Cabin Fever - Comments

AWWWWWWWWWW that was adorable! Hes like my favorite canuck by far

I loved the update! I cant wait to see if things are fixable with these two! more soon please!

that was a lot confusion haha i loved it, more soooon.

oh gosh.
they should totally make up now!
cant wait for the updates!

Annnnnd go!

Because saying you had feelings suddenly makes everything better. Good job Alex. Good job -- you just started another argument without even realizing it. Well okay, that wasn't an argument, that was getting yelled at.

He's such an intriguing, confusing little bugger eh? Beat around the bush much Alex? But then again, probably doesn't help that he's insulted every other sentence. That probably wouldn't want to spark much honesty out of me either.

Although that is a bullshit excuse blaming his teammates for if it became known that feelings were involved. Ahem .. damn you Matt Cooke, I'm angry with you about the game tonight too!

Well you certainly have captured rage!face for me which is kinda funny. It usually takes a lot to push me to that and his behaviour certainly warrants it.

Oh wanting to break shit. Where's a stick? I wanna break a stick haha.

Cocky smirk get out of my head will you? Thank you very much. Damn it, you didn't leave. On another note I like that paragraph how everything compounds to become this wave of emotion and feelings. Yeah, I know emotions and feelings are more or less the same thing. Shhh.

Time to break out the old pros and cons list I think haha.

Well spontaneity is an attractive feature yes; but, fucking with your head? Not so much.

This is a very significant internal debate here and ultimately shows some strong character points. Very good stuff Burr. =)

I know I don't quote but this paragraph: There is no way Alex actually harbors any feelings for me other than the desire to get into my pants. Guys who have feelings for you are usually caring and sweet not manipulative and full of secrets. They hold you and ask how your day was they don't shove you against a wall and assault you with their lips and leave words out of the equation. Is just lovely. I really like it.

All that thinking made me think that I may have overreacted. Makes sense. That was a lot of thinking.

Oi asleep with the TV on?

So he's just chilling there, not trying to sleep just relaxing and doing his thing - but not really cause he's not doing anything unsavoury haha. Oh hey Burr, what's up?

Oooh fight the urge. Dooo it.

That damn thunder. It's like it's on his side hahaha.

Caring!Alex is kinda adorable. Jus' saying. Oooh very tender (is that even the right word to describe that where he cups her chin and forces her to look at him? I don't even know. I don't usually use that word to describe things but for some reason it fit) moment between the two of them.

Definitely can tell that she's fighting it there. Fighting the urge to curl up into him and let him protect her from the storm. She's being pretty stubborn to not wanting to hear his side of things. Let him speak woman!

Oh. Well that sucks. I didn't want to. Bugger.

Nice save Alex.

Words just lead to fighting between the two of them and I think he's starting to realize that. They are both stubborn people. Very unwilling to accept that the other person may actually be telling the truth. Suck it up people and communicate! Haha.

Oh excuse me as I melt a little bit. He's being such a sweetie and using actions. Try and fix it with words... you can do it Alex! Go man go!

Note to self -- stop being such a stubborn jerk and maybe hear the guy out eh? And stop being so negative! Gosh. Negativity isn't going to fix things.

Of course he would say that in French and I would proceed to melt into a puddle if some French-Canadian boy said that to me. Not going to lie.

Anyways, loved it Burr. Cannot wait for more even though it's only two chapters more (;

<3 Kes

OMG THAT'S THE MOST AMAZING REASON EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT

OMG THAT'S THE MOST AMAZING REASON EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT

HAD?!
HAD?!?!
FRICK AMANDA PAST TENSE IS NOT ACCEPTABLE HERE!
He has feelings for her, kay?
HAD IS NOT AN ACCEPTABLE CHOICE OF WORD!

Oh man, you're killing me with this story. That entire flashback was both informative and hot. It definitely portrayed how he took advantage of her to a tee, which yeah, is kind of sad, but still. You tell it like it is and you're great at keeping in character.

I love that she's regaining her strength with him, so to speak, and that it fluctuates. His unspoken control over her is both and intriguing and makes me kind of want to "awww", if that makes any sense. There's obviously a WAY strong connection between the two of them and now that he's come out with his feelings, I'm hoping that connection will evolve into a bond. I love this. Awesome job, love! : D

AHHH, i loved it

uh... that boy's lying

~moose~

i really like this< glad i found it! update soon?

oh my god....
I LOVE IT.
updateupdateupdate!
I CANT WAIT! =D

I am seriously in love with your story! Its crazy good! Ahaha. I love the plot and the story line and all the unexpected twists! Seriously. Keep up the awesome job (:

Awww alex burrows needs more love thats for sure. I love this chapter and how things are finally coming to light

I loved the update! i cant wait to see if they work things out!

First of all --- HOW CAN YOU END IT RIGHT THERE?! You are evil with your cliffhangers with every god damn chapter! Gah!

Now to comment like I usually do :)

Oh Burr with that accent. I mean what? Supposed to be angry. Figures that simple actions like that would lead to forgiveness the smooth bugger. Well now you're just making me feel bad for being angry haha even though had complete and full right to be so but still. He shouldn't have such an effect after being such a little pain in the ass.

