Cabin Fever - Comments

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This is amazingly hot.
Your ability to write sexual tension all the while keeping it logical is fantastic. <3
And by the way, Beautiful Disaster is a great song. xD
Hahaha I love that you compared his words to candy. Paradoxical, but creative and accurate nonetheless.
Ugh. That was great. The cliffie is going to have all of us sexually frustrated for a little awhile, but that just shows that you're doing your job. xD <333

loved ittt. <3
again.
damn hot french-canadians.

This was super good. Like amazingly good. Haha, makes me feel like an utter writing fail even more than I already am.
I kind of love their love-hate relationship. Cause you know they so want each other.
Loves it, and you.

Loved it! First Alex Burrows story I've read and I absolutely love it. Can't wait for more :)

“Honey, I’m home,” he called out in that weird Ricky Ricardo voice from I Love Lucy.

I chuckled. A clear vision in my mind? Yes, yes it is.

"Lauren."

"Shithead."

HAHAHA XDD Way to turn off the filter right in front of the kid.

...his hand swiping through his perfectly gelled hair; a nervous habit I once found endearing.

For some reason, I loved this statement. The bitterness and mild sarcasm is like music to my brain.

I think you have the money to get the fuck out of my sight.

I’m going to fucking kill him. “Ryan’s just a nice guy. He doesn’t agree with your douchebaggery.”

LAWL. Have I ever told you that you're very good at writing angry females? Well you are and I'm both laughing and loving this at the same time.

“Look outside, Princess.” The guy before me, he’s the guy from the one night of bliss we shared that ended on less than great terms. But he isn’t the real Alexandre Burrows. He’s a cheap clone that shows up when Alex decides it’s time to be a dick.

And that cheap clone does his work nicely. He’s good at his job.

Ugh. It's venemous and yet so enticing. The banter between them and the tension is magnificently brutal. And by the by, the entire length of that paragraph plus sentence was great. Like, I don't even know. When I like a paragraph or a sentence or just a combination of words, I get this odd feeling in my stomach. That right there did it. Be proud.

“Maybe if I had more to work with I would have been,”

I snorted. Thank you, Manda.

Another human can cause you enough pain without your weaknesses being compromised and when you add those into the equation the pain only intensifies to the point where it becomes unbearable.

Everyone needs answers especially when it concerns a moment you thought would answer everything else; a moment that would shed light on the thoughts and feelings that obstructed your life for so long.

Ugh. Wonderful. <3

Wanting to comfort someone that figuratively destroyed you isn’t a normal emotion. That’s almost like going into a prison and giving an incarcerated person a hug.

You're REALLY getting good at giving me that crazy music-to-my-inner-reader feeling. Be VERY proud.

Okay, this is hilarious, sexy, witty, masterful, and your writing makes me want to hurl my crap off a cliff. Seriously, you're so good. Even in the midst of describing mutual dislike between the disdainful and smug, your words are beautiful and I just love every second of it. Amazing job, Keep it up, girl!

So when I first read this, I was reading so fast that I wasn't exactly comprehending things... plus it didn't help that it was hanging over my head that I had to get up in like five hours at the time. But now, I've re-read it twice and can leave a lovely comment (At least, I hope it's lovely).

I am very curious as to how shit when down before this story -- you know the back story -- like the root cause of all this hostility. Yes, I have a vague idea from perhaps the prologue and the chapter but I wanna know why. Obviously Alex was a douchebag especially if Kes was on him to apologize. Buuut you got me curious. And I like that.

Oh that smirk.

I loved that 'shithead' was the go to greeting for him. That made me laugh and I can honestly see that happening haha.

I love the little argument how it just flairs up to the past. References are made to it and it's just hostile and straight up like you said... bitchy and dick like. I quite enjoyed the little back and forth snaps between the two of them.

Poor Danielle... doesn't even know what's going on. She just wants to find out. Poor kid -- stuck in the crossfire. Oh yes, pawn that off as a joke and distract her with movies... that's skills right there haha.

Ugh stop smirking. Lol.

Not going to lie, I'd smack him for calling me princess. That would piss me off haha. You do an excellent job at making him a dick. Honestly, he must be like that on the ice with his superb shit-disturbing skills.

Now the bugger is just picking a fight.

I really liked this part: "Another human can cause you enough pain without your weaknesses being compromised and when you add those into the equation the pain only intensifies to the point where it becomes unbearable." It's a very lovely way to put that. I really like it.

Confident, cocky smirk... damn you. Lol.

Apparently it is obvious when I'm lying... so kudos there haha.

I like just straight up saying 'I don't give a shit.' Oh how it's nice to say that to people who are bugging you. I've actually done that at work.

Of course the bugger switches to French. And is all rude about it. Ugh can I smack him? Lol.

Nowwww I really wanna know what went down because what happened that one can be sooo pissed off at someone and want to comfort them at the same time? That's fucked up haha. Oh and saying 'go get a dictionary.' That would just... that just burns my tires.

Oh damn him. Damn him. Damn him. Being all suave (is that suave? I don't even know) at the end there with the tucking of the hair behind the ear.

Soooo pretttty much I would love to read more of this as soooooon as possible. Because honestly you can't just top there. This needs to be resolved haha. Need to find out what the hell happened in the past to create such hostility (which you write amazingly) and what's going to happen in the future! More soooooon! <3

i'm definitetly hooked on to your story! Alex Burrows is just something special =)

loved it. can't wait for the next update.

ksdjfiwefjiwuefjwj what?! did you just hint that your writing gets better? was this a compliment to you abilities? i guess miracles do happen ;)
i noticed how you failed to send me the really juicy part and just the beginning. not cool.
but i love this, it's amazing and i'm currently suffering from severe cabin fever (along with recovering from my near death experience from last night) so more updates are greatly appreciated.

WOW! I love it, can't wait for more! Update soon, please. :D

1. bitch. thanks for telling me about this new series of yours.
2. from now on you're not allowed to write anything under at least 1000 words because that was way too evasive for me.

more, and soon, would be nice :D

mmmm wow i am exciteed

<3 i'm hooked,

Interesting introduction, has me hooked though. Update soon please.

Jeez that was quite the prologue.
Um, I can only wonder what'll be in the chapters. haha.
more?

Ugh. Not only do you hold out on me with this buuut you make it bloody elusive that I don't know who's who but I'm gonna figure it out. Cause I'd like to think that I'm a pretty smart person haha.

Oh activities following breakups are never a good thought. And he's a cocky little bugger during that little moment in time there.

Pooost more soon s'il vous plait! :D I'm wayyy too curious for you to hold out any more! <3