Oh god....I had a feeling about something like that, but no. Jimmy's dead! D: Oh god, poor Izzy. I love the way you've wrote this and everything about this. You're an amazing writer. Love this! xD
:'( Poor Izzy. First Leslie leaves her.. Now Jimmy. I seriously started getting all teary eyed when I read chap 14. I don;t this story to be over yet, but at the same time, I'm like, mentally preparing myself for the end.
This is an amazing story. Half the time I was in tears and the other half l was smiling and blushing along with Izzy. Its a beautiful story and l'm glad l found it. :)
I really love your story, its sweet and heart wrenching at the same time. It also doesn't help that I got my mother addicted to Avril Lavigne's When Your Gone, so that's all she's been listening to. Let me tell you your story+that song=me bawling lol.
Zomg, this comment's gunna suck. Like, completely, totally suck. I is sorries, but I is caught up in everything, and once I read through it all I'm not going to want to write out some long ass comment.
Zomg, what a sweet creeper he is :) I enjoys this random showing up outside her window thing he's got going on.
Agh, why'd you have to make it sad? Is it so bad to be all nice and sweet and happy for just one chapter? ONE MOTHERFUNG CHAPTER. Is not much, my senile Grampaa. Is quite easy, actually. You should try writing shiznits like that every once in a while. Is a nice change of pace.
Aww. Is kind of sweet how she's talking to Leslie, though. Is also kind of sad, but I shall ignore that.
Zomg, then with her presence there and stuff. That was good. I likes it :)
(And in other news, I have the hiccups again. Seriously, I'm accidentally pressing random buttons because of it. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU)
Is a good chapter. Don't beat yourself up about it. (Seriously, some of the stories on here are really really bad. And then you come in, saying mine are gold. So, what does that make yours? Platinum, or some shit? I don't know. But it's better than my shit, so shut it.)
:O:O:O ONLY 2-3 MORE CHAPTERS AND AN EPILOGUE?!
...Is too soon. Iggy likes this story. You mustn't finish it off soon. Seriously, make this stuff longer.
I is amazing, huh? (No sarcastic comments. They're only allowed when I say them.)
Finally she can let go, and Jimmy is right there with her. It's sweet, and I'm glad she's going to be able to let go, holding onto it will hurt her more than letting go, maybe. Jimmy in sponge bob boxers?! Sorry; that just got me. xD I love this, always have done.
I loved this! I read the first chapter and I HAD to subscribe. But damn you. You had to kill her. I was nodding my head and smiling basically the whole time cuz the two reminded me of me and my sister. We're not twins, but people say we look alike and we dress the same like... everyday. It's really kind of lame. [/irrelevant]
Why would you kill her? I mean, everything seemed so great. Um, I didn't find any true errors, and the whole "wake up scene" was a tad bit cliche, but I admit- most of my stories begin that way. I plan on reading the rest of this tomorrow (because it's getting late and I still need to do myhomework) but I truly enjoyed reading this. Expect more comments from me later on :)
Well, here's my attempt at a review: Firstly, you're an amazing writer (i've said this before) and you should keep it up. For the actual story, I love it. The plot is interesting and the story is enjoyable to read. Your descriptions are awesome and you are able to write and keep the readers wanting more. This story is awesome and so are you. =)