Cabin Fever - Comments

OMG is he ever hot

Definitely loved the sound of the first sentence of chapter six. I want her to make him work for his forgiveness, not fall for those eyes of his and that... Everything physical about him. >.<

He's been nothing but bipolar and it's starting to give me whiplash.

That basically sums up the entire story so far. xDD

Oh god, dragging the kid in. ;-; I can just picture an adorable little girl inquiring as to why they aren't speaking. The innocence just kills me.

“Do you want me to kick his ass?”

Rina would like to add, "Would you like me to organize a drive-by?"

She must know that I'm having a rough time and has decided to try and make it the worst.

Sounds like that time of the month... Wait.

Ryan sighed. “Lauren, that was years ago. Alex has matured, believe it or not. You need to let go of the pain you're holding onto. I know it hurts but maybe it was for the best.”

This is true. I love picturing him being all vice of reason-like on the other end of the phone. What a good friend. Like you.

*cheese*

Ryan sighed. “Pretend you and Alex were playing a game? Who could stay silent longer? I don't think she'll ask too many questions with that.”

Hahaha Perfect. xD

Even if I wanted to, forgetting how much he hurt me and how much his words stung would be impossible.

Way to keep her emotions realistic. And wow, I really enjoyed this update. It was a mix of cute and emotional. I definitely like the fact that you kept them relatively calm and logic-based. Great job, lovely. =D

“Did you ever stop to think that maybe I wasn't into you? That all I wanted was the sex?”

Damn. The searing harshness is absolutely brutal, but I love that both characters just tell it like it is. Alex's bluntness there made me gape at my screen, but I love the trait.

The slap and all that? That very moment? You nailed writing that perfectly. The tension and despondent release was perfectly done. You could have gone into too much or too little detail in that snoppet and you were just right. Great job.

I kind of want to kick Alex's ass because of his cockiness, but at the same time, it's sexy as hell. Really, he's frustrating like nothing else. If you intended on writing him that way, I salute you. Seriously. xD

And damn straight she should move away from him. Way to go not give into getting seduced against the counter! XD

Loved this chapter. You portrayed the tensions and emotions like a pro. On to the next one!

Ok I was bored and I thought hey I haven't read any of amanda's stories so i clicked it.

I'M SO GLAD I DID!!

The writing's impecable the detail is phenomnal and I feel like I'm actually living the story Like I can see this happening in real life it's amazing and I love it =] <3

Wait, what???? What realization??? What did he realize!!!!!! Geeze, if other people got that, then I am just slow....haha :) Loved the update bunches :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

And I love this story just because I can :) :D :P

still really good! why? because I still wanna kick Alex's ass!

~moose~

When reading that first sentence I thought of a Shania Twain song. Odd much? Thank you line dancing in PE in high school haha. Oooh like that description of being a target practice.

Already told you about liking the whiplash comment. Totally understandable -- one minute he's all cute/adorable/caring and the next he's being an asshole. Make up your mind Alex!

Ah yes... just be yourself. Gosh. Oh the accent. So lovely. Especially when he's angry that's when it really comes out and it's even more lovely.

Danielle is not as unaware as we all thought. She's picking up on things. Hmm I wonder if she would be comparing the interactions between Alex and her to how her mom and dad interact? You have to wonder. Yes, that would be difficult to answer. I love that she's all okay we gotta make up a story so we're both aware of the lie. So true.

Kes -- voice of reason much? I like how he's all Why the fuck is he there?. Poor guy alone time with wifey is being interrupted because his other best friend is being a dick. Sorry Ryan! Oh what a good bestie -- listening to all her whining. I mean frustrations. I like that he's all do you want me to kick his ass? He doesn't even care that it's his other best friend haha.

Stupid bet. Oh look at that maybe Ryan knows something about Alex that Alex wants to share? And she's being all stuck in the past. Them fighting words --> "I thought he was different but he's just another douche bag looking for a quick fuck."

No. Don't ruin weekend for Kes and wifey!

Hahahaha --> "Tell Olivia I said hi." "She's a great gal." WIN so WIN.

Ooh smart man Ryan is... the silent game. Lol.

So, um, adorable much? Alex making voices and reading to children? Jeeeze.

