Her Flux - Comments

Im spechless. I honestly dont know what to say. I dont think I could come up with words that would do this story justice. You made me fall in love, you made me think, and you made me cry. This is incredible....this story is what glowed.

hahha it's an old story anyway. I am thinking of rewriting it or deleting it. Dunno why, people seem to like it. Maybe because I am the writer, I hate it. :)

Her Flux

" An daring idea appeared in her father’s head and his thick tawny brow arched as he looked at his beloved wife." - A Daring idea

And at one point, also in chapter two, you use 'weather' instead it should be Whether.

But although I'm just on the second chapter, I adore this story. It provides great imagery and detail. It's definitely got me on the edge of my seat :)

This story was amazing!
it should be published.. wow!

This story is adorable. I enjoyed reading it, though there were a few grammatical errors here and there. Interesting plot.

This was so amazing, I loved reading it. (:

Ok wow that has got be one of the most beautiful stories i have read on mibba after a long time- seriously
Throughout the story i fell in love with the characters, the scenery and the plot
honestly i thought story ended perfectly- it wasnt overly mushy or anything a lot of pain and suffering was evident throughout the whole story
seriously i finished the whole story in one go! hahaha and it's 3 in the morning now- but this story is definitely worth it!
and you are a very talented writer btw :)

I LOVED this. LOVED LOVED LOVED. Great job, really fantastic. =]

Wow. I love your story!!! It was really, really good!!! Your writing style is so… classy and cool! (sorry, random. haha)

This will forever be my favorite story on Mibba & I say that truthfully. I never been so enthralled by a story before and I'm extremely satisfied with yours. Though I must confess, the last few chapters I was an emotional wreck trying to read through the twists in the plot. I went through every emotion known to man-kind and it’s what made me love this story even more.

With that said, I found Her Flux well written and easy to read. The plot was so intricate and thoughtfully played out that I had to take breaks to prepare myself for certain scenes. Oh & thanks for making me think Nathanial and Erica would never be together. I was scared and near tears but I'm satisfied with the great ending you provided. Even though I feel like I've lost a friend...

Thank you for a wonderful read =]

I have been reading this story for a while now and this is my first comment on it. I never, and I mean never, leave comments on a story. It's very rare that I do, but you deserve one my friend. Very unique story. It wasn't some cliche, poorly written, uninteresting story and it actually had realistic conversations and reactions. Most stories don't.

I didn't know what was going to happen at first because it was so confusing, but everything unraveled at a slow and steady pace. It wasn't too quick or too slow. It built. Also, you used detail which is very important to me. I am all about the detail. And I liked that it was a happy ending so that's a plus. Good story. :)

Vilemina! I knew she wasn't as innocent as she seemed! I called that in one of my earlier comments. And then David! That rat. I honestly thought that Erica wouldn't be coming back at all. I'm so happy she came back though. OMGAH, I can't believe it's over. Your writing is still as fantastic as when you started this story. I'm anxious to read your next one. :D

I loved it! :D

Simply, wow.

I adore this story. I love the layouts. I marvel at Erica. I am simply in love with Nathaniel.

I knew Vilemina was bad! After the doctor said that Akil couldn't have caused the damage that Nathaniel suffered from Akil, I knew she was a bad cookie. Although, Lord David caught me off guard. I thought he was just a nasty, yet sometimes pleasant old man.

Wonderful ending, wonderful story, wonderful everything. :) It was a pleasure to read.

okay, I should have read this immediately, when I saw you had posted the last chapters, but I had no time, so I read them today...
okay, I'm a bit sad that this is the end of the story, but hey! I liked ths story really a lot!!! Nathaniel...I love him.
I hope you'll post Sentinels soon!!XD

I absolutely adored this story. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece of literature. :D

So when I found out there was an update I was overjoyed. However upon clicking the summary page I've come to realize this: What freakin' chapter am I on?

So it took me a while to find the right chapter, but after that It was magnificent.

I still have tears in my eyes. I truly was crying. Jeez I'm so emotional, it's embarrassing!

Anyways, I loved it and am a bit sad to see it finished but oh well. You was truly wonderful!

*Sniffle, sniffle* :')

I was like I know Nathaniel's uncle will betray her. Then no! It must Cecile! But hell it was Villemina! But Nathaniel's uncle was evil at the end. Loved the story till its endind! I will surely continue reading your stories, when summer vacation come. Too much work now.

There it is. THE END. :)