Aww, they danced in the rain! She stayed strong when her twin (might I add, dead twin) broke down crying. That is just soo sweet.! I love this, it's so sad!
Okay. Here's the deal. You keep writing, you'll get to live longer. You stop writing, I recomend two things. Remember to breathe. And if you don't I'll set my rabid cat on you two scratch your eyes out and eat them for brekkie. He's really picky.
I love Jimmy's competitiveness for holding her hand! And yes, I would kill to hold his hand.
this is a very depressing story, yet at the same time very cute. in every chapter i've cried nonstop, even when it's a cute thing. you're writing is very beautiful and i'm kind of sad that there isn't more chapters posted (ill live though ^.^). I told my friend about this story and she told me she'd read it when she has time, i was tempted to sit her down and force her to read it, that's how good it is. i can't wait for the next update <3
Omg this was amazing! I cried and woow. I looove how well you wrote this. Please continue. Also, great use of words. I could feel the emotion coming off the pages. amazing. beyond amazing. (:
I'm enjoying it. I think the way you're doing things now is the way it needs to be to get to the point of the story. Yeah, it's slow, but that's how it has to be sometimes. I say keep going!
Can I just comment four more times, and then you ever so kindly update? I could easily break all of this off in to four comments. They'd be a lot shorter, but it would work :D
Hehehehe, How To Be Human... Somehow that seem farmiliar... :D
Damn straight it ended quickly. I want more, Aussie. *glares playfully*
I love how awkward she is with Jimmy :D It's almost refreshing, if you ask me. And, it reminds me that some people are just as socially awakeard as I am :)
Dude, that dream was - wow. When I have some freaky dream, I can't remember anything about it after I wake up. Seriously, I wake up, think, Fuck, that was weird and then forget why it was weird within the next two seconds.
But then again, it was a story, so details were kind of necessary. I mean, if they weren't there, I wouldn't come and help you make people feel stupid whenever you wanted me to :) Yeah, that's right. I play hardball. (Okay, not really, but you know what I mean.)
Anways, wowzers. I feel like I owe you one, considering you actually said it to me once...