Nooo don't cave! Oh look... the grimace is lifting. Damn you Alex Burrows.

Heh "'I'm-going-to-seduce-you' smirk".

Oooh flashback. How many years ago is this?

It's all about the damn smirk with that one. Ugh. Why so smirky Alex? Yes, I know smirky is not a word. I'm still in Kesler mode you'll have to deal (maybe I am cranky... whoops).

Sooo with all this talk about secrets, what starts running through my head? That T-Mobile commercial about 'secret lovers' god damn it get out of my brain.

Alex such an opinionated fellow. Is good thing :)

Ha you should be scared of Kes, after watching After Hours I don't think I'd want to fuck with him either haha.

Oooh leaving a party together, but not really because (god damn it secret lovers get out of my head fuckkk) it's a secret and no one can know.

Okay, why is he leading to my place?

Ah yes the fumbling with the keys cause of anxiety and nerves and overall anxiousness. There it is again, sure it is a smile this time but it's still like a smirk. Damn the smirk I tell you, damn the smirk! (But not really, I quite enjoy the smirk hahaha).

(Note: sorry this comment is so ADD like. I'm apparently cranky and all over the place).

Well he certainly wasted no time there. And might I say, that was lovely to read... I may have a wee smirk on my face right now.

Oooh Alex Burrows... not cool man... not cool. Leaving. Not cool. (Yes, that needed to be repeated three times, thanks for asking! :] )

Annnd we're back to be accusatory of his behaviour. He's all about the secrets, the no one else knowing what's going on... that's odd. But I'm sure you have your justification for it.

There it is -- anger, kind of, you know it's on when I start swearing even if the word is just bullshit haha.

Very good opening question. Very investigative. I approve. Wait, so I don't live in Vancouver anymore?

Look at him using actions instead of his words. Heh.

Well duh I want to know the truth. Gosh boys can be silly.

See start of comment for reaction to this part. GAHHHHHH.

Anywho, loved it Burr. Update soon with your damn cliffhangers and such.

<3 Kes

I knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I knew he had to have had feelings for her!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, how can you not??????????? Loved the udpate, loved it to pieces :) :):):D:D:D:P:P:P

So my heart is definitely breaking for her.

“Let me go,” I snapped and tumbled away from Alex and onto the floor. My skin felt as though bugs were crawling all over me while the realization of what he said set in. A game? He played me just like he does the puck.
Such a sad simile.

Sarcastic laughter filled the room as Alex took a step closer to me. “Bullshit,” he started as I took a step back. “Did you ever stop to think that maybe I wasn't into you? That all I wanted was the sex?”
Wow way to hit her where it hurts. Asshole Alex returns.
Of course Cooke bet him. The asshole. So awful.
I'm glad she slapped him, he definitely deserved it.

So despite the fact she hates him, she's totally cannot deny her attraction to him. She's still pissed but they're still touchy.

“I'm sorry Lauren, I have a good reason for it,” he whispered, his mouth dangerously close to my ear. A shudder ripped through my body and the sadness in his voice was almost enough for me to forgive him. Almost.
Idk how anything makes what he did okay...

Pain and anger were still running through my veins despite his showing of obvious regret. Just because he was acting that way didn't make those things true – Alex is really good at selling things and I can't let myself fall into his trap again. As nice as he sometimes seems he also has an awful mean streak. The sad thing?

Alexandre Burrows may just be the death of me.

Ahhh. I still am super conflicted about Alex, definitely feeling what she is. She wants to hate him but he's her weakness. She has every reason to hate him though.

This was superrrrrr amazing love. As usual. Love it, and youuuu<3.
2of3!

Um, first off. Hello steamy times.
A million and one props to her for stopping it from getting too far. I thought for sure she was going to give in to him. It totally makes sense though.

Before anything can even progress – not that I want to go down that road again – we do need to talk about it. Really, it isn't fair to either of us. Alex is most likely looking for a fuck-n-chuck and I'm not going to be that girl, not without answers, and really just not at all. I'm looking for a little more than that. I want a serious relationship. This isn't high school or college, this is life. The time to waste on bad relationships and stupid decisions is over.

I kind of love how logical she is. She knows fucking around is pointless.

The fact that she wants him so bad but restrains herself. She even uses the fact she knows he wants her to her advantage. I kind of love it.

“You lost, I won,” he murmured before closing the distance between our lips.

Confusion spread through my body, tingling me to the core. Lost what? “What are you talking about?” I questioned after breaking the delicious kiss.

“Exactly what I said,” he smirked and slid his fingers under the hem of my shirt. “I won, you lost.”

“We aren't playing a game Alex,” I shot back and leaned away from him.

His smirk faltered as he stared back at me with unblinking eyes. “A l'époque j'étais,” he replied softly, shame written all over his voice.

Oh my god. Awful awful awful. So typically boy and sad.

Okay so conflicted idk how I feel about Alex, obvs he's changed but that was an asshole thing he did to her back then. It's a bit heartbreaking. He's comforting her now but obviously he destroyed her before. Ahh.

1 of 3 down. I love the complexity of the situation/story. and youuuu. on to the next one. =)