Oh look the storm is picking up just as they are gonna have another heated conversation. Well I just assume it's going to get heated.

Smart man that Trevor Linden is haha. Some of the things that hockey boys do to each other are just plain dumb. Aww a 'keeper'? Jeeze Burr why didn't you listen to Captain Canuck?

>.< Well that's not very nice to say when he's trying to apologize. Ooh that's a stinger when he fires your own words back at you. Hmm... it seems that he's starting to realize how badly he fucked up.

Slid hand over the table and covered mine?! What is this?! You have to sharrre you can't end right there. Jeeze.

Loved it =) I bet you can guess which story I voted for you to update next haha!

Excellent work Burr! (;

cliffhanger much? fix it!
oh, and if you just so happened to update really fast, i wouldn't be complaining :)
jussayin.

more.
alex just making me crazier about him.

wow this is really good i am totally hooked.
please update soon. .
^__^

oooh man. get together again! seriously, its killing me here! but i'd have to wait. haha, i love the new update! =) more please! =D thank you!

I like this story.
I was hesitant to read this because I am not a big fan of the canucks.. unfortunately this story is making me fall for burrows.
I like how all this drama is happening pretty much infront of Danielle but she doesn't even notice.
I can't wait for more =)

I love this! Like seriously, I squeal everytime I get an email saying you updated. Its like a little kid on Christmas morning! That's how excited I get. Anyways, can't wait fore more :)

i am very curious as to what his good reason will be?!? love the new chapter! :) cant wait for more

i love this
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more soon please! =)

So, I finally got around to reading a story and I can honestly say, I'm rather in love with this story!

The title of this chapter is just so fitting. So much hate/anger/emotion.

He says that, he says that back then he was playing games then decides I'm going to hold on to you tighter? Fuck that. Oooh I like how you likened it to playing the puck. Although there is every reason to snap at him at that moment. Bugger.

Oooh and now for the angry yelling! That's right he cringes as he gets yelled at -- you deserve it buddy. And then he says nothing well that would piss me off more so you got that right haha. Ooh jumping to conclusions when angry -- not a good call self!

Who does he think he is trying to be all intimidating. He is being a douche bag I would agree with that statement haha. Being all intimidating getting all up in zee bubble. Oooh I like that -- the lightning conveniently flashes illuminating his angry face (why do I think that's kind of hot... jfc!) -- ugh French-Canadian accent why must you do that to me?

That little fucker. Cookie you're a douche bag too. Heck yes smacking him across the face! Left a hand print didn't it? I bet that would have been surprising. Staring at blankly then smack! Take that you bugger!

Well this should be interesting...

It's funny how that works eh? How you can just tell that someone is looking at you, you can just ~sense~ it. It's weird like that. But then... then you go and do this... ugh! (That was a lovely mental image last night hahaha). It's probably a good thing Danielle said something or the staring contest may have kept up.

Aww that's cute about Kes and Brown Eyed Girl haha.

For some reason, I have this feeling that maybe Alex talked to someone about what happened -- perhaps Ryan. I have this sneaking suspicion.

Oooh being pinned against the counter by Alex? Hmm... no wait, supposed to be angry. Angry angry angry! And here he is smiling, apologizing and being all cute with the tucking of hair behind ear. Damn it Burr!

Yes, did Ryan know? Cause that adds a whole new element to the story!

Well he certainly is clingy haha. Hands on hips that do not belong to him all the time.

That poor kid honestly -- she had absolutely no idea what the hell is going on but is off in her own little world haha.

Oooh the hug from behind. Damn it why do I shudder when you write shudder? That is just ... hahaha. Oooh don't forgive him yet... he needs to explain and fix shit.

Aw look at him attempting to grovel. I'm curious to see what he has to say about this whole mess here. And how he justifies his actions. I'm even more curious with this Alexandre Burrows may just be the death of me. because this seems to be a little hint to the next chapter ... so I AM INTRIGUED haha.

More sooooooon Burr (;
<3

Loved, loved, loved the update. It made me tear up, because he was such an asshole, and what he did was so cruel. He better be sorry.......Love it :) :) :) :D :D :D: P :P :P

I liked it, and I can't wait for more. I normally don't like burrows all that much, but you have me kind of forming a puppy love with him.