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  • Kelllin Quinn

    Kelllin Quinn (100)

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    You're welcome for reading
    and I can't wait for the next chapter :D
    February 6th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • Alex McKee

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    Caleb doesn’t acknowledge anyone but Kyle, and Alex decides that it will have to be addressed after school in the car – he refuses to endure another silent car ride like this morning.

    Okay I have to tell you what my bets friend said when I was telling him about your last chapter;
    Me: Yeah now Caleb won't even talk to his friends and he's being all pissy and male PMS-ish.
    Kai: Pffft! Trust me, once Kyle fucks him senseless he'll talk to his friends again!
    Me: *Dies from laughter*
    I had to tell you!
    XD

    “I have to get some books for a project. No big deal,”

    LIAR!

    Surrounding him are three textbooks and right in front of him is his notebook. As Alex gets closer, he notices all of the tiny eraser shavings covering the table.

    Wow.
    He DOES study hard.

    Zack jumps in surprise at his voice and his elbow hits one the books, causing it to fall off the table and hit the floor with a loud ‘thud’ that is more than obvious in the silent library. The librarian gives the boys a stern look, while Zack glares up at Alex.

    XD
    I'd laugh.

    Alex moves the pencil across the page as he speaks, pointing out each number as he goes along. He teaches Zack step by step, and he makes sure he doesn’t go too fast – he knows that Zack can easily mix up a number and be lost.

    AWE!
    ^^
    So sweet!

    Without thinking, Alex blurts out, “I’m not gay.”

    DENIAL!
    LIAR!
    LIAR IN DENIAL!

    Zack’s face turns pink and he looks down at the table. “That’s not even what I meant,” He clarifies.

    You hurt his feelings you dick head!

    Alex feels like a douche bag.

    YOU SHOULD!
    XP

    Zack looks down at his textbook and absently folds the corner of his notebook page. Alex watches his movements –the way he bites his bottom lip and the way his thin fingers slip over the smooth pages of the notebook. Alex feels his heart do something strange – almost like it skips a beat – but he ignores it.
    “I’m not sure,” He finally admits. “I just do.”


    Awe!
    The chemistry is already amung them... DUN DUN DUHHHH!
    XD
    I felt so nerdy doing that!
    CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER LOVEY!
    February 6th, 2010 at 12:34am
  • Alex McKee

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    The four other boys share glances – they’ve all secretly had their suspicions that Caleb was gay – they just never shared them with each other.

    Well, then he most likely is!
    XD
    Friends have gaydars, everyone knows that!
    lol

    “What are you talking about?” Caleb mumbles. He bends over and picks up a stick and starts drawing in the dirt with it. He, sadly, reminds Alex of a 5 year old at the moment.

    AWE!
    That sound so cute.
    I wanna huggles him!
    XD

    Joel shrugs. “Well, it’s fine by me.”

    “Cool… I mean, the kid’s never played Halo.”

    “Are you serious? That’s kind of fucked up.”

    “That’s what I said.”


    XD
    Of all the things in the world... and they think that because he's never played Halo that that is fucked up?
    Wow... Just wow!

    ‘can u stop texting me so I can sleep?’

    XD
    He was secretly wishing Alex would text him.
    You know he was!

    Alex decides that they don’t need to know why he’s dressed nicely today.They don’t need to know that it’s all for Zack.

    'Cause you know, *cough*, It's not obvious!
    XD

    “Fine,” He decides. “But you seriously owe me!”

    YOU BETTER HAVE A HORRIBLE TIME ALEX!
    lol
    ^^

    “Doesn’t matter – you’ll have fun.”

    “Yeah… I guess you’re right.”


    *glares*
    You better not!

    “I like this seat better.”

    YAY!
    ^^
    XD

    Zack looks up at the mentioning of his name, a light blush evident on his cheeks. Alex smiles at him, and Miss Verde narrows her eyes, but says nothing more. She takes Alex’s paper from his desk and then retreats to her own.

    For some reason she's creeping me out.
    O.o
    AWE!
    Zacky blushed!

    “Jack asked him if he’s gay in first period.”

    GHLEDGUEIBQSDVDQWHJFUI{DNMQB SAHIG:PDBNEJWDV:LEGDQWEJ!!!!
    IDIOT!
    *smacks forehead*
    YOU JUST DON'T COME OUT AND ASK IT!
    GAH!

