Cabin Fever - Comments

i loved the update! i cant wait to hear his explanation! more soon please

I lovee this story!
Please update soon (:
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Soo intense! Love the whole love/hate relationship!

yessss, intenseness.
:)
thank you.
now finish it. ;)

Get ready for this... I'mma go back through and comment like I've been doing haha. Then move to my org and admin paper :)

First of all, jeeze I'm OLD in this story haha. Not that 27 is really old that's a mere 6 years from now. Dear god. Also from this paragraph, I love the concept of a beautiful storm -- some storms really are gorgeous. Storm watching is fun on the coast anyways.

Ooooh dear that little flashback? Yeah, hello awkward smirk on my face, how are you? Then you cap it off with a realization that oh noes! This cannot be happening, he was a jerk last time. Then he comes firing back with why do you fight it? I'm not fighting it. Ugh Alex.

I really want to know what this past incident entailed.

Ha! Fuck-n-chuck! I like that. Very innovative there. Oh look at that being all serious business.

Oh nonchalantly lying on the couch? Is it bad that my first though was that picture of him on the plane leaning against the overhead storage things while talking to Bobby Lu? Uh oh. I don't know how that logically works but it does. Let it beeee.

Annnd the tension is back. Snapping at him and he smirks and replies in French. Bastard haha.

Look at that little bit of confidence eh? Taking charge and making him uncomfortable for once. Damn it when I read 'tingling me to the core' I felt tingles hahaha. Ugh Alex.

French how you fail me. Why must you be so annoying? At least Alex speaks slow enough until a certain French-Canadian that I can think of haha. Threatening to call Ryan? Is that because Ryan would kick his ass? That could potentially be interesting to see. Anyways... back to story self.

Caring!Alex? What? And being a bit sensitive too? Again, what? Oh cuddly times with Monsieur Burrows.

Slightly shocked and remorseful? That would be an interesting facial expression to see; but you say he sounded like that. His attempts at being suave there -- being all sweet and caring haha.

Groan is never good sign. Annnd that is why. Playing games? Really? Ugh.

I cannot WAIT to see how the reaction to that is going to be written. For some reason I have a feeling that it's gonna be an intense shouting match. Anyways, love love love this story. It's sooo intense and I love the detail you put into it. There's emotion everywhere. And it's got Burr. What's not to love?

More sooon! <3

I just started reading this, and I'm kind of sad that I didn't find it sooner. More soon, please??

Do you know how much I love this story? Because I do! It keeps on getting better and better with every chapter! Can't wait for more :)

this was great thanks for the update and i cant wait for another one :P

This just keeps getting better by the second. :) So....I'm a little confused....but I think I got the gist of it.....so he basically told her that back then he was playing a game??? If I'm right, what an asshole!!!!!!!
Love it though :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

hmm i'd say that falls under the category of "cliffhanger." HYPOCRITE!
but anyway, i love the sexual frustration and cute moments flying around.

i love this story (L)

i cant wait to see how the rest of the conversation goes! more soon

I know nothing about hockey and had to google the men in the story because I knew nothing about them (hockey really isn't that big where I live) but I do love the story. Lovely writing and I'll be subscribing.

So........I'm subscribed to other stories of yours, and I decided to check out this one also. And I must say, I love it so far. :) Keep on writing this one :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

i love this.
it is so frustrating to read, the tension is so high.

so I think between you and Lauren, I quit writing. I'm too far behind haha.
But this was insanely good. All the inner conflict and description reflecting backon all her frustration and everything.
Alex is one smug sob though.
But, um jfc kill us all with the ending.
What is going on?! Need to know sooooon thanks =)
ilyyy.

uh oh, things are heating up between them hahaha
This wasn't bad at all, it was really good!
Thanks for the update
more, please :)

you know, this has to be one of the most productive hiatuses i have ever witnessed. just sayin.
as for your horrible writing? SHUT IT! this wasn't bad, it was awesome.
and i think one of my favorite things about this story is the fact that so far this is all in one day. most stories are over a larger period of time.
i love the way you've written it so get working on the next chapter. please :)

I can't wait for the next update. I really do enjoy this story.

First thought after reading that? Oh jesus.

Sometimes I hate how cocky he is and sometimes it doesn't bother me... and that is fucked haha. It's kind of a take charge, mind game thing and ... why am I admitting this? Okay, enough of that before I get too carried away.

Oh snap -- puppy dog eyes did not win.

I want to know what he did damn it haha.

Poor Danielle getting stuck in the crossfire. It's a good thing that kid sleeps a lot so she doesn't have to bear witness to all the chaos going on around her. Although, I did laugh at the thought of Alex playing with Barbie dolls.

I'm sensing your were inspired perhaps by the rain/wind storm you recently had? Perhaps? Well if not, you sure did nail the west coast weather here.

Okay get out of my head. I usually do that when I'm watching a show or movie... I look to see how the others are reacting. And his all smug look would annoy me in reality haha. Cocky little pain in the ass.

Seriously. Ugh why sooo smug Alex?

Ah yes, outside in the rain is so refreshing. I agree with that. Ooh and I loved your description of how wind and rain team together to destroy anything in their paths or what not. So true. I like that entire paragraph actually.

I love how just randomly arguments bust out. It's like the tension just gets to be too much that it has to be audibly acknowledged before something stupid happens. He certainly knows how to push the buttons and apparently it looks like that attack got returned briefly there.

Ugh again with the cocky, smug, arrogant attitude! It is so fucking frustrating! Lol.

And that is how you end it? Ugdsfhdsafjlf just... there must be sooo much emotion attached to that and don't even know what he is thinking! Desperation? Want? Need? I don't know but dammmmn.

Excellent update. Even if you don't think so. I loved it. More soon I can only hope <3