reading your updates ;^;.
I feel so bad for izzy. she has to deal with the reality of the fucked up hand life dealt her and at the same time fight to keep her sister near her. i can understand why she pushed jimmy away, im not saying its right but still. I mean after losing someone who was part of you, i don't think anyone would want to be close to someone again because if they lost that person they'd be in too much pain to go on. I'm not saying i agree with izzy's actions but i do understand them.
Jimmy's really not gonna just let izzy go right? she cant be alone at this point. she needs his love :(.

I'm sorry bout your sister. i hope all turns out well.

Umm, again: THE FIGHT.. You're really starting to piss me off here. (Just kidding, I have other reasons to be mad at you. Like you not being on Messenger when I am! God.)

Haha, I love how the beginning was. (I would say 'sweet', but last time you were a fucking ingrate and didn't appreciate my attempt to find the right word. So you get no describing word today. (Oh, fuck. I could've said 'adjective' there, huh?))

On the other hand, I'm not too fond about the whole thing where they closed the window to get ready and leave. You shoulda had Jimmy be all like 'Now jump into my arms!' all hilariously and dramatically.
Just sayin.

AND THEN YOU MENTIONED THE FUCKING FUNERAL! Seriously, I should be like the last commenter and go on a rampage with a fucking brick. But I think I'll start with you and not Izzy...

OMFG, THEN YOU WERE MEAN TO JIMMY. FUCK YOU.

Yeah, you just earned yourself two CAPS Lock comments. You're in some deep shit now, missy. (Oh, Missy's my dog's name :D But my aunt always calls her Misty. She like 'Heellooo Misty. How are you Misty?' And I fucking hate it when she does that.)

And, another thing about Izzy being a meanie head (Sorry, I'm having a juvenile day today) to Jimmy: You should've just had him be all persistent and shit. It might be annoying for her, but you could just make her give in.
... So yeah. We have a plan for the next chapter.

(Hehe, it's like being a backseat driver, always telling people (mainly my mom) how to drive. Hahaha, I'm a backseat writer. Fuck yes.)

Aww, tell your sister that your hypothetical twin sends her condolences.

Oh, and something completely off topic, we were watching these videos in Socials. One, from a long time ago, it's title was "Something Something And Vengeance" or something like that. (Sorry, I really only remembered Vengeance) and today, it was going on about the fur trade, and the narrator lady's just like "... blah blah blah in bat country..."
Do you know how much will power it took to not jump up and yell 'Fuck yeah!'?

aww poor jimmy D: i wish she would form a closer bond with him instead of push him away. i might just have to go into this story and beat her with a brick or something to get my point across o.o but please update soon :D

Yikes!

I cant believe she could push Jimmy away like that :(. The funeral is definatly going to be a ar jerker... I hope she resolves things with Jimmy again!!

No, not the funeral!
That'll be so sad, so unbelievably sad.
Oh my god...she shouldn't' of pushed Jimmy away!
I love this!

Ahhh, I love this story! Jimmy and her are so sweet, and so happy and all that, and then like BAM two seconds later it's sad again, which is good because it makes the story more real. Like the saying goes, "Nothing gold can stay." Sorry I have an obsession with that quote lately.
I really love the plotline, and your writing is amazing, as always (:
Very well written, I liked it a lot (:

why is this so sad? it made me cry.... again! is izzy going to let go of les? it sounds that way but idk.

Bahahaha, I was the one death threat, wasn't I?
Oh, God. I said e-kill. Like how I mentioned e-suicide. Oh, holy bejesus. My mind...
:D

Oh, yes. Story. I was getting there.

Okay, I'm nearly speechless right now. I loved the whole thing with Jimmy and her. It was so.. ohh, cliche? I know cliche is usually bad, but it was all sweet and shit, and I love it.
And I believe I've told you that I like cliche if it's written well.
'Nough said.

I would use another word to describe it, but one doesn't come to mind. Sorries.

But seriously, I was all smiley, and happy and shit, and then you go in and make me sad. Why do you always have to do that?
*mutters* And we call me the evil one.The bestest evil superhero, that is :D

What bothers me the most about the end is this one little bit: 'So for what could possibly be the last time, I fell to sleep at her side, feeling comforted with her arms wrapped tightly around me. I fell to sleep with a sad smile on my face, a final tear escaping my eyes and falling gently onto the pillow.
For the last time? I know you said could be, but still. You're worrying me.

And lastly *ahem*
The Fight.
... I feel so betrayed. (Hehe, and while I commenting on an A7X story about an A7X oneshot... Hehehe.)

I loved it