    :) Like it so far? y/n?

    *sarcasm*
    I hate it so much!
    XD
    joking!
    I LOVE IT!
    :D
    Update soon lovey!
    February 5th, 2010 at 11:37pm
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    i like it :D
    subscribing. :D:D:D
    February 5th, 2010 at 09:06pm
  • erratic

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    Oh no!
    I can only imagine how awkward Caleb must've felt when Jack asked if he was gay. That's a really personal question that should be discussed in private, rather than in school.

    As for Alex, he's really falling for Zack, and it's quite lovely.
    Even though he hasn't admitted it to himself, it's obvious that there's something there.
    February 5th, 2010 at 02:06pm
  • november rain;

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    Love it so far. x]]]]
    Another AWESOMETASTIC story. :D
    Seriously, all your stories are amazing.
    I'm sorry for such short comments - I always try to make my comments as long as I can, but there's nothing much to say, 'cause your work's always so perfect. d:
    Update soon! :]
    February 5th, 2010 at 11:10am
  • Cardboardheart

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    Zack is so cute, I really like this story =]
    February 5th, 2010 at 09:40am
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

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    i love this story tons!!
    its awesome!
    update soon!! XD
    February 5th, 2010 at 09:01am
  • Tattoo

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    Awesome update =]
    I'm loving it so far <3
    February 5th, 2010 at 06:02am
  • Desolate Earth

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    Defiantly like this A LOT so far! :)
    February 5th, 2010 at 04:56am
  • theused.

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    i waited all day for this update,
    and now my day is complete, thank you. =].
    February 5th, 2010 at 04:27am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awwwww this is soo sweet!
    hahahaha
    awww i kinda feel bad for caleb.... sorta, idk why! hehehe
    more soon!!
    February 5th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • Melly Jelly

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    Holy awesome story...
    Seriously, every sigle one of your stories are genius. THis one is no exception.
    I really am excited for this as it goes on.
    Zack and Alex seem like they would be, like, EXTREMELY cute... >.<
    Awwwww aha I'm swooning over the thought of it. <3
    Update again soon please!
    February 5th, 2010 at 04:02am
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    I liked the updates. I'm glad Alex and Zack are becoming friends =D

    I wouldn't have a problem making you a banner, if you want one.
    February 5th, 2010 at 03:54am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Wow this is really cool, I like it a lot
    February 5th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • Guy Ripley;

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    aww.
    February 5th, 2010 at 01:07am
  • Tattoo

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    I am really enjoying reading this story so far =]
    February 4th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • november rain;

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    Awh. I love Zack here.
    He's like, cute but snappy. x]
    And I love how Alex's so straightforward about everything, too.
    Update soon? :]
    February 4th, 2010 at 03:30pm
  • poisonedpills

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    seems like it's gonna be another winner :)
    February 4th, 2010 at 05:58am
  • Alex McKee

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    “Yeah, he didn’t know that he had a therapy session today until this morning. He should be back in a few minutes, though, so you can come in and wait for him.”

    Therapy?
    Hmm...
    The plot thickens...
    XD

    “Hey Alex…sorry I’m late. I was at the gym. My dad was late in picking me up.”

    Alex doesn’t buy Zack’s bullshit lie for a second – mainly because Nick had said Zack was at therapy, and also because his dad rolls his eyes as he locks the front door. Alex decides that he’ll call him out on the lie later.


    YOU BETTER CALL HIM OUT!
    lol

    Alex knows that if Jack or Rian or Caleb or Joel were in the room with him, they’d smack him and tell him that his question was completely rude. But Alex doesn’t care much. He just wants to find out a few things about Zack.

    I wanted to smack him...
    until he said it was for getting ot know Zack.
    That made it ALLLLLL better!
    XD

    “Stop fucking staring at me.”

    DAMN BOYS GOTTA TEMPER!
    XD
    I like it!

    “Okay, fine,” Zack says, putting down his pencil. “I’m dyslexic. I mix up words and numbers – I’m sure you know what it is. I just have to work really slow, or else I fuck it up.”

    ANOTHER TWIST TO DEH PLOT!
    Mwahahahahah!
    Yes I'm having fun with this...
    XD
    Update soon lovey!
    February 4th, 2010 at 03:19am