So, yeah... Um.. I forgot what I was gunna say... OH YEAH! If I'd just lost a kid, and the other was suddenly all happy-go-lucky, I woulda like, killed the other. 'Don't you smile in this house!'
If I had a twin sister who died, and then magically appeared beside me, I'd wonder who spiked my drink last night. (And I don't even drink -- beer, that is)
Dude, I like how you described Jimmy. But then again, I like any descriptions, as long as they're good. They don't even have to be true. Just good. I did feel the whole awkward vibe when he first showed up. I liked it. I'm too awkward not to :D
Dude, I knew you were gunna kill her, but seriously?! LESS DESCRIPTIONS, PLEASE. Yeah, I like descriptions, but they were mean. So therefore, I don't like them. (Master confusionist :D Hehehehehe) I did like the end, though. But if you had more descriptions for that... Well, I think's it's obvious how I would feel. *whispers* I'd be happy :D
I really like it :) but could you please change the color of the font? I cant for the life of me read blue font against a blue background :P but I did like it, I am soooo subscribing :)